The Jaguar Elite
Prologue
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hi, this is my first fanfic so I would really appreciate it if you would tell me if it is good or not.
It was a cold Halloween night. This was the same night Lilly and James Potter had died. 2 babies were crying when all of a sudden a giant hairy man named Hagrid came. " Hmm, well here's Harry." noticed Hagrid who did not see little Morgan Potter, Harry's twin sister. "Hagrid, give Harry to me" said a just appeared Sirius Black. " No, he's goin to Dumbledore." said Hagrid proudly. "Fine, then at least take my bike" ordered the handsme, black-haired Sirius. And off Harry and Hagrid went. When Sirus was about to walk away he heard the crying of a baby. " Oh my god, Morgan!! Here, I'll take care of you" said Sirius. And off they went to Sirius's house.
2 weeks later......
Sirius was feeding little Morgan. Morgan had become quite attached to Sirius and thought that he must be truly her father. She could start to talk now. Her favorite animal was definatly the jaguar, their toughness was powerfull and could not be beaten Bang! Bang! the door pounded. " Open up Black, we know you have the babe!" cried Death Eater voices. * Must hide her * thought Sirius. So him and Morgan snuck out of the house and Sirius had an idea. * Hogwarts would be the safest place to hide. Even though I'll miss Morgan greatly, I will come and find her again. * thought Sirius.
When they reached Hogwarts and entered Professor Dumbledore's office. " Professor, I'm being surrounded by Death Eaters" cried Sirius, " I need you to take care of the most precious thing I own. " and what is that?" said Dumbledore. Sirius answered " Morgan Potter" I thought she was dead?" cried Dumbledore"
"no, she survived. So will you take care of her for me?"
" yes, I will"
" may I say goodbye first?
" yes"
Sirius walked up to Morgan and put a thin gold chain with a jaguar charm on it around her neck. " Now Morgan, I have to go away for a while, but I will be back for you, I promise.
" do you have to go daddy?" cried little Morgan.
" yes, but I will be back. Be like the jaguar and be brave. I will come after you, I promise.
" NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" cried morgan
11 years later..........
A/N so should I go on? I need at least 3 reviews or I will not go on. I hope you liked it!!!
Prologue
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hi, this is my first fanfic so I would really appreciate it if you would tell me if it is good or not.
It was a cold Halloween night. This was the same night Lilly and James Potter had died. 2 babies were crying when all of a sudden a giant hairy man named Hagrid came. " Hmm, well here's Harry." noticed Hagrid who did not see little Morgan Potter, Harry's twin sister. "Hagrid, give Harry to me" said a just appeared Sirius Black. " No, he's goin to Dumbledore." said Hagrid proudly. "Fine, then at least take my bike" ordered the handsme, black-haired Sirius. And off Harry and Hagrid went. When Sirus was about to walk away he heard the crying of a baby. " Oh my god, Morgan!! Here, I'll take care of you" said Sirius. And off they went to Sirius's house.
2 weeks later......
Sirius was feeding little Morgan. Morgan had become quite attached to Sirius and thought that he must be truly her father. She could start to talk now. Her favorite animal was definatly the jaguar, their toughness was powerfull and could not be beaten Bang! Bang! the door pounded. " Open up Black, we know you have the babe!" cried Death Eater voices. * Must hide her * thought Sirius. So him and Morgan snuck out of the house and Sirius had an idea. * Hogwarts would be the safest place to hide. Even though I'll miss Morgan greatly, I will come and find her again. * thought Sirius.
When they reached Hogwarts and entered Professor Dumbledore's office. " Professor, I'm being surrounded by Death Eaters" cried Sirius, " I need you to take care of the most precious thing I own. " and what is that?" said Dumbledore. Sirius answered " Morgan Potter" I thought she was dead?" cried Dumbledore"
"no, she survived. So will you take care of her for me?"
" yes, I will"
" may I say goodbye first?
" yes"
Sirius walked up to Morgan and put a thin gold chain with a jaguar charm on it around her neck. " Now Morgan, I have to go away for a while, but I will be back for you, I promise.
" do you have to go daddy?" cried little Morgan.
" yes, but I will be back. Be like the jaguar and be brave. I will come after you, I promise.
" NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" cried morgan
11 years later..........
A/N so should I go on? I need at least 3 reviews or I will not go on. I hope you liked it!!!