So the original story of this was total. crap. I have decided to gradually rewrite it in the hopes that it will be better! Excuse the slow start... it gets better. bear with me now. A few name changes were made. Rosepaw is Creamfrost, and I'm deciding who to keep in the original and who to change. I've given Rosepaw brothers and not sisters as well, plus they have parts now. If you want to know who the original characters are, read the original, but I can tell you it's a waste of time. This story's starting slow, I know, but it'll get better. I swear.
*claps hands* HERE WE GO!
Rosepaw stretched and yawned. Sunlight streamed in through the den roof, illuminating her pale fur. She was sleepily grooming her fur when she remembered- today was her warrior assessment! She quickly finished and began prodding her siblings- Leafawand Thornpaw.
"Guys! Wake up! Wake uuuup!" When that proved ineffective, she sat down on top of Thornpaw and meowed, "APPRENTICES EAT FIRST TODAY!" loudly into his ear.
He jumped to his paws, wide awake at the mention of food.
"Ooh! Food! Where? Rosey! Where's the food?!" He raced into the clearing in search of the free food. While he was... busy... Rosepaw occupied herself with awakening Leafpaw. She jumped around the tom's nest. "Leafie! Leafie! Leafie! Heey! Silverpetal's asking for you! She says it's important!"
Starpaw stretched and yawned. "...don't call me leafie..." he muttered. Leafpaw had always been the slowest of the three. Then he started. "Silverpetal?" Silverpetal was a pretty female she-cat who had become a warrior a quarter moon ago. She also happened to be Leafpaw's crush. He ran out into the clearing.
Rosepaw stifled a laugh before walking into the clearing, fully groomed. Her brothers were glaring at her. "There's no free food!" accused Thornpaw. "And Silverpetal's not even here!" whined Leafpaw.
Rosepaw sighed. "You guys are soooo gullible. Really. But I had to wake you up somehow, since, y'know..." She leaned forward slightly. "...today's our warrior assesment and all, but, y'know..." She scoffed. "It's not like our entire future rests on this day..."
Her brothers immediately looked more alert. "That's TODAY?!" mewed Thornpaw. "Oh no! I was supposed to meet Sunstream at the brook to begin at sunrise!" He dashed off. Leafpaw looked after him. "Where did Whitefoot want me to meet him..." The tom looked lost momentarily. "OH yeah! The... the...fox dung!" Rosepaw tipped her head. "The... fox dung?"
Leafpaw shook his head like he was trying to clear it. "No! Shut up, you're screwing up my concentration. Ah... the..."
"...The ravine?" meowed Rosepaw.
"No, that can't be it... Whitefoot said..." Leafpaw's eyes widened, and he facepawed, growling, in frustration. "Dammit, Rosepaw, that's exactly what he said." He raced off as well, but came straight back, skidding in the dust. "Hey..." he panted. "Don't you have somewhere to be as well?" Rosepaw's eyes widened. "Oh! Oh yeah! Thanks, Leafpaw!" she called as she ran out of the camp. "Come on, Leafpaw!" she called over her shoulder. "
"Oh! right!" Her brother raced after her and they headed towards their respective locations.