Bleach Fan fiction, by Ratiasu
I'd like to say a thank you firstly to Elemental Hero Raeven whoinspired me to write this fanfic in one boring chemistry lesson. He's also my proof-reader and has literally messed up my story-line three times during the planning. Also he created three of the new characters. Thank you to one of my friends at school in particular who allowed me to kill his character multiple times for comedy (you'll see after the second part starts). Also thank you to other friends who allowed me to use their names later on in the story and who helped me with descriptions and other minor details.
This story will happen after Aizen is defeated in Hueco Mundo and 20 years pass by. A lot of things happen in that time my arcs and Aizen's defeat. I will explain them all now. Firstly, there are many changes to the division captains and vice-captains. I will list the characters that I will use below. I will put 'NEW' by all the additional characters that I have created. This story will be mostly based around them. I will list all divisions and changes, but only a few of the characters will have a big part will actually take part in my story. Furthermore, Ichigo and his friends won't be appearing in my story, after Hueco Mundo they went back to the real world and went on with their normal lives. This story happens in Soul Society and the real world, (revealed later on) and an alternate dimension.
I apologise for my tenses, I can never do them properly, then again you could call it my style of writing.
P.S. Fell free to skip ahead to the prologue and the rest of the story and if there's someone or something you don't understand check back on the information here. Also a new chapter will be uploaded every week, how frequently and how many, well i don't know, I just know they'll be at least one a week. If you find any mistakes or erros please tell me in reviews, thank you. Hope you like it, enjoy.
This story is on going and will take me a VERY long time and probably for you a long time of reading, i'm planning at the least 5 parts to it.
Information
Divisions of the Gotei 13
Div. 1 – Captain – Hisaigo Ukimori NEW (Unknown character as of yet who wields a unknown based blade, only recently appeared and taken over).
Vice - Chōjirō Sasakibe
Div. 2 – Captain - Soifon (Commander of the Special Forces and Executive Militia)
Vice - Marechiyo Ōmaeda
Div. 3 – Captain – Raven Ruhodesu NEW (Nickname: Rae) (Male. A young fellow uses scythe based blade. Twin of Naomi, friends with Crystal)
Vice – Izuru Kira
Div. 4 – Captain - Retsu Unohana
Vice - Isane Kotetsu
Div. 5 – Captain – Hikari Uera NEW (Nickname: Kari) (Female. Friends with Ratiasu, Ketu and Haruka)
Vice Captain – Naomi Ruhodesu NEW (Raven's twin sister, friends with Crystal)
Momo Hinamori was ashamed that she had idolized Aizen, and in the end she quit being a soul reaper and disappeared and didn't stop even when Toshiro tried to help her.
Unranked Soul Reaper – Haruka Rose (Nickname: Rika) NEW (Female. Can use both shikai and bankai, but never shows it until necessary, my 'sort of' main character. Friends with Ratiasu, Hikari and Ketu)
Div. 6 – Captain - Byakuya Kuchiki
Vice Captain: Renji Abarai
Div. 7 – Captain – Ketu Zakura NEW (Nickname: Ket) (Male. Has a dragon shikai. Friends with Ratiasu, Hikari and Haruka)
Vice Captain - Tetsuzaemon Iba
Sajin Komamura chased after Tosen during the Hueco Mundo arc, and he disappeared afterwards with Tosen.
Div. 8 – Captain - Shunsui Kyōraku
Vice Captain - Nanao Ise
Div. 9 – Captain - Crystal Kyoraku NEW (Female, reappeared and took over div. 9, cousin of Shunsui.)
Vice Catain - Shūhei Hisagi
Div 10. - Captain - Tōshirō Hitsugaya
Vice Captain - Rangiku Matsumoto
Div. 11 – Captain - Kenpachi Zaraki
Vice Captain - Yachiru Kusajishi
3rd seat - Ikkaku Madarame
5th seat - Yumichika Ayasegawa
Div. 12 - Captain: Mayuri Kurotsuchi
Vice Captain: Nemu Kurotsuchi
Div. 13 – (Standing) Captain – Rukia Kuchiki
Vice Captain – Ratiasu NEW (nickname: Terri) (Female. Friends with Ketu, Hikari and Haruka)
Ukitake became even sicker after fighting against the arrancars, so he quit the captain post, also the two third seats, since admiring him so much also quit so they can look after him. Rukia, is now the standing captain because she has no bankai, and Byakuya finally stopped being so protective of her and let her have this post.
