Hey, so I decided to make a what-if on Friday the 13th Part III and this one is about what-if Jason never appeared at Higgins Haven,
I know i'm going to have a blast writing this and I hope you guys do too ^_^
*Kickass part III theme plays*:
"HEY MAC THROW THE BALL!". A group of kids was standing in the road, one wielding a bat and the other getting ready to throw the ball. They quickly shifted onto the pavement as they heard a honk from a van coming down the road. A girl would be gazing out the window at the kids, smiling. This was Chris Higgins, her two friends Andy and Deborah were sitting next to her. Deborah was laughing at something Andy told her.
Chris would stop the van further down the road, she'd get out the van and point "It's the white house on the left". She'd start walking then shout to the back of her van "Hey Shelly, come out and meet your date!", a muffled voice would respond. "Bring her to me", Andy and Deborah appeared from the other side of the van, "Maybe this wasn't such a good idea" said Deborah. Andy then touched his lips with Deborah's. Chris watched in disgust, "Sex, sex, sex you guys are getting boring. You know that?" "What sort of weekend in the country be without sex?" Andy asked, "Cool it Andy" Deborah seemed a little worried, knowing what Chris was capable of.
"I didn't mean it that way" Andy tried to defuse the conversation. Chris moved to face the both of them, "Look guys, I want you to have a good time this weekend, what happened to me at the lake happened a long time ago. I'm fine really, ok? Just forget about me". Deborah frowned at this, "Oh uh, so I'm supposed to forget that we're friend- Suddenly something made a loud sound and Chris yelped like a dying dog. An overweight short figure wearing a mask had what looked like a prop knife stabbing into Andy's back, "AHHH" Andy shouted. Andy then glared, "Goddammit Shelly, why do you always have to be such an asshole?!"
Shelly then reputed calmly "I beg your pardon. I'm not an asshole. I'm an actor" Andy then smirked. "Same thing". They then started walking to the house again, Andy wrapped his arm around Shelly, they seemed to be friends. "Look Shelly, you're my roommate and I like you. Most of the time, but you gotta quit doing those things! Now I got you a date didn't I? Didn't I?". Shelly seemed a little guilty "Yeah", "So don't embarrass me, just relax, be yourself". Shelly then moved his mask further up his head and sighed. "Could you be yourself if you looked like this?". Andy snorted but quickly took it back. They walked up the steps leading to the house's porch. Shelly put his mask back on.
Chris knocked on the door a few times. The door opened and a middle aged lady stepped out. "Yes?" she sounded as if it was another prank that kids around the block were doing, Chris grinned, "Hi Mrs. Sanchez, I'm Chris. We've come to pick up Vera". Mrs. Sanchez then glared like the devil and said in a stern voice "She is not going!" She then turned around and walked back inside the house. Chris looked at Deborah with a mild gaze on her face as they heard two voices arguing in what seemed Mexican. One voice was indeed Mrs. Sanchez and the other sounded younger, "What are they saying?" asked Chris irritated at the fact that "Vera" couldn't come. "Well I don't know, I don't speak Spanish" said Deborah, then came a young woman about the same age as Chris out the door.
"Hi everybody!" She grinned then quickly turned confused. "What ya looking at?". Chris was the first to answer, "Is everything alright?". Vera answered calmly "Ahhh… just your basic old fashioned mother problems", she then quickly changed the subject. "So! Which one's my date?!".
Shelly stepped forward, still wearing the mask "Hi" was the only word that he could muster up. Vera giggled, "You're Shelly?". Shelly moved the mask up off his face again. "Sorry" Shelly said. Andy ripped the mask off his forehead as Deborah turned around and gasped "HEY THE VAN'S ON FIRE!" she pointed at the van as they all turned around and saw smoke coming from the back of the van. It looked like trees were being burnt from the very inside of said van.
They all ran towards the van. Chris and Andy were the first to reach it and they climbed into the front, coughing and spluttering and waving their hands around until they saw two figures amongst the smoke, both holding long bongs. The two figures released their mouths from the bongs and started chuckling. Chris and Andy were not amused. These two were Chuck and Chili, the stoners of the group.
Well first chapter done,
I have literally had to take my Friday the 13th part III film out and watch and pause it as I write this so it probably won't even be until chapter 5-6 where the proper what-if takes place.
I will have to change the part with the cops and the creepy old man though, so that will pretty much be a what-if part there too. But the shop scene with Shelly, Vera and the bikers will stay the same.
I'd appreciate all the reviews that I get and I will listen to all of you, I already know my writing isn't the best but I try my best into making a good story, if you guys don't like my grammer or the way I write, just write a review as it will help me a lot to improve ;D.
Btw part III is my favourite Friday film tied with The Final Chapter and A New Beginning (See I like Roy). You guys let me know what your favourites are too!
Ciao
