A/N: hey pplz, kimi here. This is my first try on poem! Based on my own personal thoughts at one time... here it is.
As My World is Falling
By: Kimiko43092
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I feel that I don't belong here,
Like I am nothing.
The darkness has come,
As my world is falling.
Slowly bit by bit I feel torn,
Yet, I hear His calling,
Why? That I do not know.
As my world is falling.
I feel I am being sucked in by darkness,
Not by the light that is saving,
Dark thoughts are entering my mind,
As my world is falling.
But the day I fight my enemies,
I well once again hear His calling,
This time I will listen,
Although my world is falling.
As the battles rage on,
He is continuously protecting,
Never will he forsake me.
Although my world was falling.
Now I am free from all disgraceful thoughts.
My voice lifts up to where the King is sitting.
I have forgotten all sorrows and sadness.
From when my world was falling.
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A/N Well? What did you think? Yes, this was based on my own thoughts at one time. I think most of you who actually bothered to read this thinks I'm a terrible poet.
grr... ff.net's not letting any asterisks or any other 'special' signs.
sigh so pissed.
Just a little challenge:
What did the last verse describe?
You don't have to answer, I mean, it's kinda obvious.
Please review and tell me what you think!!! and tell me if I should
continue!!!!! Thankies!!!
kimi