HI, I'm raven-foreverdark and I'm a new author here. I know this story sucks, but I'm only writing it so that I will be found, there will be better stories, eventually...anyways. read my story!
How Hiei meet sweet snow
One day ,Yuske and Kurama decided to take Hiei to try ice cream. Hiei was all like "no, I will not try your stupid nigen food." But unfortunatly for him. Yuske and Kurama would not listen, and they dragged him to the ice cream place(I don't know what it's called). When they finally got him to sit down, they ordered thier ice cream. Yushe and Kurama argued for a few minutes about which ice cream to get Hiei, but finally decided on vanila(sp?). Now they had the problem of getting it in his mouth, for Hiei would not open it. After trying for several minutes, Kurama said:"Hiei, look, theres Yukina with Kuwabara". Hiei then opened his mouth and yelled:"WHAT?" and Yuske put the ice cream in Hiei's mouth. Hiei looked like he was going to kill them, but then his expression changed, he looked at the ice cream for a minute, then started eating it all. Yuske and Kurama smiled at eachother. "Good job" kurama said, "yeah," said Yuske, "I can't belive he likes it". They shook hands, but then they saw Hiei jumping up and down screaming, "give me more sweet snow nigens, or I will kill you all !" Yuske and Kurama looked at eachother in horror and yelled in unison(sp?)"WHAT HAVE WE CREATED ?" "GIVE ME SWEET SNOW!"
The end
Yeah, I know, it stunk, but I just thought of it as I went along. Please go see my profile, if it's up, as of now I haven't done it yet, but it will be up by tomorrow.
Oh yeah, please review if you want to, I don't care if you don't, but I would like to know what you think of it, Thanks!
raven-foreverdark