Background information on Hikari, Haruka, Ketu and Ratiasu
In soul society, two girls lived closely as friends both from well off families, they were Hikari and Haruka, who when they were small thought their names sounded alike and became friends. They both also lived in Rukungai, but in a district far away from Raven and the others.
One day when they were out on the streets, they noticed a baby boy lying on the ground. Out of the goodness of their heart they took him home and fed him and looked after him.
After a few years, Hikari and Haruka entered Sereitei and both graduated extremely fast, though Haruka still graduated faster and both at div. 7 to begin with, and leaving poor Ketu behind.
Hikari and Haruka both received training from Sajin who thought they both had potential, then after both of them achieving Shikai they thought they'd learnt enough and started making fun of Sajin's mask and keep asking him to take it off. Sajin, in the end, got annoyed and moved them under Aizen.
But after only a few days under Aizen's division, they both disappeared, no one found out why. Only later (after hueco mundo) to learn that Hikari have masterd bankai and Hisaigo, needing a captain immediately placed Hikari as captain of div. 5 and said nothing about Haruka, so unwilling to leave Hikari, Haruka begged Hisaigo to let her be in div 5 with Hikari. In the end Hisaigo gave way and let her go as an unranked member of div. 5. (Haruka also knows bankai and shikai but she won't show it).
Meanwhile, Ketu is now bored everyday, so after a while he meets a young girl named Ratiasu, who was from a poor family at the time and takes a liking to her. They became friends, very close friends and Ketu started calling Ratiasu Terri just out of randomness at the start, but for some reason the name stuck, so everyone who knows Ratiasu now calls her Terri.
A few years go by and Ratiasu and Ketu entered soul reaper academy. Ketu was able to graduate straight away because he had raw talent (like Toshiro) and was offered a seat in the thirteen divisions but he decided against it and stayed behind to help out Rataisu. Both went under division 13 when graduated, because Ratiasu became friends with Rukia, so they followed her. After a while, Ketu got bored of Ukitake illness and constant absence all the time, so he decided to leave for good because he isn't getting any action, i.e. no fighting. He disappears; Ratiasu who liked and loved (they developed a close relationship during the times they were together) him runs after Ketu and disappears with him. They both reappear a few years later and seems very close together, also both achieved bankai over the length of time they were away together. They came back to join back the Gotei 13. Hisaigo knowing that having them two together might cause problems due to overprotection by both of them, separated them two. He placing Ketu as cpt of div. 7 and Ratiasu vice-cpt of div. 13, and surprisingly they didn't argue with him. However, little does he know that Ratiasu and Ketu meet almost every night on the rooftop of Ketu's house.
Background information on Raven, Naomi and Crystal
Crystal had been playing outside one day in higher Rukungai, but got lost, and
eventually wandered somewhere deep in lower Rukungai.
Living in a bad bit of Rukungai, Raven and (twin) sister Naomi fend for themselves until they find a lost girl (i.e. Crystal) who belongs to a family in a good part, so they take her back.They grew up friendly and entered Seireitei together. All placed in 5th. Raven and Crystal were slightly suspicious of Aizen's behaviour when around vice captain (Gin), so Aizen moved them to 11th. Naomi was very idolising of Aizen. (much like Momo though to a lesser degree).
Afterwards, Raven made friends with Ikkaku and Yumichika (and Tetsuzaemon) who trained with him, and Crystal became friends with Yumichika (mainly for beauty tips). When they learned all they could, they asked Kenpachi for a transfer, who agreed.Raven moved to 13th, as Jushiro wanted to train him (talent was well known, he had a shikai and was unseated). After Jushiro couldn't carry on, account of his tuberculosis, Raven moved to 8th, Shunsui took over training. Crystal had moved to 7th in the first place and quickly moved to vice. Naomi had worked her way up to 3rd/4th seat in 5th.
