Hello I am rewriting my first chapter and I may touch up my other chapters so I hope you like it!
I do not own Percy Jackson the fabulous but hated Rick Riordan does!
Chapter One
Unkown POV
I was running, running, and running. Runnning as fast as I could, trying to get away. This needed to stop. All of it. I was tired of running. I was tired of the monsters. I was tired of them chasing me.
I didn't know where I was and honestly I didn't care. I was tired, hungry, thirsty. But they kept on coming. I have been running ever since I left home. Well more like I was kicked out, my mom thought I was crazy. Well I thought she was crazy too so...
I was running up a hill now, towards a pine tree. I could faintly see a golden rug hanging from one of the branches. I also saw something else moving below the tree, an animal but was too preoccupied to care. One of the monsters roared, scaring the shit out of me, making me stumble.
That stumble was enough for the ugly monster behind me to take a swipe at me with its foot long claws. They grazed my side, adding to the collection of injuries I have. I hissed in pain, cursing myself for geting distracted.
A horn sounded and a bunch of kids, teenagers, ran out from behind the hill. They were all carrying swords and other weapons. They also all were wearing Greek armor. They looked like the Greek warriors from the movies.
The boy that led them was a handsom boy with messy black hair and sea-green eyes. He ran up to me and grabbed my arm lightly, but firmly, "Come on!" he yells over the sounds of battle. We run up the hill, passing kids slashing and stabbing monsters who explode into golden dust when hit fatally.
"Come on just a little more, we just have to make it to the tree!" He yells after I stumble a little. I quickly regain my balance with the boyys help and continue to run.
We finally make it past the tree with the boy only killing a few monsters, "Retreat, retreat! The girl is safe!" He yells. They all listen to him and retreat up the hill and past the tree. The monsters can't seem to pass the tree, must be a barrier.
I fall gracelessly to the ground, laying on mr back with my arms and legs spread out. I was breathing hard, my chest rising and falling fastly, "Oh my gods!" The boy exclaims, his face hovering over mine, "Are you okay? Are you hurt badly?" He asks.
I shake my head numly, trying to catch my breath. The boy sighs in relief and smiles a lopsided grin "Oh yea my name is Percy, Percy Jackson and welcome to Camp Half-Blood."
Hello I hope you like it please review! please please please! I will continue to make changes if needed and I would love for some advice or criticism.