Me: Hi there! I've decided to rewrite this story with some all-new characters!

Takiri: Was Yemi Hikari right about something?

Me: *glares*

Takiri: Shutting up now!

Me: also, the rating may change later, as the new characters have a dark and tortured past that will pop up occasionally.

Takiri: I thought they weren't gonna be Mary Sues this time.

Me: They aren't. Also, when the dialogue appears in -these- it means they're speaking in Dragoric, the language of the Dragonkin.


"So, when do you guys think they'll get here?"

"Who'll get here?"

Sarah, hearing this, sighed in aggravation, and turned to face the source of the question, namely, the Stilton twins, before replying with, "You know, the new kids."

It was a cool autumn morning Horseland, and a pair of new kids were expected to arrive soon. "Oh," They replied, glumly, "Them." "You don't seem too happy," Molly observed, "What's wrong? I thought you'd be excited to have two new 'admirers' at Horseland." Zoe sighed. "It's not that, I just think that, maybe there's too many coming at one time," She explained, "Besides, what if they think they're better than we are?" "Are you saying that you're feeling threatened by the thought of having more skilled riders?" inquired Alma, "Or do you just not want to share Bailey?" Cloe blushed, but before she could reply, a car and horse trailer arrived and two young females stepped out.

The first was a few inches taller than Will, with long, auburn hair tied into a spiky ponytail by what looked like a golden armband. Her lightly tanned complexion brought out her exotic teal eyes, one of which was hidden, along with most of the left side of her face, by white bandages, while the other eye was outlined in kohl with three additional dots of it below. A sharp white fang reached out of her mouth, glinting in the sunlight. She wore a forest-themed outfit, consisting of a dark green long-sleeved turtle neck, tan pants, brown combat boots, black fingerless gloves, two black leather belts with a chain hanging from them, a thick leather choker that completely covered her throat, and a leaf-shaped, emerald pendant hung around her neck. "Hello. My name is Flora," She greeted.

The other girl had long sandy blond hair cascading down her shoulders, striking golden eyes, and skin as pale as the moon itself. She was Her outfit was night-themed, consisting of the same thing, but she wore black in place of green. The only other difference in their outfits, was that she had a silver moon-shaped charm hanging from her neck, and the fact that her entire face could be seen."Hi," She chirped, "I'm Luna!"

After the other girls and Will introduced themselves, Flora and Luna called their horses, Desert Rose and Spiritsong, out of the trailer with a simple, four-note melody, not even needing to put a halter on. Desert Rose was an Arabian mare with sparkling emerald eyes, a chestnut coat, a white blaze and socks, and a dark brown mane and tail with dark forest green highlights, and Spiritsong was a black snowflake appaloosa stallion with a white pattern and dark, gleaming amethyst eyes, and he had a mane and tail that were as black as night with shining golden Highlights.

"Whoa," Aztec gasped from the paddock, "That mare is beautiful!"
"Don't forget that stallion," Pepper whispered, "Hello, Mr. Handsome!"
"I dunno. He looks pampered, and I'll bet he's arrogant, too."
"You shouldn't base opinions on how they look, Chili," Shep chastised, as the everyone walked into the barn, with Will offering to lead their horses, only for it to be politely declined as Desert Rose and Spiritsong simply walked right into their stalls, with only a simple hand signal needed. After closing the doors, the humans began to show Flora and Luna around.

"-Did you see those other horses, Spiritsong?-" Desert Rose asked once they were out earshot.
"-Yes, I did. Perhaps we should introduce ourselves.-"
"-Yeah, I guess. But what if the humans hear us?-"
"-If we're quiet and quick,-" Spiritsong assured her as he opened his stall door, "-they won't.-"
"-Alright, but if we get caught, I'm blaming you.-"

As the two exited the barn, taking care not to be seen, they walked over towards the other horses. Seeing movement out of the corner of her eye, Scarlet turned to look at them, "Hey, shouldn't you two be in your stalls?"

"You needn't worry, we'll be back before anyone notices," Spiritsong whispered, "We're just here say hello. My name is Spiritsong."

"I'm Desert Rose."

"Oh. Well, alright, I'm Scarlet. Nice to meet you."

"Hi. My name's Calypso."

"Hi. I'm Aztec."

"I'm Button."

"My name's Chili."

"I'm Pepper."

"Name's Jimber."

"I'm Shep, and this is Teeny and Angora. Welcome to Horseland."

"It is truly an honor to meet you all," Spiritsong bowed, "but we must be getting back to our stalls. our owners are getting near."

"Alright, bye."

"Farewell for now."

And with that, the two horses went back to their stalls, closing the door behind them.