Enjoy people, This took a while to think through. I'd like some reviews if you have the time. And mabye some well thought out critisizm, but be nice, thanks!!!!! Enjoy!!!! Okay, the first sequence takes place when Kyubbi is placed inside of Naruto. Okay, I forgot exactly HOW kyubbi is placed into Naruto, so I'm just going to make it like a ceremony thingy. Okay? If anyone can actually tell me how he is sealed into naruto, tell me in a review and I'll edit it, Thanks. By the way, I don't know what happened to Yondaime(naruto's dad, a.k.a 4th hokage) so I'm going to say he died after the ceremony,...which I think did happen. Please read and review anyway!!! Thankies! (and yes, I do watch Naruto, It's just that Some things get messed up. lol.)
All the villagers were gathered around the hokage. Today, he was going to seal the evil fox spirit into a randomn baby. That baby was Nauto Uzumaki. The hokage took the baby, and finally seals the spirit in the baby. Relief washes over the entire village, as the spirit was sealed, forever. The fourth hokage, Yondaime , then placed his son(who just HAPPENS to be Naruto) and places him in a warm blanket and gives him to a chosen family to care for him. The villegers all left to do their daily baises after this.
Yondaime now sits on a brand new swing thinking if he had dome the right thing. Just then a young beautuful woman approached him. She had long Light purple hair and she was wairing a completly white kimono. She had Dark purple eyes, and her hair was tied in a bun with two strands hanging out framing her elegent cheerful face. Something seemed odd about her though.... Yondaime's eyes widened as he jumped back off the swings and pulled out 3 kunai. "DEMON STAY BACK!!!!!LEAVE MY VILLAGE!" he yelled as he launched the kunai.
The demonness didn't dodge at all, instead a small blurr went infront of her and blocked the kunai with kunaii of it's own. Yondaime had noticed the fox ears atop of the womans head and he nearly smacked his head for not noticing her dark purple fox tail behind her. Even he had to think that she was beautiful. "Demon! Why are you here!!! Are you somehow related to Kyubbi!!!???" he yelled as he threw 10 other kunaii at her, just to have that blurr block the kunaii once again. Everytime the blurr blocked the kunaii it always hid behind the demoness.
The demoness frowned slightly "I wish this village no harm, at all. Please don't harm me nor my son or my daughter. Please, I just wish to have a decent conversation with you. Please" she said. Her voice was so frail, almost as if it pained her to talk. " My name is Akemi Mizuki This is my son Hikaru Mizuki" she said in her frail voice again. She pulled the "blurr" from behind her. It was a kitsune boy. He had Short spiky Brown hair with brown fox ears and little orange tips. He had grey eyes and he had on a yellow plain shirt with a red single fox on it. He had White shorts on and he had sandels that looked like they belonged to a village. He had one brown fox tail with an orange tip. He was about half as tall as Yondaime shin. He was looking at the ground and he had a small frown. "You tried to hurt my momma" he mummbled.
In his early years of hokage, Yondaime learned that if a demon showed you their children they mean no harm. He nodded and apologized. "What do you wish to talk about?" he asked while jesturing for her to take the swing next to him. She nodded and followed and sat on the other swing with Hikaru on her lap. "I know what you did to your son. You sealed Kyubbi in him. I think that that was the best thing to do. Kyubbi is a cruel demon. He destroyed my home, my forest, my mother, father, sister, brother, you name it. Although I must tell you. It was a human who controlled him to attack your village and my home. His name was Madara Uchiha." Just then she started to cough up blood. Hakaku leaped off her lap "Momma are you okay?!" he screamed/asked.
She shook her head slowly and tears formed into her eyes. Yondaime became alarmed "madam are you okay? Did Kyuubi do this?" he asked alarmed helping her stand. He could sense her chakra and enerdy decreasing every minuts. "Yes he has taken my energy to help him destroy this village, my bloodline comes from powerful demon gods so him having my powers was necessary. I'm sorry that I gave up and let him take my powers" she said shakily. She coughed up more blood and would have fallen to her knees if he wasn't there. "Hakaku go get your sister, please" she begged her son as he ran off.
