BG: J was 14 the last time she saw Jared, back then she was a normal girl, into cars, boys and being Christian.What will happen when they meet again after 6 years??
240SX=
J
300SX=
Letty
Mia leans over the counter flipping through a magazine.She looks up when she hear's cars pull into the parking lot knowing the team had arrived.
--Cut
To--
Volkswagon
Jetta
--Cut
To--
Nissan
Maxima
--Cut
To--
Nissan
Skyline
--Cut
To--
Nissan
300 SX
--Cut
To--
Nissan
240 SX
Each
car has "Dominic Toretto" along the bottom of the door and it is very clear
that these are racing cars.
After the cops tried to take them down, the team went to Mexico, while
Brian cleared there names and turned in his badge.Shortly after they came
back, Jordyn, Jesse's ex came back, bringing with her a tough bitch(her
& Letty got close quick) called J.
--Cut
To--
Jesse:
(getting out of his car)
--Cut
To--
Vince:(popping
the hood of his car)
--Cut
To--
Leon:(walking
to Vince's car)
--Cut
To--
Black
boots w/ flames on the top,leather pants, black tank top
Letty's
face
--Cut
To--
Black
heeled boots w/ flames on the sides going up, baggy black jeans, dark green
thong straps, naval ring,dark purple tank top
J's
face
They crowd around Vince's car trying to figure out what the loud BANG was.
Je: You
blew your tank,man.
J:(smirks)
I told you it was tank.
Ly:(pulls
out a wad of cash,placing it in her hands)
V: You
bet on my car?
Ly: Damn
straight.
L: hmm...
J: What
are you hmmm-ing about?
Leon flicks his head to the Black Supra parked across the street.They all turn to look at it before Vince turns back to Toretto's Market.Mia is still flipping through her magazine,Dom and someone are in the back office and a guy is sitting eating a sandwhich. Following Vince, they all walk in.
M: Hey
guyz
Je: How
ya doin' Mia?
Ly: How
ya livin' girl?
V: Lookin
good, Mi.
M:(smirks)
What can I getcha V?(looks at Leon who's eating a bag of chips) I'm puttin
that on your tab.
J quickly hides the can of pop she just opened, sliding a bowl out her way so she can sit on the counter.
Ly: Whos
in back with Dom?
M: Brian
V: Whats
the cop doin here?
L: Cool
it, Coyotes R Us
The guy stands up, tossing some money on the counter.
G: Thanx
Mia.
Hearing the guyz voice, J inhales sharply, looking at the guy for the first time since she walked in.
Je: Whats
wrong J?
J:(ignoring
him) Still got that Supra, Jared?
The guy looks at her slightly surprised, not recognizing her.
J:(curse;
pulling out an old pic of her and some guy)
L: Who
is this guy, J?
J:(to
Jared) You were 18 when you left, I was 14.
Jd: I
still don't know who you are.
V: Who
are you?
J throws the picture on the counter, making her way to the back, taking Dom's beer. Brian comes out and stands beside Mia, Dom following, glaring as J pulling out another beer.
Jd:(looks
at the pic) Jessica Carson.
J: Jared
White.
Ly:(looks
him up and down) So your Jared,not bad. You race.
Jd: Yah(looking
J up and down, smirking) Guess you ain't no good lil Christian girl anymore.
J: Guess
your right.
V:(to
Dom) Tank blew.
D: It'll
be fixed by tonite.
J: You
lettin' me have a go?
L: Wait
for Race Wars.
J:(whinning
slightly) C'mon Dom, me and the Mad Scientest have been working on it.
Jd:(to
J) You race?
J: Hell
yah!
Jd: Which
one?
J: 240SX
Jd:(nodz)
I'll see ya lata.
J: You
betta.
M:(to
Brian) You comin' tonight?
B:Yah(kisses
her)
J:(stares
after Jared has left)
Ly: She's
in love.
J:(ignoring
them, throwing money down on the counter) Let's go, Jess.
Je: C
ya at the garage.
They take off, knowing they'll show up soon.
J: (closes
her eyes as Jesse checks out her car) Well?
Je: Nuthin'
wrong with this baby.
J: Whew...Think
he'll let me race tonight?
Je: Tough
call. Whats the deal with Jared?
J: (slides
under her car, grabbing a wrench on her way) Knew him when I was younger.(changing
the subject) How's Jordyn?
Je: She's
kool, should be showin' up lata.
J: Kool.(sliding
out she turns on the stereo in her car)
He was
a six foot stallion,
Said
a story book thug
He was
the kind that made you wonder how he put down the love,
He had
a hickey in his pocket
A fat
rock in his ear,
He made
my heart start palpitating,
Every
time he came near.
She sits in her car, checking her NOS making sure everything was in working order.
