Hey guys this is my first and new fanfic please review as you finish reading I need to know what to fix so I can start writing better.. because when I grow up I want to be a movie director..that means I have to write scripts..so yea..
~note I do not own Spiral if I did I would put romance in that anime/manga (sorry for poor English grammar)
"Narumi" the girl with the brown braided hair screamed, "wait for me!" she hollered. She has been lost in thought again; it's actually been happening really often these few days, but every time she gets lost in thought she thinks of Narumi, she doesn't know why, yet.
"Well hurry up I'm not going to wait forever" he rolled his eyes and kept walking.
She ran towards him and suddenly froze while trying to reach his hand' why..wh..wha-whats going on? was I just reaching for his hand?' she thought. Narumi turned around with an annoyed and a bit of concerned face, "what's wrong?" his brown eyes met her's. but she quickly turned away with a light blush on her cheeks. She then knew why she was acting that way.. she had fallen in love with him.
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Hiyono POV
That night I went home hoping he didn't notice I was blushing crazily every time he looked at me. I went to the restroom and took a bath. I don't know how but when I woke up I was still in the bath.. I don't remember ever getting out or falling sleep;anyways the water was freezing cold since it was winter. "Achooo!" I sneezed as I started to get up and out of the bath. I then almost fell; I felt dizzy I gently touched my forehead and groaned "ARGH! I have a fever!" I slowly got out carefully concentrated on my movement to be sure not to fall, I got dressed in my purple, pinkish pajamas and went to bed.
'I should probably confess since I know how I feel about him' I thought 'I know! I will ask him to go shopping with me or a movie, or just tell it to him straight..but tomorrow when I feel better' I grinned and fell asleep.
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Narumi POV
I woke up, and started to think of today which was a case me and Hyiono had to solve its a murder ...of course... I quickly brushed my teeth, got dressed, and went to the kitchen to cook breakfast, as usual I went to wake up my sister, but she wasn't there 'probably left early' I thought. I quickly ate my break was which was cooked perfectly..as usual.. and headed to school.
It was a bit cloudy, the snow was falling gently..there wasn't any wind and the breeze was perfect for a great start of the day. I hurried to school since I was walking slow, because it seemed so relaxing outside I got distracted. I stopped when I noticed Hyiono wasn't waiting for me at the entrance of the school, I quickly jumped into conclusion that one of the Blade Children had kidnapped her again...but I then I thought maybe she came late or something happened that she couldn't wait for me. I grabbed my phone out of my pocket and called her at least 5 times. No answer. I was getting nervous calling over and over and thought the worst that could have happened to her, but I still tried to deny it. I then switched into texting mode 'Hyiono where are you? are you okay? answer your phone' I quickly sent the text before the bell rang. That hour felt like days until it finally rang. I rushed to my locker as fast as possible, and the it was a txt from Hyiono. I quickly pushed the open/read button.
'This is Hyiono's mother, you must be her friend the one who she always hangs out with. I'm sorry she couldn't come to school today she's sick with a high fever. you can come and check on her if you want'
Then I felt so much more relieved that it wasn't a txt on ' HELP! or' If you want her find us' kind of message. 'thank you' I texted back.
OMG IM SOOOOO SORRY I KNOW I MISSPELLED HIYONOS NAME IM SOOOO SORRRY ABOUT THAT
I DIDNT PAY ATTENTION SINCE I DIDNT HAVE TIME TO EDIT IT AND I
KINDA JUST POSTED IT JUST LIKE THAT BECASUE I FORGOT TO EDIT
AND MY FAMILY CAME (ALL OF THEM) ANND I COUDNT EDIT IT
WELL...TUNE IN TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! FIND OUT
WHAT HAPPENS AT HIYONOS HOUSE WHEN NARUMI COMES OVER