"Yondaine please, I have to ask you to please, please PLEASE take in my daughter in your village. She has nowhere else to go, since,...I'm dying any second now. Please, I just need to die knowing that her and her brother are safe."
"I would gladly take in your daughter,....but miss, she has the appearence of a kitsune. And what about your son?" he asked with concern.
Just then Hakaku came back with a baby wrapped in a white blanket. She had Black hair,....no wait,.....it was purple. She had the darkest shade of purple you could imagine. Anyone would think it was black, but it was actually purple. Odd. She had Dark purple eyes, darker than her mother. And she also had pale skin....Oddly enough she had no fox features.
"Why doesn't she look like a kitsune such as your son and yourself?" he asked.
"It was a gift from Kyuubi. He came out of the humans controll long enough to see the damage to my home and family. He actually felt pity, so he granted my son a wish for him to use whenever he wishes, and my daughter the form of a human. She still has the soul and chakra of a kitsune." she said before coughing up more blood and falling to her knees. Yondaime helped her back up and asked about her son after taking the baby. "My son will remain with his father, Hakaku please return to your father(cough) please" she said through tears. Her son nodded and have her a hug "I love you momma, I'll take care of Kiyomi when I get stronger." he said before turning his attention to Yondaime "Take care of her human" he said calmly before running off.
Akemi got up shakily "Her name is Kiyomi Mizuki. Please take care of her, I trust you Yondaine." she said. Then she started to glow, then out of nowhere she vanished never to be seen again. Yondaine blinked then looked down at the baby in his arms, "you sure are beautiful, like your mother. Hopefully, you can grow up with my son. You should be friends in the future." he said before a pain hit him in the stomach. "I'm afraid that,....I won't be there little Kiyomi. Kyuubi put a curse on me, I won't make it past the night." he said sadly. " I'll try to put you to a good home" he said warmly as he walked towards an old couple he knew.
Yondaine put Naruto and Kiyomi in two different homes. Yondaine dies that very night soundlessly in his sleep. In the morning he was buried with great respect, everyone attended. Sadly though, the home he placed Naruto in burned down when he was 4 years old. The couple that took care of Kiyomi died in a hostage situation by rouge ninja when she was 5, . They both grew up alone in seperate apartments.
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An eight year old Kiyomi walked down the busy streets of kohona. Kiyomi had long Dark blackish-purple hair. She had dark purple eyes, and her hair was let down. When let down it went to her mid-stomach. She had a ribbin around her neck that circled her neck twice, then tied into a neat ribbon. She had on earings that were shaped like a cresent moon with light pink bands around them. She was wearing a light blue top with long sleeves that were tight on her arm but loose on her lower arms covering the tips of her fingers. She had on plain white shorts. Although on the front of her right leg was a symbol. It was an orange fox tail surrounded by a red flame.
Anyway, She had a small bag off apples that she was planning to eat during lunch. She was going to the park to eat alone under her favorite cherry blossum tree. On her way to the park she past a boy with a blue shirt and white shorts. She had heard of him before, he was the Uchiha boy that all the girls liked. She saw him being followed by all the eight year old girls in the village. He looked quite irritated with all the attention, actually. The boy was about 6 feet away from Kiyomi when he looked up she caught his eye. As he saw her he stopped dead in his tracks staring at her in wonder. Seeing as he stopped, Kiyomi stopped as well, mabye something was wrong.
*sasuke's point of view*
I was just walking down the street trying to avoid my 'fan club'. God, how I hated them. Especially sakura and Ino, they REALLY got on my nerves. I started to quicken my pace, I felt like I had all the eight year old girls on my trail.
