Ok , so there was this RP site that i tried out for. I submitted a POV for Victoria. Well i didnt get the part, i was sad. So i thought i would put it up here, see what i did wrong, then try out next time after i had got everyone's construtive critism. I thought it was a good plan. So here it is. Also just for people who wont guess this is in New Moon after Edward leaves, well right before he leaves Forks, he comes back one more time in my mind. ?To watch his angel. wow...that was kinda scary. N-E Ways lets move on!
Victoria's POV (point of view)
The house was just as James had described it. A light stretched out on the lawn from the upstairs window. The girl's window. How? How must I kill her? If she runs I will surely be able to catch up but when I do...how? I could start by...what was that? A slight rustle in the trees behind me caught my attention immediately. My senses told me it was not the wind. It was her boyfriend. I whirled on him. "What!?" I spat at him. This was my job, why the hell did he think he had a right to interfere?
"What are you doing, Victoria?" he asked me. Of course he knew exactly what I was doing. Maybe he changed his mind, decided the girl wasn't worth the trouble? He would make a nice addition to us-"I will never turn on her." he said, with such force I started to shrink back but stopped myself. Crap. I forgot about that. Him reading my mind all the time is not going to help James's plan. The plan he made before those savages killed him. They call themselves good but how could you kill someone's chosen one and be good? I was going to make him hurt even worse then I did. Maybe after she was dead and blue I would string her up on his porch. Ha, that would be amusing to watch. All the sudden his hands striked at me and winded themselves around my neck.
"You" he hissed "will stay away from her, or I will kill you as well just like I did James." he pushed me up against a tree his hands still trying to crush my windpipe. I was still able to talk though.
"What?! You killed Laurent too!! I will never let you rest!" I squeaked out.
"I didn't kill him, I don't know who did." he let go of me as his expression turned thoughtful. I took my chance. And fled.
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