This is our first fanfiction (we switch writing every

paragraph or so) and were going to rate it for peoples

15 and up. the beginning is boring and stupid but once we

enter the strip club in yu-gi-oh world you'll be hooked.

we already lost our first draft once (it's somewhere at

sarah's house, i hope her parents don't find it), but this

time we added more detail, the first draft didn't have

enough (*snows inside bathroom* *chokes on snow*

*kenshin saves annette*) anyways, this story is has

everything, comidity, romace, action, and popular anime

characters from shows like inu yasha, rurunio kenshin,

pokemon, yu-gi-oh, yu yu hakusho, trigun, and FLCL (fooly

cooly).