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This is my version of 'The Angel Experiment'

Full Summary:

Angel has a ulterior motive for asking Max to go strawberry picking, that fateful morning in The Angel Experiment. Angel has joined the school to help them capture Max. So the Erasers capture Max, instead of Angel and then Angel takes over the flock. The flock basically loose themselves and don't do any thing. After a couple of years of Angel being leader the flock find out Angel is working for the school and kick her out and go in search for Max.

Meanwhile in the school Max is being experimented on daily. She meets five other bird kids, Lauren, Jordan, Mel, Liam and Charlotte. Together they escape and they appoint Max leader. One day they find Max's old flock losing badly to some Erasers and they help them out. The old flock explain to Max what happened, and they combine flocks eventually.

Then Angel returns…and she wants what Max has.

That's as much as I'm going to tell you for now.

I also changed some of the flocks ages a little. They also all have their powers now they developed early.

Max POV

So here we are me and my flock out in a strawberry field, picking strawberries.

And yes, you read it right I did say flock.

You see me and my flock aren't entirely human. We are actually 98% human and 2% avian, and that 2% makes a lot of difference let me tell you.

You want to know how much of a difference?

We have wings.

And we have air sacks, our blood has Nuclei, our hearts beat faster than an average human, our bones are more hollow, we weigh less than humans, but we are much stronger and faster, and we are basically made of muscle.

Okay, let me explain. When we were younger me and my flock lived in dog cages at a place called The School.

Now your probably thinking that I'm over reacting that a school wouldn't really put people in cages because it's against the law you are right but you are only right about normal schools where children go to learn, play and such.

Well I'm not talking about that kind of school. The School where we grew up gave us wings, kept us cooped up in dog cages and did horrible experiments on us all day, every day.

We were there for many years, although it was a long time every experiment they have ever done to me I still remember, they are all etched on my memory and will be for life.

How ever long that may be. We'll never know.

They may have given us expiration dates maybe not.

There were also other experiments at the school.

The Erasers.

The Ugly, blood thirsty Erasers.

Yeah, I know what your probably thinking 'Oh My God why is she scared of a rubber?'

Erasers are actually Human-Lupine hybrids. Basically part man, part wolf.

They are the School's guards and executioners.

They basically keep all the experiments in line and the experiments have to fight them as part of the tests that the white coats, (white coats are what we call the scientists that work in the school) , make them do.

The only reason me and my flock aren't still at that awful place, is because of a good white coat, Jeb.

Basically he got us out and took us away to live in the mountains.

About two years ago he disappeared. We all know he's dead but we don't talk about it.

Now with Jeb being gone I took over the role as leader since I am the oldest.

Now the flock, there are six of us. There's me, Max the leader like I just said. I am sixteen, I have blondish brown hair and brown eyes and I'm about 5'9.

Then there's Fang, my second in command he's also sixteen and he's got a sort of olive skin tone and dark eyes and jet black hair. He's a sort of strong and silent type. He's only four months younger than me but already a few inches taller, and he's my best friend.

Then Iggy, He's my third in command, he's sixteen too. He's pale with sort of strawberry coloured hair. The other thing about Iggy is he's blind, the white coats messed up on an experiment of trying to get him x-ray vision or something. He's also a lot taller than me even though he is around six months younger.

Nudge is next, she is thirteen. She has sort of mocha coloured skin with big brown eyes. We all call her the Nudge channel all Nudge all the time. When she starts talking she basically can't stop until someone stops her.

Then there's The Gasman or Gazzy, he is eight with big, round, shiny blue eyes and short spiky blond hair. We call him The Gasman because he has something seriously wrong with his digestive system. Also he and Iggy just love to blow up my stuff.

Lastly, there's Angel, my baby. Well not literally my baby but I practically raised her. She's six with blond curly hair, Gazzy is her brother, they are the only blood related siblings in the flock, but we still consider ourselves family.

We also have some special powers; I can fly at super speeds or 'Warp drive' as Gazzy calls it, and I can breathe under water.

Fang can fade into his back round so we can't see him unless he moves and he can also breathe under water.

Iggy can feel colours and see things if it's got a white back round.

Nudge can make metal come to her like a magnet and can talk forever.

Gazzy has atomic farts and can mimic any voice or sound perfectly, you wouldn't believe the amount of trouble he has caused with that gift.

Then there's Angel.

Angel basically hit the genetic jackpot she can read minds, speak in other peoples mind, talk to fish, breathe under water and change her appearance, and there's probably more she hasn't told us too.

So now we are back at where we started, strawberry picking.

This morning angel suddenly decided that she wanted to go strawberry picking and asked me to go, and of course I couldn't say no I don't know why I just physically couldn't, so I said all of us would go because Angels been creeping me out lately.

She has been sort of staring at me with a peculiar expression on her face.

But of course when I ask her what's wrong it's nothing, but she does it a lot.

I'm not going to get worked up over it though, she's probably just being a whiny six year old.

Angel POV

Yes! Yes! Yes!

My mind control powers worked on Max.

I didn't really know if they would because she has mind blocks.

But it worked! I'm so happy. No one else in the flock knows I have mind control and I intend to keep it that way.

I can't wait to get rid of her.

Why? You may ask.

Basically it's because she has everything. She's smart, beautiful, loved by her family and friends, and also loved by someone in a completely different way. And that's what I want.

I bet she doesn't know about a certain someone loving her though.

Do you want to know who loves her?

It's Fang!

I mean it's so obvious to the rest of us even Iggy and he's blind, but Max is just missing the signs completely.

I don't know why he loves her though, he should love me.

Yeah I know I'm a six year old in love with a sixteen year old.

But he loves her.

That's why I have to get rid of her. The School only want her anyway after they have her they will leave us all alone to live in peace.

And when I'm old enough Fang will love me.

The rest of the flock being here will make things a little more difficult.

They love Max and will fight for her, and when she's gone they will be broken hearted.

I don't really want to hurt the flock, but this is what has to be done, But I won't be sad about hurting Max.

Ah ha I hear Eraser thoughts, they were already thinking of ways to kill Max.

Those thoughts made me happy.

Only five minutes…..

Oooooo Evil Angel!

I Know that Angel loving Fang is a bit weird but I have a theory about that it will come in a bit later.

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