Hey peoples
So first of all this is my first fanfic (woo woo applause applause) so I would really appreciate some constructive advice because I'm a bit confused on some subjects, compliments are also good :) but please no plain old insults, I'm not a professional author or anything (if I were I probably wouldn't be on this site)
Second of all am I supposed to do the disclaimer thing every chapter or only once letting me know would also be appreciated.
Thirdly, no worries my other chapters will be no where near this short this is just the prologue.
Anyways enough with my babbling and on with the story.
Disclaimer: Again If I owned this story I wouldn't be wright fanfics about it...
Prologue
Night seemed to fly by as I ran, wind that hadn't been there before now wiping against me, pulling at my hair and cloths steeling my breath as a reward for pushing me forward. My legs and chest were aching and burning but I had to ignore that concentrate on not even where I was headed but where I was escaping, yet again from. But now I knew, knew what they did to us, what they were gonna do to me I knew this time couldn't be temporary even the time id managed to pull of a few years they still found me like they always did, hunted me down and that couldn't happen this time, I knew about that list and I knew if I stayed where or if I stayed any longer they would eliminate me. Though according to what Liz had said I was surprised Id manged this long before they decided. My breath was now hitching coming in rigid pants. My chest felt like it was being repeatedly stabbed, my legs were starting to go numb and my head was racing with thoughts that seems to overlap and collide giving me a massive headache on top of everything else. Finally when there were quite far behind I saw it, the perfect hiding place, a nightclub, busy, crowded, full of moving body's and load noises, I could hide out there for a while, rest a bit and give myself time to think. I was so exhausted and relives I didn't notice the screaming that started shortly after I walked in.