Shunsui then couldn't teach him anymore (Raven acquiring bankai), and Byakuya took an interest in Raven after seeing him fight, so took him as 6th vice. (this is a time when Izuru, Momo, Renji and Rukia were still in academy).Raven one night sees Aizen and Gin discussing things, and Aizen notices releases shikai and hypnotises nearby shinigami to believe Raven slaughtered a load of shinigami, who is then trailed and subsequently banned from Soul Society. (But Yamamoto gives him the job as guardian of the gates of hell). Crystal is outraged and leaves. Naomi is horrified that Raven would blame Aizen and disowns him.Later, during Hueco Mundo, Yamamoto asks Raven back, and Crystal makes a reappearance. Then they are decided as captains of 3rd and 9th, respectively, by majority vote by Yamamoto, Jushiro, Shunsui, Kenpachi, Sajin, Byakuya and Mayuri, and because Yamamoto allowed him to come back, Raven has held a deep respect for him, and the place of Division 1 captain (until Hisaigo appeared so quickly after Yamamoto's death). Toshiro, Retsu and Soifon give it the all clear and they become captains during the big arrancar/soul reaper battle.
Shunsui allowed his cousin to be cpt. because he was confident in her abilities.
Raven and Naomi were originally in a poor family who got murdered, them included. They lost their parents in Soul Society, as many kids do. That murderer happened to become a hollow.
Character Descriptions
Hisaigo: Wears uniform normally, usually a quiet person. Always seems to be calm and collected. Dark brown eyes with dark brown hair. Shows no emotion at all. Short sleeves. He is never seen outside his office in division 1 and very little is known about him. Height – 187cm.
Haruka: Wears normal soul reaper uniform. Long blonde hair, with a butterfly clip holding it in place. Has blue eyes, always looks pale because her skin color is very white. She always wears a bracelet around her wrist of attached to the bracelet are little birds and butterflies and flowers. She is a kindhearted person, never lets anyone down, and always helps out if she can. She is always looking out for her friends, is always modest and tries to hides her skills. She uses a sword called 'Hidoragon' it's abilities will be told in the story, and loves to play shogi against Hikari. A bit lazy and can fall asleep unexpectedly at times. Also she seems tired most of the time. Height – 176cm.
Hikari: Wears normal uniform and if she can, will avoid wearing her captain uniform because she doesn't want to look like she's better than everyone else. Her skin is pale coloured, but not quite white. She has long hair, half-dyed yellow and the other half orange with two hair pins holding them so they don't block her eyes. She carries her sword by her waist. She also has blue eyes. Has a usual attitude, can get emotional if she upset someone. She's usually a very nice person to talk with and hang out, but she will hurt you if you get her mad, although that doesn't happen very often. She's mostly a relaxed person always tries to stay calm and think things through, never rushes into anything, always has a plan, she's very clever. She has always enjoyed a quiet game of chess/shogi in her spare time. Height - 168cm.
Ketu: Wears usual uniform except always has the captain uniform draped over his shoulder. Always wears a necklace of a dragon (given to him by Ratiasu). Medium length black hair straightened with a long fringe that doesn't cover his eyes. He has brown eyes. He has a carefree nature, likes to be praised. Most times he's a soft person but in times of combat he is very vicious and doesn't show mercy. He never tires out and doesn't sleep a lot. His favourite pass times include walking round seireitei and greeting everyone, enjoying a nice chat. Also enjoys star gazing at night with Ratiasu. Ketu has a weird personality, he has never once shown anger but he's always a strong fighter. He's skinny and doesn't look at all strong and will kill you if you underestimate him. He's also a very caring person wouldn't let anyone down, though can be a bit of a loner at times. He would always look out for the people he works with even if he hates them. He's especially protective of Ratiasu. His sword is carried on his back (similar to Histugaya). Height -179cm.
Ratiasu: (Always called Terri by friends) Usual uniform, only puts on her vice captain arm band when required. ALWAYS wears a vermilion coloured scarf around her neck. Has long sleek silver hair, with nothing holding it in place. She wears a necklace of a dragon given to her by Ketu. Wears earrings when not fighting, strips of red ribbon dangling from the earring. She's a peaceful type of person, always tried to avoid fights when possible and hates it. Her kimono is tied together by a large vermillion ribbon. She has heterochromia as well, in which one of her eyes is vermillion (yes vermillion again, woo) and the other blue. She has amazing healing abilities and can heal just about any wound. She also, like Ketu, has a carefree nature and always seems happy (can easily get angry when faced with criminals though or cowards) and can be seen happily skipping around on the hillsides. Sometimes lazy and prefer sleeping rather than doing anything. She's too soft for her own good sometimes and shows too much mercy. So she's perfected her flash step ability so she can run away when she can't handle killing the enemy. Her combat abilities are mainly on speed (Just to put it into perspective for you, her speed is about 7 times the speed of Ichigo when he's in Hollow form) she can hit you 100 times in less than 2 seconds and you wouldn't even realize what has happened. She is crazy about the colour vermillion. She enjoys pointlessly wandering seireitei in mornings and afternoons and stargazing with Ketu at night-times. She hates making people wait and she hates waiting for people. She also hates letting people down. Her sword, like Ketu, is carried on her back. Height - 170cm.
