So this is my first story, Hope of a clan revised and edited with yours truly. yay! Now let it be known that if you read on from here your eyes may burn out. So now, let's venture into the dangerous world of warrior trollfics.
I will write the author notes like this and mine like this. Get it? Got it? Good.
This is my first story on here, so please don't be mean...
No flamers please, cause I am really awesome ('i have a bad feeling about this...)~~~~ slfgl;szkghsz;,szkhgerlzwgzgvf,AErf vukzahbf,zsi. ( Nope not even gonna try)
Hopekit woke up to pretty sunlight. her beautiful white fur glowed in the sun. Her gorgeous (Well, HopelightCuteness knows the word gorgeous! Plus ten points! Sadly it was spelled wrong. minus 20 points.) blue eyes turned different colors like green, yellow, orange, and purple. (I;m confused. How can i cats eyes change colors? Maybe her eyes are mood rings. Makes sense.)
Her mom lay next 2 (To lazy to type two letters I guess.) her, her not as pretty amber eyes glowed. (Well its prettier than creepy glowing color-changing eyes!)
"Hopekit do you know what day it is?"she asked.
"No. Hopekit meowd.
"Yo become a apprentice today!" sand her mum who was named Leaffurnance. (What the crap? What type of name is leaffurnance? That's not even a proper suffix!)
"Yay! screamed Hopekit as she ran into the the clearing where the cats were.
In the clearing was Skystar, a large white tom with blindededededed eyes.(With what eyes?)
"Hopekit (Right about now I'm really tempted to keep hopekit as hopkit for the rest of her life.) you are now an apprentice, said Skystar "Hopepaw I will be your mentor because you are really hot."(Oh no, Oh no, not another sunshinekit's destiny rerun! *covers face in hands*)
The clan nodded. Hopepaw lived in Thunderclun. The oldest cats in the clan were Dewscrewdriver(Wut.), Ambrelectricpencilsharpener (I never knew cats were technologically advanced.), and Snowbutt. (Not even gonna ask)
Hopepaw followed Skystar out of camp. Suddenly a patrol of Shadowclan cuts jumped from the bushes!
"Die!" screamed Evilstar, a black tom with red eyes. (First off, who is the queen who named their kit evilkit? And what typ of cat has red eyes? Well i guess its better than having color changing eyes.)
Five Shadowclan warriors attacked Hopestar (She leader?! i thought she was still an apprentice!) but she quickly killed all of them. (Yea like a 5 minute old apprentice with no battle training whatsoever can kill off 5 fully grown shadow clan warriors. Seems legit.)
Finally she turned to see Skystar dead on the ground.(Oh noes.I'm so scared.)Evilstar laughed then ran away from the scene...!
Wen she returned to camp the clan cheered for her.
"Hopepaw! Hopestar! Hopepaw!" (I love how no one remembers skystar.)
The deputy of the clan came up to her. "Hopepaw for youur bravery I will make you into a warrior. You are now Hopelight. (yea so shes been an apprentice for how many minutes, ten? and now SHE'S A FREAKING WARRIOR?! This is even worse then starkits prophecy.)
He turned to the clan, "Hopestar will be the new deputy of Thunderclan." he cried.(A ten minute old kit being deputy. Oh dear starclan.)
"Hopekit!(Thats a more accurate description.) hopelight! Hopelight~!"! The clan cheered.
Please no flamers
Love you all. (We don't need your love! )
Anyways, you survived this long, but it only gets worse from here. I have one word to say, vegetarianclan. You'll see what I mean soon enough.
~Thank you for shopping at walmart, Moonlight