This is my first ever fanfic

the story is based in england because am obviously english and don't know much about the US

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Waking up on the rise of the early sunshine in the Queens hotel in New York, 25 years old Danny Messer looked out to the beautiful sight of New York City. He thought about what a happy life he has had over the past year; he had graduated from one of the top universities in England and has managed to secure himself a job as a paediatrician in one of the best hospitals in London. He had always seen himself as the lucky one even though his parents tries as much as possible to spoil him, he has made his own way in life by getting himself different jobs before, during after college; this has earn him some cash true that – although he didn't need it. Now, he is in New York on a holiday that his parents had forced on him because apparently, they think he's been working too much as deserves a break. Being an only child sometimes mean that he has to make sure that both his parents are happy about his decision as they always want what's best for him.

Lindsay Monroe has never been a woman of many words; originally from Bozeman, Montana, her parents had moved her and her siblings to England when she was just a year old and they have live there ever since, with occasional visits to their other family members around the world. She had graduated from the University of the City of London with a PHD degree in human biology.

Lindsay was getting bored of the hotel room as it is getting dark- so she decided to take a walk around the hotel or even go to the bar later on.

Danny watch as people took to the dance floor getting all hyped up. Suddenly, he caught sight of a mystery woman that was already giving him goose pimples that mad him shiver. She was blonde with dark pool eyes - that made him tremble, about 5.4 ft tall and heading in the direction of the bar.

Lindsay walked to the bar and the attention of a handsome, sexy, and puzzling guy. 'Wow!' she thought. He was about 6 ft tall with a muscular body and sky blue eyes that made her stare at him more.

'Calm down' Danny thought to him, 'it's only a girl' he watched in astonishment as she sat at the bar and ordered orange juice.

'Why is this strange guy staring at me?' Lindsay thought as Danny approached her.

'Hi!' Danny said bluntly

'Hello!' replied Lindsay

'So he/she's English' they both thought

'You stay at the hotel?' Danny asked

'Yeah' Lindsay said shyly; she had never been the lucky one when it comes to guy, although she has had a couple in the past, it didn't work out and they never go beyond kisses because she has been too focused on her studies that she never allowed herself a social life.

Distracted from her thoughts, Lindsay heard Danny say, 'so you wanna dance?'

'Yeah' she replied swiftly.

'What's with this feeling?' Danny thought 'a complete stranger is making me loose my mind'

After dancing for a few moments, Lindsay decided it was time she left as it was getting past 10pm and since she was an early riser and leaving back for England the next evening. She was nervous and afraid of letting go of the stranger that had brightened up her day.

Just as Lindsay was breaking off from him to go, he decided that he should go as well. The two walked together to the elevator- both feeling apprehensive of what they're feeling.

Lindsay didn't understand why this strange man made her nervous; she was beginning to feel uncomfortable around and now they're together in the elevator.

'Oh man!' Danny said loudly and moved in close to Lindsay's face; she met him half way and all of a sudden, they're wrapped in each other with their tongues in each other's throats. Few moments later, Danny broke off the kiss to save them the embarrassment as the elevator approached their location.

Sliding the card into the door, Danny opened the door with Lindsay just a step behind him, he grabbed her and together, they landed on the king size bed of the hotel room. After minutes of kisses and caressing, they were both filled with pleasure before Danny broke off again to get protection from a near by drawer.

Lindsay thought to herself – 'should I really do this?' after all she's a 24 years old woman and still a virgin. 'Maybe this is the time, after all it's about time I grown up and become a real woman' she thought, not knowing that she had unconsciously said in out loud.

'You okay?' Danny asked when he notices that she was stiffening

'You seem cold' he said to her

'Am fine' she said with tears making way out of her eyes; she was really nervous

'I am really sorry, don't know why am being like this' she replied again

After minutes of more kisses and caress, Danny entered her and noticed the tears now rolling down her face. 'O my God' he said and hesitated

'What, is something wrong?' she asked him

'You could have told me you were a virgin' he said culpably

'And what difference would it have made?'

'I'd have been more careful' he said

'Well, there's not much we could do about that now' she told him

'Erm…I guess you're right'

With that, they continued the night together, filled with passion and an agreement of no strings attached.

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