Raven: Wears normal captain uniform, though the colours are mainly black. (the only white is the division number on the back of his (haori is it?)). He wears a sleeveless shirt thing too (like Tosen). He also wears black, fingerless gloves, and has long black hair, and near black eyes. Hair style similar to Ukitake. Raven has essentially a noble-personality (like Byakuya, who doesn't believe in those who disrespect higher authorities), but also from his time in 11th, gets that wide smile if he fights a fight worthy of him. He is very rarely showing emotion, as he blames himself for not attempting to protect his family. He also has dual weapon skill from his time with Ukitake and Kyoraku, which he uses from time to time with a spare katana (which just happens to be Shinso, won from Gin Ichimaru in the hueco mundo arc) in his bankai's sealed sheath. Height – 186cm
Naomi: Wears normal vice captain armband, and the division number on her arm, like others. She also has long black hair and near black eyes. Her hair is brushed to the sides of hair face, as to not get in her eyes during combat. Naomi has a wild personality, in opposite to her twin brother, and is normally in a good mood, but holds deep tragedy for what happened for her death. Her time in 5th made her skilled at kido, and also somewhat skilled in swordsmanship, allowing even a bankai to be formed, however it overpowers her up till now. She is also very trusting to her brother, now that he was shown to be correct, and feels sorry for betraying him. Height – 184cm
Crystal: Wears normal captain uniform, but has a more white motif, the only black being her number on her back. Also has gold lining on her outfit, to show her noble status. Has a condensed soul-silver hairclip used to keep her hair out of her eyes. She has long blonde hair and blue eyes (which doesn't look anything like Shunsui). Crystal is of a noble line, so does act "holier than thou" at times, but does care for everyone and everything, even Mayuri, the crazed psycho that he is. She will get angered easily though, and her bankai can purify anything created by despair (hollows, arrancar). In many aspects, she's like her cousin Shunsui, (happy-go-lucky etc.) but like him, can back it up with pure skill and power. She also tries to throw subtle hints at Raven to take interest in her, but he's too emotionless to notice, until something happens. Like Raven however, she enjoys a good fight, from her time in 11th, and so dons the crazed smile when she has a close battle.
Sword information
Hikari: Rozehana – Rose petal (Attack – Ben dansu) pronounced 'rozana'
Shikai – Released by the incantation 'blossom' nothing changes to the blade of handle, small blades start rising from the guard and encircles the main blade like petals on a flower. She can fire them out continuously and they will never run out.
Gosai rozehana – red rose petal (Attack – hanayaiba)
Bankai – The sword shatters and splits into thousands of little red blades, with fly above her, and she has full control over them, to use as attack weapons. However these blades have 7 times the firepower and speed of her normal shikai release form.
Ketu: Kazedoragon – Dragon of wind (Attack – rezataifuu)
Shikai – Command for release 'fly' the sword disappears and reappears as a dragon's head above him. He can command the dragon as his weapon and the wind defends him as he has no weapon to hold. His attack allows him to shoot wind at the opponent like sharp blades.
Kazetatsujin – Master of wind (Attack – kazeken)
Bankai – Dragon grows 8 times in power and takes the shape of a real dragon, and Ketu is given full control of the wind which he can also use as a weapon or shield. All commands are given by his hand movements.
Haruka: Hidoragon – Dragon of light (Attack – shiraenkouya)
Shikai – Phrase for release is 'Brighten the darkness', the upper part of hilt changes to a dragon's head. Handle grows longer by 5 cm and becomes thinner and turns red. Blade extends by 10 cms, also becomes thinner and turns red. The sword is able gathers spirit energy from its surroundings and fires them out in a powerful concentrated white beam (like an arrow, but not quite).
