Chapter 21 (Remastered)

by trevorb221

My long term project of taking everything from the giver and cutting it off at chapter 21, then making it up myself from about there. This is my first story part. I WILL edit it in the future if I am told to. PS this is not a port over in the giver just using different terminology, it may seem like that right now but the plot will become different.

Hello people of FanFic, this is gonna be my first "story" ever on here, and its gonna be about the Giver. It is going to be a remaster of chapter 21 and beyond, and disregards any logic of the sequels. If you like my idea, tell me, and maybe if enough people want it, I'll add on to it. It starts from chapter 21 but will not have any major plot changes until later on. If you like this idea i will try my best to make more on to it. That's all for now, see you, anyone who views this. Enjoy.

Chapter 21 (Remastered)

This might work, it might actually work, Jonas thought to himself throughout the seemingly endless day. But it wouldn't work the way Jonas expected at all.

That evening, Jonas was forced to flee dangerously early. The sky was barely dark, but he knew he had to leave this, he knew that work crews would still be out for another hour, but it didn't matter. Jonas could avoid them with ease. He moved creepily, like a cat stalking it's pray (which of course he knew about from a recently received memory), sneaking among the shadows, nearing closer and closer to the empty central plaza. beyond the plaza he could see the Annex in front of, of course, the House of the Old, slignly outlined in the night sky by the dim light. Jonas looked around, he could not stop now. There wasn't any time. He needed as many minutes as he could have, and any minute wasted would just set him that much father back in his scheme.

I hope this segment remade is long enough and is in compliance with the terms of posting! That's all for now, thanks for reading!