Hi everyone! RainbowTigersz here. This is my first ever fanfic. I know it's not good, but I'm pretty much new at this, so bear with me please. I'd appreciate polite critisism. I would love to know what I need improving on,and etc so I could learn to become a better writer. Like I put in the summary the couples WILL be RobxStar, BbxRae, and maybe hints of CyxBee if I'm feeling up to it. Although, I shall warn you that there'll also be BBxStar PAST romance. It will be mentioned throughout the story, just to let you know. There will also be a lot of BBxStar friendship (I find their friendship really adorable. And there's not enough of BBxStar friendship when it comes to RobxStar stories!)
Aaaanywaays Please please please be nice I know that not everyone will be nice, I know that there WILL be flamers, but please be nice. Nobody's perfect, this is my first fic and I would appreciate it if people don't flame 's all I need to say er…type.
Disclaimer: I don't own Teen titans. If I did there would be a season six! With more RobStar and BBRae. However, I do own the plot and Eva along with her family :3
Rated: T (anyone can read it .-.)
"Ugh, it's so boring"
The girl beside her glanced down at her best friend. The girl's brunette hair splayed around her head like a messy halo,both of her tanned arms were neatly tucked under her head.
"Maybe if you'd stop lazing around we would've found something to do already, Eva"
Said girl cracked one sky blue eye open clashing with the girl's bright green eyes.
"Maybe if we found something to do I wouldn't be lazing around, Kori"
Kori pouted while Eva chuckled. "Come one Eva there has to be something that we could do". All of a sudden Kori's eyes brightened with an idea. "Hey, maybe we can go surfing I mean, there's barely anyone around here and Komi and Michelle are from a far so we are under super vision. Besides the competition is in a week and we haven't got much practice done"
Eva sat up and blinked. "Wow Kori, that's actually a good idea I guess there's a first for everything" . Kori punched her arm so hard that the brunette fell on the her side, her arms flailing around her trying to stay put. The red head laughed merrily. The atmosphere around them filled with laughter and joy.
Little did they know something horrible was about to happen once they both step in the water.
Once the two children grabbed their surfboards they ran towards the sparkling blue ocean.
"Last one there's a rotten egg!" Eva shouted.
"Which is going to be you" Kori said, boosting up her speed and passing Eva within a few seconds. Both threw themselves on their boards and swam out farther in the sea. Eva turned to Kori, her blue eyes twinkling in mischeif. "Think you can ride the best wave?" Kori's eyes twinked back, "You know I can, the question is..can you?" Eva laughed, "Of course I can, obviously. They don't call us the junior champions for nothing Little Red". Kori grinned, "Then show me Evy".
"Fine, I think I will"
As Eva pushed ahead of her, Kori couldn't help but smile at her best friend. They met when they were 4 years old. They met in kindergarten, having the same dream of being a surfer. Heck,they even had the same birthday, they both shared a love for such odd things as mustard or strawberry juice. They shared so much similarities. They loved to roller skate, to sing kareoke, playing the guitar on their freetime, they loved strawberry cake and ice cream. But most of all, they lived to surf. Surfing was no is their passion, their joy, it's what their hearts live for. If surfing wasn't ever made she doesn't think how long they can go in their lives, they wouldn't know what to do in their lives if surfing wasn't ever brought into this world. It's the only thing that calms their mind and soul….surfing..
Makes them feel free….
Kori snapped out of her thoughts by Eva's laughter. The red head watched, leaning her palms back on her purple surfboard, her hands holding her weight as she leaned back, she couldn't help but laugh along with her best friend.
All of a sudden, things happened to fast.
The children's laughter were cut off by a loud scream. Kori's eyes widened in horror. A large great white shark came and towered over Eva's small frame. She couldn't jump out in time. The shark opened it's large mouth and brought the young girl down into the water.
"EVA!"
Eva's screams echoed through the air.
"KORI! EVA!"
Kori payed no attention. She saw the whole entire scene infront of her eyes. Blood…..There was so much blood….Her insides froze in fear. She couldn't speak…
Blood…..
Tears streaked down her orange face dripping onto her board.
Eva…..
Blood….
Shark…
She broke out into a loud shrilling scream
"EVA!"
All of a sudden Eva popped up her head, her face was pale, her eyes were closed. Kori dived in the water ignoring their older sister's screams for her name and swam as quickly as she can. She thanked god for those swimming lessons. She could see Eva's body, or what's left of her but no shark in sight. A part of Eva's blue surfboard sanked, landing on the coraled ground. Kori wrapped her arms around Eva's bloody waist, ignoring the bone poking at her swam as fast as she could back to the shore,forgetting about her surfboard. By the time she set foot on the sand her and Eva's fathers were already there calling an ambulance. She watched Komi wrap an large towel over Eva's body. Kori looked down at her hands. They were covered in blood.
