Ok I've improved this chapter. Hope you enjoy it!, THX!
Prologue
The ground of planet New Namek shook lightly. The trees dropped their blue leaves on the ground. Nameks looking in the sky dropped their garden equipment and stared up into the clear blue sky at a ship as it streaked across the sky going faster then the speed of sound.
The spacecraft flew from the sky, flame beating its hull as it hurtled toward the ground. The ship seemed to slow it's descent slightly a few seconds before it hit the brown earth, though it had obviously it had not slowed enough, for it hit with full force sending noise loud beyond reason to hit the Namek's ears.
Cringing from the sound the Nameks looked at where the ship had hit. Cautiously the men began crowded around the crater the craft had made, keeping the women and children back.
The ship was of odd design; it was round everywhere but at the end was square and had two large engines. It wasn't very big some of the Nameks noted, just enough for one person about Namek size. Though the crater was certainly large enough for several hundred Nameks to fit in.
Some Nameks began charging blasts of ki energy to ready themselves in case what the thing in the ship turned out to be hostile. They had been attacked enough to know that anything was possible, and this time Goku son of Bardock would not be here to save them.
The front of ship rolled to face the "front" of the ship up. The sides of it seemed to grow a line. It started at the bottom and crept its way up to the top. The line turned from dark black to an incredibly bright yellow. The "door" opened with a "hiss" and a figure emerged. It stayed in the shadow of the ship's walls for a second, but then it walked without hesitation out into the sunlight.
One of the younger Nameks, gasped, "Freiza!"
The figure looked up and grinned as all of the Namek's blasts suddenly rained down upon him.
Sorry to leave you hanging but the next chapter is up. Hope you like it! -Rowol
Prologue
The ground of planet New Namek shook lightly. The trees dropped their blue leaves on the ground. Nameks looking in the sky dropped their garden equipment and stared up into the clear blue sky at a ship as it streaked across the sky going faster then the speed of sound.
The spacecraft flew from the sky, flame beating its hull as it hurtled toward the ground. The ship seemed to slow it's descent slightly a few seconds before it hit the brown earth, though it had obviously it had not slowed enough, for it hit with full force sending noise loud beyond reason to hit the Namek's ears.
Cringing from the sound the Nameks looked at where the ship had hit. Cautiously the men began crowded around the crater the craft had made, keeping the women and children back.
The ship was of odd design; it was round everywhere but at the end was square and had two large engines. It wasn't very big some of the Nameks noted, just enough for one person about Namek size. Though the crater was certainly large enough for several hundred Nameks to fit in.
Some Nameks began charging blasts of ki energy to ready themselves in case what the thing in the ship turned out to be hostile. They had been attacked enough to know that anything was possible, and this time Goku son of Bardock would not be here to save them.
The front of ship rolled to face the "front" of the ship up. The sides of it seemed to grow a line. It started at the bottom and crept its way up to the top. The line turned from dark black to an incredibly bright yellow. The "door" opened with a "hiss" and a figure emerged. It stayed in the shadow of the ship's walls for a second, but then it walked without hesitation out into the sunlight.
One of the younger Nameks, gasped, "Freiza!"
The figure looked up and grinned as all of the Namek's blasts suddenly rained down upon him.
Sorry to leave you hanging but the next chapter is up. Hope you like it! -Rowol