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My world crumbled on the night of my fifth birthday. Everything was perfect, or so I thought. My friends were there with presents for me and smiles on their faces. My mom was in the kitchen putting the finishing touches on my birthday cake. Everything was as it should be. That's when I heard the screaming. It was my mother. I ran in yelling for her, but she turned to me and mouthed one word: Run. I never forget the look on her face. She looked so sad. She knew she was going to die but she wasn't scared. She died to save me. It was my job to make sure she didn't die in vain.
My dad, who I'd never met and whom my mom never mentioned, took me in. But my dad isn't just any ordinary guy my mom fell in love with. I know what your thinking. The regular stuff like: oh everyone thinks their dad is special and all that. But when I say it I mean really special. Like godly special and by that I mean my dad is Poseidon. Greek god of the seas. I know what your probably thinking: Greek gods, those are myths! I mean you've got to be joking right? ….. blah, blah, blah. But no I'm serious, and when I say serious I mean dead serious. He's my dad. Which gives me super awesome powers like: I can breathe under water, control water (that can be seriously cool), and heal myself by being in water. Pretty cool huh? But there's a down side to all the cool stuff. Demigods (that's what we're called) give off an aura. The more powerful the demigod the stronger the demigod aura. Our aura attracts monsters. That's where things get messy. See, I'm a daughter of one of the Big Three Gods. Which means I 'm really powerful. Which also means I attract more monsters than other demigods. That's not so good. Anyway, in case some of you are a bit slow and haven't realized this yet. Greek Mythology is real. Yeah, that would be all of the myths and legends about the Greek gods and heroes(demigods) are true. Yup, the whole enchilada.
It's been ten years since my dad took me to his under water palace. He raised me there and taught me about my heritage and what it means for me. He trained me to fight with celestial bronze, the weapons of the gods, They make monsters disintegrate. Since unfortunately you can't actually kill a monster. They just disintegrate and regenerate later on. Anyway, I've been bugging him forever to let up to the world above so I can get some field experience and go to school like a normal kid. Or as normal as you can get when your half Greek god. So I'm fifteen and he's finally letting me go up to the normal world. Not that his realm isn't normal. But, you know what I mean. So, anyway guess what happens when I get up to the beach there's a bunch of uglies waiting for me. What a great surprise! So I disintegrate the shit out of them and get on the subway to the Upper East side. Apparently, or at least from what dad said I'm supposed to meet someone there who will take me to Camp Half-Blood. I should probably tell you what that is. Camp Half- Blood is a safe place for demigods to train to fight monsters and face all the dangerous stuff that comes with being a demigod. There are magical borders around camp that keep monsters from getting in. I 'm going there to continue my training and hopefully, get a quest. See, if you get a quest you get to go do something to prove your worth as a hero. I'm hoping I get one. But I probably won't. Dad would never let me. But, anyway I have to actually make it to camp without dying first. So, I got off at the stop I was told to and I find see a dude wearing a baseball cap and baggy jeans, who also happens to be crippled; a satyr in disguise.
" So where to next?" I asked. I was pretty sure he knew where to go from here.
"We need a taxi," he said," By the way I'm ….," I didn't get his name though because just then a huge cyclopes came bumbling over and said
" Mmmm...yummy a tasty girl and a savory satyr,"