Hello everyone, this is my first time creating a story, and english is not my native language so please bear with me allright.
Chapter one
Deep inside the forest of hi no kuni, there exist a village of konohagakure no sato where most of the occupants are ninjas/shinobis. This village is created by two clans, The Senju clan reknown for their expertise on ninjutsu and other ninja skills, and the Uchiha clan reknown for their Sharingan which can copy a lot of ninja skills like ninjutsu, taijutsu, and others but they are feared because of their genjutsu because if you are stare into the Sharingan eye of an uchiha you will most likely traped inside a genjutsu.
But enough about that, this isn't a story about how the village of konohagakure were created this is a story about a boy who became a pariah of konohagakure because of a burden he never ask to bear. This is the story of a seven years old Naruto Uzumaki who is being chased by an angry mob because he stole an apple, now you might ask why Naruto stole an apple that is because when Naruto was five he was kicked out of the orphanage and nobody is willing to help the pariah of the village but there is only two people who always try to help Naruto whenever he needs it, they are the Ichiraku family Teuchi and his daughter Ayame who sold Naruto their ramen and sometimes they gave him ramen for free, but Naruto realizes that it is not healthy to eat ramen everyday thus is why he stole an apple this is not his first time he stole something from someone before he stole an apple he already manage to steal a few vegetables inside a store, but when he grab an apple the store owner saw naruto ransacking his veggies he immidiately shout for help and chase Naruto away, thus leading us to the current situation where Naruto is running away from a mob of angry people.
'SHIT,SHIT,SHIT I NEVER THOUGHT HE WILL SEE ME WHEN I GRAB THAT APPLE' thought Naruto.
"Well i did warned you when you are going to grab that apple" the voice of Kurama inside of Naruto's head.
'NOT HELPING KURAMA!' naruto thought franticaly.
"well why don't you create a kage bunshin to attract those mob while you hide at an alleyway?" kurama replied.
'why didn't i think of that?!' Naruto thought and facepalming while running.
"that is because you're an idiot" kurama said.
'love you too Kurama' naruto replied.
'Kage bunshin no jutsu' Naruto thought, then a perfect replica of naruto appear beside him.
"you know what to do?" Naruto asked, the clone of naruto nod then it takes off to a different direction from where Naruto is heading while laughing his off automaticaly drawing all the attention to it.
When the mob chased the clone of Naruto, the original went into hiding, after 5 minutes of hiding Naruto went out from his hiding spot.
"that was close" Naruto sigh.
"no shit" kurama said,
"this reminds me of the time when i first met you" Naruto said.
Flashback 2 years ago
"i'm...hungry..." said a five years old Naruto who is currently starving.
"Need...food...he...l...p..." then he fainted.
inside Naruto's mind
'where am i? this place looks like a sewer' thought Naruto while looking at his surrounding.
"come here brat" a voice said from somewhere.
"hmm..who is that?" Naruto said then he started to follow where the voice came from, when Naruto arrived he saw a massive gate. "that is one big gate... i just hope there will be no weird wariors wearing metal armor and dragons came out of that gate if i decided to open it."
"come closer brat" the voice said.
'should i or should i not? decisions, decisons...meh i got nothing to lose.' naruto mused. As he went closer to the gate then suddenly...BAM! a giant claw tried to strike Naruto from behind the gate.
"OH MY GOD THERE IS A DRAGON BEHIND THAT GATE!" Naruto shouted.
"I'M NOT A DRAGON YOU BRAT!" the voice shouted. Then Naruto look closely for what creature is living behind the gate.
"You're a huge dog?" Naruto ask because what he saw is a huge canine creature with two rabbit ears and nine tails swaying behind it.
the suspected dog have a huge tickmark on it's forehead "I'M A FOX YOU MORON!" the now known fox shouted.
"WHAT KIND OF FOX HAS RABBIT EAR!?" Naruto shouted back.
"WELL I HAVE YOU STUPID APE!" the fox shouted back.
"WHAT DID YOU SAY YOU FURBALL?!" Naruto shouted back, and thus began a long arguments beetween a giant fox and a five years old boy.
"uhh.. guys not trying to intrude your bickering but we need to keep the story moving"
"SHUT UP YOU SHITTY AUTHOR!" both Naruto and the fox yelled at the same time.
"ok.." i said and start sitting at a corner "why are they so mean?..."
"bah... stupid apes. Anyway you need to start eating your body barely had any strength left" the fox said.
"ok.. but what can i eat when nobody is willing to give and sell something to me?" Naruto ask.
"what do you mean by that? aren't you a royalty?" the fox ask back.
"what is royalty?" Naruto ask back.
"stupid ape, you are really dumb you know" the fox said.
"HEY! you can't know a lot of things when nobody is willing to taught you anything..." Naruto said.
the fox only look at naruto, then it sigh " A royalty is someone who came from a noble clan or family"
"oh you mean like those weird people with white eyes and the other weird people with red eyes?" Naruto ask.
"yes the hyuuga are weird and they have lavender eyes not white while those cursed uchiha have red eyes" the fox said.
"right so you mean i came from a noble clan? yeah right even i know that is just a lie" Naruto said while glaring at the fox.
"your father is the fourth hokage" the fox said.
"you're kidding me right?" Naruto ask.
"Hell no, i mean who else in this damned vilage have a tanned skin, blonde hair, and blue eyes?" the fox ask back.
Naruto eyes widen when he heard the description of fourth hokage.
"WHAAAAAATTTTT?!" Naruto shouted.
"sheesh kid you are really loud you know that right?" the fox said then sweatdrop when Naruto increased the volume of his shout.
"YOU MEAN I'M THE SON OF YONDAIME AND EVERYONE TREATS ME LIKE DIRT EVERY SINGLE DAY SINCE THE DAY I WAS BORN?!" Naruto yelled/ask at the same time.
"well to be honest that old monkey told the council to keep it a secret from the villagers but he announce that i'm sealed inside of you " the fox said.
"old monkey? you mean the third hokage?" Naruto ask.
"yeah,him" the fox said.
"that old fart is lying to everyone and me this whole time? and he told everyone that you were sealed inside of me?" naruto ask.
"yep, but i'm gonna be honest with you when i attacked this vilage i was controled by someone then your father splited my power into two he sealed me into you, and sealed my other into himself thus making both of you jinchuuriki before he dies with your mother" the fox said.
"wait my mother? and what is a jinchuuriki?" naruto asks.
"yes your mother Kushina Uzumaki the woman who always shove a chain into my body and jinchuuriki is a human who have a tailed beast like me sealed inside of them. there are 9 tailed beast ichibi, niibi, sanbi, yonbi, gobi, rokubi, nanabi, hachibi, and me the kyuubi you get what i'm saying?" the fox explained.
"so you mean there are more people who have to deal with annoying giant animals with tails inside of us?" Naruto ask.
"The only one annoying is you stupid ape" the fox said with a giant tickmark on it's forehead and twitching eyebrow.
"okay then" naruto said.
"now begone there are people trying to wake you up" the fox said.
"huh?" the only thing naruto can said before he wwas taken out of his mindscape.
outside of Naruto mindscape.
Naruto slowly open his eyes.
"Dad he is waking up!" a female voice said.
"hey kid are you allright?" an eldery voice said.
STOP.
Well this is the end of the first chapter, tell me what you think about this and i only tolerate review and criticism to better my story not people raging about why they hate my story.
This is Douche1234 signing out.