While I'm walking I look up to see if anyone was in my way, when I saw the prettiest girl I've ever seen in all my Eight and a half years of life. She was walking on the otherside of me in the oposite direction when she cought my eye. She slowed her pace to a slow stop to mimic me stopping. She turned her head to look at me in the eyes. And I would have continued to stare at her if six of my fan girls bumped into me making me fall with all of them on top of me. I let out a low growl and they all stumbled to get off of me. Ino offered her hand to help me up but I swated it away. She had to be more annoying that sakura!
When I looked at the girl again she was frowning. I was about to say something but she continued walking. I was frozen, until she was behind me continuing to walk. I turned around to see her walking still. All the girls looked back and glared at her all thinking the same thing 'she must die!' of course they were young and naive, and didn't know what they were thinking, but still...
*end of susuke's point of view*
Kiyomi continued walking until she came to the entrance of the park, she entered and began looking for her special tree. She stopped when she came across the playground. There was a little blonde boy sitting by himself looking at the ground, not even bothering to push himself on the swing. Kiyomi had heard of him as well as the Uchiha boy. She diddn't know his name though. She just knows that noone liked him, because of a kitsune spirit that was trapped inside of him.
She thought this was a terrible reason for people to not like him, in her opinion anyway.
Kiyomi slowly approached the boy, she wanted to get to know him. That was just how she was, she liked to meet new people. Kiyomi walked up to the boy until she was only three feet away from him. That was when he looked up, Kiyomi saw that he had startling blue eyes, and six whisker like marks on his cheeks. He looked up stared up and looked at her confusingly. He just assumed that she was there to make fun at him, just like Ino and Sakura did last week.
Kiyomi finally spoke first "Hi!" she said brightly.
"Um,...Hi?" he said not so sure of himself. He usually only spoke to the waitress and cheif at the ramen store.
"What's your name? Mines Kiyoni Mizuki!"
"My name's Naruto Uzumaki"
Kiyomi didn't know what to say next, then an idea popped to his head. "Naruto, I don't understand why noone likes you. Just because a kitsune spirit was sealed into your body, doesn't give anyone the right to make fun of you....Actually, in my honest opinion Kitsunes are awsome!" she said, then showed him the fox tail on her pants.
Naruto's face brightened and he looked up, "really?" he asked.
"Definatly!......want to be friends?!" she asked.
"...yeah, I do" he said getting up.
Kiyomi's friend brightened, "Thanks naruto!" she said before hugging him. Naruto hugged back "no, thankyou kiyomi, your my first friend"
Once they broke the hug, kimiko looked at Naruto, "You're my first friend too!"
"Really, I would think that a girl like you would have tons of friends" inquired Naruto.
Kiyomi shook her heads, "All the other girls all talk about that Uchiha boy, All the guys are rude. Exept Shino, Shikamaru, and choji. I guess they qualify as friends. And then there's Neji, he can really be inveloped in his training. Oh! Sorry, I must be rambling!" she said while nervously laughing.
"It's okay, I'm just glad someones talking to me" said Naruto.
"Hey, do you want some apples?" she asked while handing him about three green apples.
"sure! Thank you" he said while accepting the apples.
Kiyomi led Naruto to a Cherry tree and they ate their apples. After that They both went home.
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4 years later
*with Kiyomi*
Kiyomi was walking home, Kiyomi actually wanted to stop by the grilling resturant to see if Choji was there. He had promised her a brand new flavor of her favorite chips.
Kiyomi entered a resturant, and of course he saw Choji stuffing his face with teriaki steak. He was accomponied by Kiba, Shikamaru, and Neji.
"Evening Choji, Shikamaru, Neji" she greeted.
The boys all looked up and smiled. Choji actually put down his plastic spork and knife. "Hi Kiyomi! I have those chips right here!!!" he said proudly. "Hello Kiyomi, nice day we're having. Why don't you join us for dinner, we're actually going to order something while Choji orders his third round." said Neji. "Yeah, sometimes these people can be a drag." said Shikamaru. "Anyway, join us for lunch" he continued.