Terasuhidoragon – Illuminated dragon of light (Attack – shiraenkouyari)
Bankai – It's an unusual bankai, because the appearance doesn't change at all but everything, speed, power etc. increases by 10 fold. She hasn't actually used her bankai except for practice, so no one knows she has it, same goes for shikai (except for her friends that is).
Ratiasu: Doragonsumiyaka – Dragon of speed (Attack – kyokudochisoku)
Shikai – Command for release is 'flash'. A weird shikai because nothing appears to happen, but actually, something does. Her speed does up by 3 times and her kido abilities are boosted, it's attack 'kyokudochisoku' makes Ratiasu flash step immediately above the opponent which she can then do any kido move on the opponent or just slash downwards with her sword. This ability can only be used 10 times in one shikai release however as it uses up much of her spiritual energy. This sword has a second ability, this'll be revealed near the end of the part two.
Doragonkisakisumiyaka – The dragon queen of speed (Attack – none just increases speed, which I say is enough)
Bankai – This is a funny bankai as well as the sword still doesn't change, but two dragon wings sprout from her back and allow her to fly and they also increase her speed by a massive 20 times (you can't begin to imagine how fast this is, it's close of the speed of sound). 2nd ability, it can change into any sword's shikai the owner has seen, as long as the owner knows the command and name of the shikai in question, but it only has half the power of the original sword. Also if anyone defeats her when she's using bankai it'll automatically heal her when it reverts back to her normal sword form.
They all have 'doragon' because they are all dragon based swords.
Raven: Kujotenshi – Destruction angel (Attack - Kurotsuki Yaibahana)
Shikai - Released by "delete", turns into scythe, can create razor sharp darkness based on his kido. It can also nullify his spiritual pressure that people can sense, making him very stealthy.
Kurohane Kujotenshi – Black wing destruction angel (Attack - Kurotsuki Shinkuuyaiba)Bankai - scythe grows a bit. Sky darkens quite a lot, and it gains 5 black feathers on the handles end. These feathers can be released but move slowly. If they all touch an opponent, they can delete them from existence, either temporarily, or if all touch the same place, permanently. Raven also gains black wings which draw in spiritual pressure for him to use to power his bankai. It can use the kido based abilities like before. It gains 2/5 of its total power every time it misses a target with the actual blade. When the blade touches the targets blade or the target, that power is released and reset to the original power level.
Crystal: Youshatenshi – Purity angel (Attack - Shirosan Kiyome)
Shikai - Released by "purify", turns into halberd. Releases beams of light or lightning to fend off or "purify" enemies created by sorrow (i.e. Hollows, Arrancar, etc.). A jewel in the middle of the blade can shine brightly to blind and stun enemies. With this, she can also create a light-based shield.Shirohane Youshatenshi – White wing purity angel (Attack - Shiro Taiyou Kiyome)Bankai - splits into two smaller axe-like weapons, but with bigger blades. Crystal gets white wings on her back, and she has a more "sparkling" look to her. Her axes, when slashed at an opponent, make shining marks. If two of those marks cross (like a Quincy cross) then the opponent starts being dissolved (purified) by the light from that point of their body. She can also use her shikai kido powers too, and creates a bright aura that envelops her, so that enemies can become blind if they are overexposed.
Naomi: Seireitenshi – Spirit angel (attack - Oozora Reitentei)
Shikai - Released by "shimmer", turns into a bardiche mounted on a staff. Doesn't do any damage at the start of a fight, except for the blade damage, but can absorb kido attacks and melee attacks, and fire one beam back at half the strength of the absorbed power.
Kozumikkukouken Seireitenshi – Cosmic guardian spirit angel (Attack - Kozumikku Reitentei)Bankai - grows into a double-bladed staff-mounted bardiche. Currently, she can absorb all attacks she receives into her blades, then can release a blast at 3/4 power, as full power hasn't been achieved yet. Later on, her bankai reveals it can clone her form, albeit as a shadowy form, 8 times in total. These clones have 1/4 of her power, and are destroyed after a few hits, but can act totally of their own accord. She can then fuse the clones into a giant form of her zanpakuto spirit, which attacks with its blade through the opponent, then disappears. During her bankai, she can form one white and one black wing, which work the same as the others.They are all "-tenshi" as they all were made from the same piece of
soul-condensed steel.