Bling Bling Island 8:45
"Sir, we believe we know how to get Susan Test to go on a date with you" Bling Bling's head henchman said while walking down the hallway on his bosses left. "No more weapons! Johnny always stops me!" he yelled throwing his fist into the air. "Well sir, we've been thinking about that, you see we thought that if Johnny Test was dead he couldn't stop you," another henchman said coming up on Bling Bling's right. Bling Bling stopped dead in his tracks and turned to his henchmen with an evil smile. "This has to be the greatest idea you have ever brought me. We will not rest until we have created a weapon that is capable of destroying that meddling Johnny Test!" he cried raising his fist and shaking it at the ceiling.
Meanwhile at the Test house….
"Johnny, can you come in here," Susan yelled out the lab door and into Johnny's room. His heart sped up like it did every time she called his name or spoke to him. His stomach twisted into a knot as he stepped through the doorway and laid eyes on his sister with a star barrette in her hair. Yes he, Johnny Test, was in love with his sister Susan Test. He took a deep breath in through his nose to calm his shaking nerves and to get a smell of her amazing perfume. He couldn't help but stare as he walked up behind her and admired her silently. His eyes roamed from the top of her star shaped hair pen to the straight red mane that fell to the small of her back to her square glasses that he thought shaped her face perfectly. He walked up behind her back and tapped her on the shoulder making her turn around with a smile.
"Oh hey, Johnny, we just needed you to settle a dispute for me and Mary," she said "Ok then what is it?" Johnny asked feeling his heart beat speed up and his palms start to sweat. "We were just wondering what your reason behind defeating Eugene. I say it's because you like to beat him because you're competitive, Mary says it's because we give you something in return. Could you please tell us who is right?" Susan said while cleaning a smudge off her glasses. "You're both wrong, it's because I love you," he said while walking back toward the door of the lab and walked out. 'If only you knew how much of that is true,' he thought as he crossed the thresh hold into his room.
A/N Yea I've decided to re write this story. Same basic idea different words. I think it's better but let me know.