"Thanks" she said while sitting in front of Neji, next to Shikamaru, and sideways to Choji. "So, how go's it guys?' she asked.
"Not much, we all saw sasuke run from his fan girls again today, it gets funnier every time" said choji while laughing.
"what a drag" said Shikamaru.
"hn." said Neji.
"Shikamaru, what isn't a drag" she said while chuckiling.
"meh, you I soppose, the clouds, the moon, the sky, the birds-" "that ISN'T apart of the sky" said Neji.
"well, I soppose that leaves Neji, Choji, and You, kiyomi."
"Aww thanks bud" she said while patting his head, causing Neji to chuckle.
Shikamaru rolled his eyes, then the waiter came.
"May I take your order?" he asked.
"what will you have Kiyomi?" asked Shikamaru.
"Just some Terikai chicken, with pork fried rice" she answered.
"Alright phil, we'll take Four orders of Teriaki chiken, two orders of white rice and two orders of Pork fried rice" said Choji.
"Alright choji, right away" said Phil the waiter.(lol)
(Half an hour later the food came, then they ate and now it's time to leave)
Kiyomi quickly reached for her fox shaped wallet(that had been a gift from naruto) to pay for some of the meal.
She pulled out 1/3 of the amount needed to pay. She placed it on the table and the boys payed the rest and the tip.
"Alright guys, see ya later" said Kiyomi while getting up to leave. "Bye Kiyomi" said Shikamaru and Neji at the same time. "see ya later, oh! And here are those chips!" he said while pulling out a bag filed with taco zested doritos. "There's about 21 bags in there, eat them well" he said while giving her the bag.
"Thanks Choji!" she said happily.
She then left the resturant, she apparently left to quickly and fast because when she left she bumped into a hard chest nearly knocking them both over. They would have fell if he wasn't well balanced,....AND if his arms hadn't wrapped around her waist firmly on contact. Kiyomi froze, the looked up into obsiden eyes,..she had bumped into Sasuke Uchiha.
Kiyomi struggled out of his grip and apologized, "Sorry sauske, I guess I wasn't paying attention...." she trailed off.
Sasuke looked at her for a moment, forgetting that she was apologizing. He had formed a crush on her over the four years, since thay had met.
*flashback*
Sasuke was running down the road, trying to fing a kunaii that he had thrown at Shikamaru for laughing at him, since he had been glomped by Ino. He ran and ran and ran until he tripped and fell on someone. "uuughhh" he groaned trying to stable himself. He was on his knees when he saw who he fell on. He had fallen on that girl he met a couple of days ago, the girl with big purple eyes and the black-purple hair. She shook her head and staired at him. There were no trace of 'oh sasuke! I looooovvveeee youuuu!!' or 'sasuke, your my heroooo'which was always found on all the girls faces in the village. Instead there was an irritated look in her eyes, he looked down to see that he had caused her to drop her groceries.
"s-sorry" he stuttered before gathering her groceries and hoisted her up with one arm, groceries in the other.
"It's okay, In case you wanted to know my name is Kiyomi Mizuki." she said with a friendly smile on.
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha pleasure to meetcha Kiyomi" he said before handing her groceries to her.
"Thanks, where are your fan girls?" she asked.
Sasuke looked confused, "Aren't you one of them?" he asked.
Kiyomi furrowed her small eyebrows, "NO! NO I AM NOT UCHIHA! AND I NEVER WILL BE!" she yelled, then stormed off.
* end of flashback*
She had apologized since then, and they had become somewhat of friends. But he had never lost his crush in her, he was positive that she would be his one day.
*present time*
"Umm, sasuke?" asked Kyomi, while waving a hand in front of his face.
Sasuke shook his head to escape the memory. "uh,. w-wha?" he asked.
Kyomi giggled, "Nothing, I just wanted to say sorry for bumping into you, that's all" she said brightly.