He had
a spankin' new Range,
Sport
a tight wardrobe,
His pants
were saggin'
He was
plaited and his hair was corn rolled
He had
his wrist bling blingin
And his
long legs was bow
He tried
to push up on me
But I
knew he had me at go
The crew walks in, Letty and Mia smirking when they hear the song.
Ly: Man,
our girls in love.
D: Long
as it doesn't break her.
Giving him a look Letty walks over to where J was.
Ly: Yo!
Move out, gotta check 'em all, don't wanna look like punks.
V: You
lettin' her race?
D:(watching
her hit Leon) She's ready.
V: She
loses and there goes your rep.
D: She
won't lose.
B: Who's
the girl?
M: That's
J, she's like Letty.
B: Bad
ass tough chick?
M: Bad
ass is right.
J sits on the hood of Dom's car, talking to Leon about tonight.
J:(motioning
to Dom with her head) Think he'll let me?
L: You
should wait til Race Wars
J: If
he wants to make money off my ass, he better give me some experience.
Jumping off she rolls under the hood of Dom's Mazada.
J: Pass
me a wrench.
~*~
Jared sits in the garage, thinking more about J, then tuning up his car.
--Flashback--
Punked out girl, smirking at him.
Jd: Betcha
can't get my watch off.
J: Wanna
bet?
She pulls his watch off, sliding it on to her own wrist.
--End
Of Flashback--
Yawning, he looks at his watch.Time to get ready, he thought.
Pulling up to an abandoned warehouse, he looks at all the people and nice
cars.Parking next to an Eclipse, he gets out standing next to his car.
H: Check
out this snowman, man.(gets up walking out over to Jared)
H:This
your car?
Jd: Yah.
H: Name's
Hector, I got a last name too but I can't pronounce it so.
Jd: Jared
White.
H: Typical
whiteboy name.(looks up) Here they come.
Turning around all Jared can make out are 7 sets of headlights.
A red
Mazada, followed by a purple 240SX, black 300SX, yellow Skyline, Blue Maxima,White
Jetta and pulling up the rear a green Eclipse.The crowd parts and they
stop in the middle of everybody.
Dom steps out and is soon joined by his skanks.
L:Rerr...I
smell (sniffs) Skanks.Why don't you girls pack it up before I leave treadmarks
on your face.
D: I
was just talkin'
L: Ya,
whateva.
Jared watches as J steps out of her car, standing beside Dom.
Damn
she looks good, he thinks.
Dressed in a small leather halter top, leather skirt and knee high boots
with flames, she's never looked better.
D: One
race
J:(nodz
in agreement)
Edwin hands Hector a wad of money and Marco holds up a slip.
J:(looking
past him) That your car?
M:(ignores
her) Am I in or what?
D:Whats
he got Jesse?
Je: 4
NOS
D: Nuff
NOS to get yourself blown to bits.But your in.
Jd: Hold
up I want in(holds up a wad of cash)
J: Sure
you can handle it?
Jd: You
know it.
J:(Hands
Hector a wad of cash) Lets race.
M: I
ain't racin' her.
J: 'Fraid
I'll chop your car?
M:(turning
to Dom) She's a girl!
Glaring at Marco, J steps up to him, getting in his face.
J:(deadly)
I'm a girl who's gunna kick your ass and(points to his car) chop your car.Let's
race!
Jared looks at her, impressed, as the guy backs down.Walking past her he
whispers.
Jd: Nice
one.Good luck.
J:(winking)
I don't need luck.
Jumping in her car, they take off. Anyone who's not racing lines their cars up at the sides, while J, Marco, Edwin & Jared pull up to the starting line.
M: Good
luck trying to beat me Bitch.
J: You
sure as hell won't be wishing me good luck when I beat your ass and chop
your car!
Hitting her subs, she waits for the race to start.
L: I got nuthin on the scanners, we're good to roll I repeat good to roll.Lets race!!!
Hector waves for them to go and J puts her foot on the gas, shooting past Marco.Dropping Edwin back along time ago, and passing Marco, she only has to worry about Jared.
He hits his turbo, and overtakes her.
V: Shit!
She smirks, hiting hers and crossing the finish line before Jared. Getting out of her car she takes the money from Hector, giving it to Mia before smirking at Marco.
J: I'll
be taking MY car now.
Cursing Marco holds up the keys setting them in her hand.
Smirking at him, she turns around throwing the keys to Jordyn.
L: We got cops, cops COPS!
J hops into her car, watching Jordyn fly by in her new Honda S2000.
Dodging
the cops, she pulls up beside Jared, who is about to get boxed in.
J: Follow me!!
Cutting sharply she takes a hidden turn, doubling back to Dom's.She pulls into the driveway, Jared following her still.
J: Nice
driving.
