This is my first L/J fan fic. I want at least 10 reviews for me to continue this story. I would also like to know if I should continue the story that I have been working on for a while. (How Come No One Ever Told Me Before? is the name of the series)
Disclaimer: Sadly I own none of the characters that are ever mention in any of the books. I do own some though at the moment I don't know which characters I own except Lily's twin sister Rose.
Okay here goes my first try at an L/J fic. The title is extremely stupid but on with the fic!
Is It Love or Is It Hate?
We start our story in a bedroom occupied by two identical twin girls. It is early in the morning, to be exact 1:48, as the two girls sit on their beds talking excitedly about the school they would be starting tomorrow. These twins were anything but ordinary. When they got mad most likely they would find a vase blown-up or Petunia the twins' older sister hovering in the air and then fall and land with a thud on her butt. For years they had no explanation of why these things happened to them.
Then on July 12 of that year (A/N: Don't know what year so don't ask) the twins each received a letter. This letter told them that they were witches and would be welcome to attend Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Petunia had become disturbed by the thought of them being witches and so the twins took the offer to go to this unknown school (They love to make Petunia disturbed).
We are now currently listening to Rose (one of the twins) go on and on about a boy that she had met while in Diagon Alley buying their materials.
"Sirius is ssssssoooooo CUTE! I mean the hair of his is absolutely adorable! That grin he wears makes him look like he's hiding something. I like that grin so much!" Rose was ranting and raving about Sirius Black one of the two boys they girls had met during their trip to Diagon Alley. James Potter was the other boy that they had met. The two boys had been in Ollivanders when they went to get their wands. Rose had fallen in love at first site.
"Don't you think that you are getting a bit carried away, Rose?" asked Lily the wiser of the two. (A/N: Rose can either be really smart or really ditzy. While Lily was smart all the time and never ditzy.)
"Carried away? Me do something like that? No, I don't think so! You on the other hand have the hots for James don't you!" was Rose's reply.
"EEEWWWWWW! Stay away from me! James Potter! Now that is a sick thought! He's so UGLY! His grin creeps me out! Plus, he threw dungbombs at me as we left." Lily said with disgust.
"Speaking of dungbombs, shall we kindly go and place some dungbombs in the room of our older and wiser sister, Petunia?"
"Yes, and set them to go off 20 minutes later so that she can't blame us. Then tomorrow shall we give he some cockroach cluster?"
"Hmmm…about how many dungbombs do you think we'll need to make her room smell like gas?"
"None, it already does! Let's put five of our precise dungbombs in her room. We do have 95 more after that."
Silently the girls crept into the hall and rounded the corner where the door to the room that they were going to sabotage lay open waiting for them to place 5 precise dungbombs in the corners and on the bed. They quickly set the dungbombs where they wanted the, told them to wait 20 minutes before blowing, and ventured of into the darkness of the hallway as they crept slowly to their room.
At 2:25 right on cue the girls heard Petunia shriek and run through the hall towards their bedroom where the lay pretending to sleep (they were the best at pretending to sleep) trying their best not to become overwhelmed with giggles. Petunia opened the door and started screaming at them with all the might she could force.
"YOU LITTLE BRUTES! I'M GONNA GET YOU! HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY ROOM WITH OUT PERMISSION! HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY ROOM EVER! EVEN WITH PERMISSION!" screamed Petunia. Suddenly she grabbed an extremely heavy book and started beating her sisters with it. The girls pretended to wake up and not know what was happening. Their mother rushed in and tried to get the book away from Petunia while her father grabbed Petunia by the arm and pulled her out into the hall with a jerk.
"What did you two do this time?" asked their mother cautiously not knowing if she really wanted to know the answer.
"We didn't do anything," Rose said sounding like the ditz that she was at the moment.
"Likely story, we'll talk about this in the morning." replied their mother sleepily. "In the mean time you to need to go to sleep."
As their mother left and closed the door behind her the two girls burst in to millions of giggles.
"Did you see her face? She looked like a horse that was breathing fire!" said Lily when she had finally gotten control of her giggling. This just sent them into another batch of giggles until their mother yelled from upstairs.
"IF I HEAR ONE MORE WORD FROM YOU YOU'LL BE SORRY!"
"Yes. Mum!" the girls replied knowing not to get on the wrong side of her.
The twins settled down and finally went to sleep around 3:30 in the morning. Only to be woken up ate 3 hrs. Later because they had a 3 ½ hour ride to Kings Cross. After a disgruntled Lily had gotten up, showered, shoved everything in her trunk, then woke Rose up who had been sleeping, she was ready to go except she had to wait for Rose to get done so they could eat breakfast. (A/N: Neither Lily nor Rose was morning people. Rose had been woken up 10 times before Lily finally got her up.) Finally at 7:15 everyone was up and ready. Petunia would be leaving by train to her school that day too but her train wouldn't arrive until 12:30 when Lily and Rose's train was the leave at 11:00 sharp.
The whole way to Kings Cross, Petunia complained about having to sit in the back seat. It was no picnic for Lily or Rose Both as there was no middle seatbelt and they had to share one. Neither wanted to share with Petunia and would have rather that their father throw her out of the car on the highway, but that didn't happen and the two girls sat as far away from Petunia as humanly possible without opening the door to the car and falling out. At 10:29 the made they're way to platform 9 ¾. Or they would have if it had been there.