"Oh, eh, yeah,........by k-Kyomi see you at the academy,..er...yeah" Said the Uchiha. Sasuke was mid-turn when he realised he had stuttered. He turned back to Kiyomi to see that she was already walking away! He quickly caught up to he and grabbed her arm.
Kiyomi turned to face him with a confused look.
"...Don't tell anyone I stuttered..." he said trying to conceal his light blush. Kiyomi giggled, "Hn, Okay Uchiha" she said before trotting off. Sasuke let out a small sigh before leaving.
*with Kiyomi*
Kiyomi was excited, she was thrilled, but she was also feeling nervous. Tomorrow, their teacher would be dividing the class into three man squads. Although one squad would be a four man squad, because Naruto had FINALLY passed the academy and would be in her class. Now, she wanted to find a new outfitt for tomorrow. It would be her uniform, so she had to pick something comftorable.
On her way to a shop she saw Ino and Sakura looking exausted. Kiyomi walked over to see what was goin on. "Um, sakura-chan, Ino-chan? What's wrong?" she asked.
Sakura straighntened herself up, "NONE of your buissness Kiyomi!" she said meanly.
Ino furrowed her eyebrows at Sakura, "Don't be rude billboard head!" Said Ino.
"By the way Kiyomi, Sakura is tired because she couldn't catch Sasuke-kun, she's to FAAAAAAATTT" said Ino, smugly.
"Grrrrrrrr" growled Sakura.
"oh" said Kiyomi.
"Where were you headed?" asked Sakura.
"To get a new outfit for tomorrow" said Kiyomi.
"Oh, me and Ino-pig already got ours. Do you like them" asked Sakura while showing Kiyomi her outfit. Ino did the same.
"Yes, their really nice. I'm sure sasuke will notice" said Kiyomi.
"REALLY!!!" shouted/asked the two fan girls.
Kiyomi nodded, waved good-bye and left.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~in a randomn clothes store(for both boys and girls)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kiyomi was just looking for anything now. A lot of these stupid clothes were incredibly over priced!
"stupid rip off stores" she mumbled before turning her head and seeing blonde hair in another isle.
Kiyomi brightened her face, and walked carefully behind the was exactly behind him when she yelled "HI NARUUUUUTTTTTOOOO"
This caused the boy to jump forward and land on a pile of clothes while screaming "WAHHHHHHHHHHHH"
Kiyomi fell to the floor laughing, while Naruto got up and tackled her playfully.
"Naruto! Get off" she said between laughes. Naruto got up and helped her up.
"wow, kiyomi I haven't seen you in like,.....2 days!" said Naruto.
'' He he yeah sorry 'bout that, lost track of time. And I'm really nervous!!! Tomorrow, we'll be in squads!!! And I wanted to find a new out fit too!!! And what if I get stuck with someone who I hate! Like Sakura! Or kiba! Or,..or,....well, thats most of 'em." said Kiyomi.
"Don't worry, things will be fine! Mabye, we'll probably be placed in the same squad!" reassured Naruto.
"Yeah, that'd be cool" said Kiyomi calming down.
"Oh, by the way, here" said Naruto while giving Kiyomi a shopping bag.
"what's this?" she asked, but Naruto already left.
Kiyomi tilted her head and opened the bag. Inside was a small furry jacket. Kiyomi's eyes widened as she continued to examin the jacket. It seemed to be made out of soft fur, the fur was about one centimeter high, and it was extremly soft. It was sort of like a vest, it had no sleeves, and it went just two inches under her breast line. It also had a hoodie and a zipper. The actual jacket was a light purplish pink. She saw that on the back, it had a black fox's tail, surrounded in purple mist. Tears started swelling up in the corners of her eyes as she muttered, "thank you naruto." Kiyomi placed the jacket in the bag, and hurridly began searching for an outfit to match her new jacket.
Well, I hope you enjoyed my first chapter of this story. Please read and review, and if you must give critisizm, please have it well thought out, because flaming hurts! Thanks for reading!