Eva's blood…
What's going to happen to her? Will she live? Will she die? Will she ever surf again? What will happen now? Will she be too scarred to ever set foot into the water again? Will Eva ever blame her for not saving her in time?
Kori finally snapped out of her thoughts by the sound of her sister's voice calling her name.
"Kori"
"Y-Yes?"
Komi looked at her younger sister's face and saw sadness, pain, anger, and regret. Her purple eyes softened. She knows Kori's blaming herself for what happened, and she didn't have the heart to ask, but she had to.
"What happened back there?.."
"I…we were practicing to surf and…she wanted to ride that big wave to prove her point.."
"What point exactly?"
Kori's eyes downcasted.
"To prove her point that she could ride a wave big enough as I could…then all of a sudden..one minute we were laughing and the next…that big shark came out of nowhere and..took her into the water…"
She heard the sirens off into the distance.
"I'm responsible for her injuries…if I had not challenged her…she would've still have been unharmed…"
"Either way it was bound to happen Kori. To either of you whether she rode the wave or not."
Kori looked up at Michelle. Her big green eyes shined with unshed tears. "Forgive me…for not saving her soon enough".
Before the older brunette could reply back a large ambulance came and carefully setted Eva onto a slinger, gently lifted her up and took her away quickly. Shutting the door two paramedics quickly ran to the passenger and driver seats opening the door and shutting it after they had qotten in.
"Wait! Let me go with you!" Kori cried out.
Komi placed an arm around Kori's shoulder and lead her to the truck where their father and Michelle and Eva's father had started up. "We'll go to the hospital in the truck alright?"
Komi leaded Kori to one of the passenger seats placing her in the car, Michelle following after Komi had gotten in and shut the car door.
The group waited patiently staring nervously at the doors that spelled 'Emergency Room' in bold red letters. Kori paced back and forth, arms behind her back. Left..Right Left Right Look at doors Left Right Left Right Look at doors Left Right Left Right….
Her father had called her mother and Eva's mother notifying them to come to the hospital right away. After what seemed like hours, the head doctor walked out, his hair and mustache grey and his face pale. His clothes were splattered with blood and his hands that were cleanly washed were on his clipboard. Judging from his face expression her eyes widened in realization.
Eva didn't make it..
She was dead….
Before anyone can utter a word Kori screamed. "NO! she can make it! She did make it! don't tell me that she didn't!"
"Kori…"
"You just didn't try hard enough!"
"Kori.."
"You guys suck at your job!"
"KORI ANDERS!"
Kori stopped her rant and looked up at her father.
"Dad…"
He didn't glance in her direction and stared intently into the doctor's brown eyes.
"Tell us…did she make it or not?"
The older man adjusted his small glasses before looking at his clipboard avoiding any eye contact with anyone. Why did his job have to be so hard? It's bad enough how the mothers are crying, but now the children too? He glanced at the small red-headed girl from the corner of his eye. She seems to be the most devastated. The poor thing…he can't blame her for the way she acted so rashly towards him.
"I'm…sorry Mr. and Mrs Stanton…But she did not make it, her body is torn off by bits, her bones are all ripped off from her body, her arms are gone. I'm sorry but she did not make it. It would be a miracle if she did."
The red-headed girl who her father called Kori broke down and cried, her hands covered her eyes and tears rapidly stream down her face and droplets fell on the floor. Her loud sobs filled the hallway. The dark haired girl and the brunette next to her cried in despair. The older mens' eyes downcasted onto the floor, and the mothers' sobs became louder. He really hated his job.
'Eva..why?...why did you have to leave?...After all we've been through together…After everything we've accomplished…We were supposed to go to the competition together…we were going to win as the champions…why did you have to leave?...'
The next few days her funeral took place.I stared down at her gravestone. Hoping this would be some kind of sick joke she was playing and would pop up from this ground yelling 'Got You! And you fell for it!' But one can only hope…
I made a vow that day…A vow that will not be broken…
I vow….
Never to surf again…
Because of surfing she was taken away from me. Because of surfing she died. Because of our dream she's six feet under now…
We should've known that in order for our dream to come true we had to pay the price.
And that price….was Eva….
My name is Kori Anders. I have long red hair and unusual green eyes and tan skin. I am eleven years old. And my best friend Eva Marie Stanton died from a shark attack. I am Kori Anders. And I vow…to never set foot into the water ever again.
So what do you guys think? Good? Bad? Okay so far? I promise you it will get better later on,the beginning of a story is always the suckiest. Please Review, and some advice would be greatly appreciated (I don't know why the hell I'm being so formal) Thanks!
