This is my first story that I'm uploading. I have written about half of
this story already but will upload it gradually when I get reviews. Also,
after uploading, I noticed that where I had put "returns" in, it did not
have those, so paragraphs will seem big with no breaks between speech
because of this.
The Factory
Chapter 1:
My name is Emily, and this is my story...
On the way home on a bright sunny Thursday afternoon, Joseph and Benj decided to take a long route and found an abandoned factory in the middle of a large forest. The trees surrounded the factory completely covering it from view outside the forest, the two were baffled that no-one had ever spoken of it. They entered the building cautiously moving step by step firstly between the large towering gates, held up by a crumbling wall with barbed wire hanging off where the wall had cracked. As they approached the door one of the gates creaked in the wind and fell off its hinges followed by two bricks, disintegrating on impact with the cold, cracked ground. "That scared the shit out of me!" Benj said in panic. "This place is falling apart." Joseph replied. The two decided to leave after they saw the dark room filled with dust and debris from the ceiling and walls.
Joseph was a very open person; he would speak about anything that was on his mind, he also thought he was god's gift to women, he could get very annoying. Benj was much quieter and much less annoying, he didn't think he was god's gift to women unlike his twin, though he did think he was very attractive, which I wouldn't disagree.
The following morning, the two left for school at normal time for them, arriving half an hour late, they went to their first lesson. Although they were about thirty minutes late the teacher didn't seem to mind that. The lesson was ICT and they talked to Ben about the mysterious factory, this was the first he'd heard of it too, and they agreed to meet after school. Next lesson, they spoke to me and Mathew, neither of us had heard about it. As the day progressed, Joseph and Benj became more and more distracted; thinking about the factory and more importantly why no-one had ever spoken about it. When it got to the end of the day Benj, Joseph and Ben met up, just as they were about to leave, me and Mathew arrived saying that we wanted to come along and see this factory...we never should have...
The Factory
Chapter 1:
My name is Emily, and this is my story...
On the way home on a bright sunny Thursday afternoon, Joseph and Benj decided to take a long route and found an abandoned factory in the middle of a large forest. The trees surrounded the factory completely covering it from view outside the forest, the two were baffled that no-one had ever spoken of it. They entered the building cautiously moving step by step firstly between the large towering gates, held up by a crumbling wall with barbed wire hanging off where the wall had cracked. As they approached the door one of the gates creaked in the wind and fell off its hinges followed by two bricks, disintegrating on impact with the cold, cracked ground. "That scared the shit out of me!" Benj said in panic. "This place is falling apart." Joseph replied. The two decided to leave after they saw the dark room filled with dust and debris from the ceiling and walls.
Joseph was a very open person; he would speak about anything that was on his mind, he also thought he was god's gift to women, he could get very annoying. Benj was much quieter and much less annoying, he didn't think he was god's gift to women unlike his twin, though he did think he was very attractive, which I wouldn't disagree.
The following morning, the two left for school at normal time for them, arriving half an hour late, they went to their first lesson. Although they were about thirty minutes late the teacher didn't seem to mind that. The lesson was ICT and they talked to Ben about the mysterious factory, this was the first he'd heard of it too, and they agreed to meet after school. Next lesson, they spoke to me and Mathew, neither of us had heard about it. As the day progressed, Joseph and Benj became more and more distracted; thinking about the factory and more importantly why no-one had ever spoken about it. When it got to the end of the day Benj, Joseph and Ben met up, just as they were about to leave, me and Mathew arrived saying that we wanted to come along and see this factory...we never should have...