Jd: Thanx.Where'd
you learn to drive like that?
J: Secret(walking
towards the door) You comin' in?
They walk through the door, stepping over Letty, who is playing N64 to get into the living room.
J:(takes
Leon's beer, walking over to Jordyn) How much money am I gunna have to
put into that car?
Jo: Not
much, gotta replace a few things but thats it.
They slap hands and J turns to Jared.
J: Jared,
Jordyn. Jordyn, Jared.
Jd: Nice
to meet you.
Jo: Likewise.
J grabs his hand and leads him back to Leon and Letty.
J: Leon
and Letty.
Ly: Hey
L:(nods
slightly going back to the blonde on his lap)
J:(points
to Vince) The guy playing the guitar is Vince.(catches Mia and Brian going
upstairs) That's Mia and Brian, and the guy with Jordyn is Jesse.
Jd:(pointing
at Dom) Who's that?
J: Thats
Dom.
Dom walks over to them and hugs J, while she smirks at him.
J: I
told you.
D: I
know, I know.
J:(flicks
her eyes to Letty) Go back to yo girl before she kicks my ass.
Standing with her back to the window, she doesn't see Jenny Tran drive
by.She only realizes they're being shot at when something pierces her stomach.
J crumples to the floor, holding her stomach as blood squrits between her
fingers.
D: No,
no!Damnit No!
Ly:(up
the stairs) Brian!Get your ass down here now!!!
Running down the stairs, Brian watches Jordyn,Jesse & Leon kick people out as Letty screams at him again.
J groans and tries to twist herself into a ball, cursing loudly when she
can't.
J: Shitttt(turns
her head opening her eyes to look at Jared) Jared?(pulls herself up slowly)
Are you okay?
V: Damnit
J, lay back down.
J:(glares
at him) Are you okay?
Jd: Fine,
now listen to him(pushes her back lightly, grabbing her hand)
Brian works on stopping the blood, yelling for Mia to bring some towels,
while J herself works on keeping it together.
Jo: Call
an ambulance!
-- Cut To--
The team sits in the waiting room, waiting for J to come out of surgery.
Jd:(to
Dom) Who did it?
D: Jenny
Tran.
Jd:(repeating
him) Jenny Tran. Whos that?
D: Johnny
Tran's sister.
Jd: Why
she shoot up your place?
D: 'Cuz
Brian over there, killed her brother & I gave her cuzin amensia.
J is wheeled out of the OR an IV in her arm.
L: How
is she?
Dr: She'll
be okay, Luckily the bullet missed her intestines but I'm afraid she lost
the baby.
V: What?
Dr: She
was pregnant(shrugz) I don't think she knew.
Jared sits there in shock.She was pregnant.
Jo:(looks
at them all) No one bring this up to her,As far as her concern she was
never pregnant, got it?
A: Got
it.
Je: She
never dated anyone tho.
Ly: And
she would have told me about a one-nighter.
Jo: (curses)
This doesn't leave this room,okay?
A: Okay.
Jo: We
weren't always friends.I haven't even known her 6 months yet. You'll never
guess how we met ethier. She was literally dumped on my doorstep after
being drugged,beaten, raped anything you can think of.
Vince looks at Jordyn with a weird look on his face.
Jo: Why
do you think she's tough? Because of that! What happens when shes alone
with a guy in a locked room? She freaks because of that!(calms down) It
took me 3 days to get her to take kickboxing and a week to convince her
to take conselling.Now she wasn't pregnant!!
She told me she was going to take classes,thinks Jared.Why didn't she take them??
--Memory
of a MSN conversation--
Whitey:
Don't go out with any bums or I'll kick there butts.
J:
Ok...
Whitey:
Don't they will totally take advantage of you.
J:
I'm taking classes, next semester.
Whitey:
I could teach ya.
J:
Aight.
--End--
Mentally kicking himself, he curse loudly. I was supposed to teach her!
--Flashback--
Jd:
I'm leaving
J:
What? Where? Why?
Jd:
I'm going to College.
J:
You promised another year!
Jd:
I know, I'm sorry.
J:(sadly)
Whatever
--End--
L: Whats
wrong with him?
V: (glaring)
Like I know.
Jd: (to
Jordyn) I was supposed to teach her.
Jo: Teach
her what?
Jd: Self
defense.Thats why she didn't take it.
Jo: Lemme
get this straight.You were supposed to teach her but you didn't cuz you
left.
Jd:(miserably)
I told her when I came home that summer I'd teach her(curses) Why didn't
I go home that summer?
Jo: Because
you couldn't handle it.
Jd: Couldn't
handle what?Seeing her heartbreak when I left? Or falling for a 14 yr old?
Jo: You
tried to spare her feelings, Jared.
Jd: But
what did she end up losing? Part of her life.