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There's Sirius! He looks cuter now than he did in Diagon Alley! I wonder if he did something to his hair!" Rose said ranting like never before."Hey, Rose, over hear! I want you two to meet some of our friends!" Sirius called out to them, mostly to Rose though, which made her blush uncontrollably.
"Hi, Sirius! How were the rest of you holidays?" asked Rose who was still blushing.
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Fine, we played some last minute tricks on our neighbors and got our wands taken away for three days though. Oh yeah I want you to meet some people. You already know James," he pointed to James Potter who was trying to defog his glasses, "this is Remus Lupin," pointing to a boy with sandy hair and was quite tall," and last is Peter Pettigrew." he finished by pointing to a short pudgy looking kid with light brown hair."Guys, these two lovely women are Rose and Lily Evans."
"Um…Sirius how can you tell them apart. They are wearing the same thing!" said the boy who Sirius had said was Remus Lupin.
"Actually I don't know." Sirius said with a weird look on his face, "I was calling you the right names wasn't I?"
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Yep, and the first person ever to do so. Our Mum doesn't even call us the right names!" replied Lily because Rose was staring at Sirius with her ditzy look on."We'd better go through the barrier now so that we can get a compartment," said James speaking for the first time since Lily and Rose had walked over.
"How do we ---er get through the barrier?" asked Rose coming out of her transe.
"You just run between platforms 9 and 10. Don't worry about running into anything either." answered Sirius.
"We've got ten minutes we had better run for it." said James quickly. James and Sirius grabbed their trolley and made a run for it. Then after they had disappeared Lily and Rose went. Lily closed her eyes. Expecting to crash anytime soon, but only to open them to see a scarlet steam train that said Hogwarts Express. They now had 6 minutes to load the train. The girls grabbed their trunks (with difficutly) and found an empty compartment.
"Sirius! We found an empty one!" called Rose brightly. All four boys came rushing into the compartment. They stored their trunks then sat down. Rose, Lily, and Sirius on one side of the compartment and James, Remus, and Peter on the other.
"I'll be write back" said Lily. She needed to get fresh air. As she went to open the compartment door it opened reveiling a greasy haired boy who had to boys (who looked more like body guards then 11 year olds) at his sides.
"Why hello. Who do we have here." said the boy whose voice was as greasy as his hair.
"Snape, do go away. I was hoping to have a Snape free train ride and yet you ruin it before the train even leaves the station!" said James icily standing up as he talked.
"Well lets see here," said Snape ignoring James comment, "we have Potter, Black, Lupin, and Pettigrew, but I don't know these to fine young ladies." putting his greasy hands on Lily and Rose's shoulders.
"Get your greasy hand off my shoulder!" said Lily nastily. When he didn't respond she slapped him with all the might that she could muster. He stepped backwards releiving Lily and Rose of having a greasy hand on their shoulders. Snape and his body guards turned around and headed out of the compartment after that. Lily sat back down relieved to have gotten them to leave.
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Who was that guy?" asked Lily curiously."He's only the stupidest person on the face of the earth, his name is Severus Snape and he's a born Slytherin." said Sirius.
Lily and Rose had read all about the house in Hogwarts, A History after they had bought it at Diagon Alley. They talked about various things throughout the rest of the train ride. The subject that the boys talked about most was Quidditch (A/N: spelling someone?), the boys explained the rules and all about the 4 types of Quidditch balls. Lily became quite interested in the sport. However, Rose thought that it was thoroughly boring. I mean how could anyone like a sport that involves 2 bludgers that could kill you? On broomsticks for that matter! (A/N: Quidditch ROCKS!) Before anyone knew it they were pulling into the Hogsmeade station.
An unusually large man was calling out for the first years to follow him down a path to the lake. At the lake were little boats that the man was saying to board. Four to a boat. James, Remus, Peter, and Sirius got into one boat while Lily and Rose got into another. Soon they were joined by two other girls who looking as if the sky were about to fall they were so nervous. On the way to the other side of the lake Lily and Rose found out that the girls sharing they're boat were named Scarlet and Katia.
The boats docked themselves on the shore. The first years were led up a steep slope to the doors of the castle. Hagrid (Lily had found out his name) knocked on the big door in front of them. A stern looking women with her black hair in a tight bun opened the door and led the first years to an abandoned corridor.
"I will be back in a few short minutes. The sorting will begin and you will be told which house you will be in whether it be Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, or Slytherin. Oh and bye the way I am Professor McGonagall and I teach transfiguration."
She closed the door and the first years began talking excitedly about how exactly they were being sorted into their houses.
"I bet that they make us do a spell. I do feel sorry for those who haven't learned any yet." was the comment that Snape but in.
McGonagall open the door and told the first years to get into the line. The first years were obedient. They entered the Great Hall waiting to be sorted.
I leave you there I'll write the next part as soon as I find out if you like this or not. I hope you like this fan fiction. I can't wait to find out if you like this or not. If you want you can e-mail me at
WhatEver44421@juno.com.