Lorelai and Max's Engagement party gone wrong

Time period: Rory and Dean are sitting on the bench in the square after Lane leaves

Dean- hey are you ok?

Rory- I'm just kind of tired I think I'm going to go get a coffee at Luke's then head home, I've had a long day

Dean- Do you want me to go with you?

Rory- no that's ok I need to talk to Luke alone

Dean- ok I'll see you tomorrow sleep well sweetie he kisses her

Rory- I will good night

Rory heads to Luke's

At Luke's

Luke- Hey Rory

Rory- Hey Luke

Luke- hey are you ok, why aren't you at your mom's party? Where's Dean?

Rory- Dean's still out there, I'm just kind of tired, I've had a long day; I thought some coffee might do me good

Luke- ok he pours her some coffee

Rory- hey can I talk to you?

Luke- yea sure what's going on?

Rory- I don't want my mom to get married, I mean that didn't sound like the way I wanted it to come out, I mean I want her to get married some day: I just don't want her to marry Max and not to any other guy: I think you're the one: I know she like's you a lot and I just don't understand why she won't give you a change, you are my father figure. I want a step- dad and I want it to be you! You're the only man that I want to be in our lives forever.

Rory- even thought I know that I'm always going to have Christopher, Richard, Jackson, Michelle,, Kirk, and Andrew, and Taylor in our lives but I know that you're the one that makes mom happy and the who loves her and takes care of us.

Luke- I would be honored to be your step- father that means a lot to me

Rory- thanks Luke

Rory- ok well I'm going to head home

Luke- ok you want me to walk you home so you don't have to walk alone at night by yourself?

Rory- no that's ok thanks thought I just need to clear my head I'll be fine

Luke- ok see you in the morning

Rory- ok

Back in the square

Lorelai- hey Dean have you seen Rory anywhere?

Dean- yea she was going to go to Luke's

Lorelai- thanks

Lorelai- heads to Luke's

At Luke's

Lorelai- hey have you seen Rory?

Luke- yea she just left she said she was tired so she was heading home

Lorelai- yea I guess she is, she had had a long day, was she ok?

Luke- yea I think she will be just let her have some time and space she needed to clear her head

Lorelai- Clear her head? Clear her head about what?

Luke- that's between you and her

Lorelai- did she say something to you

Luke- once again that's between you and her I am staying out of it

Lorelai- ok I guess I'm going to go find her to make sure she's ok

Luke- ok good idea

Lorelai- ok see you tomorrow

Luke- ok

Lorelai- heads home

Scene cut crapshack

Lorelai- RORY…. are you here she calls

Lorelai knocks on Rory's door and opens it

Lorelai- here you are

Rory- here I am

Lorelai- what's going on sweetie?

Rory- I don't want to talk to you right now can you please just leave me alone

Lorelai- Rory please talk to me

Rory- hide's her head under her pillow

Rory-I don't want you to get married, why won't you give him a chance he loves you

Lorelai-you don't want me to marry Max? I thought you liked Max and give who a chance? Who loves me more than Max?

Rory- Luke

Lorelai- thinks her herself did she just say who I thought she just said?

Lorelai- Luke does not love me we are friends that's it

Rory- he wants to be my step-father and I want to be his step-daughter he's the only man I want to be in our lives forever. He loves you and he's good enough for you mom and you know it. You know he make's both of us happy. I don't want to be left out, I was feeling left out every time you ever dated a guy, the only guy who I don't feel leaves me out is Luke. You even know that he loves me as his own daughter.

Lorelai- I'm sorry I made you feel that way sweetie you know you come first in my life I love you so much baby girl and I know Luke loves us and I will give him a chance sweetie

Lorelai- do you want to come back to the party?

Rory- NO break it off with Max tonight, I don't want you seeing him anymore

Lorelai- hunnie did Max do or say something to you that you're not telling me?

Rory- NOO I just know that he doesn't like Dean

Lorelai- ok I'll be right back

Lorelai goes back out into the square and gets to the microphone

Lorelai- excuse me everyone can I have your attention

The town goes silent

Lorelai- this is really hard for me to say right now but this engagement has been called off because I am in love with someone else I'm sorry Max I can't marry you, so if everyone would just please go and take your presents and the extra food and just leave that would be great thanks for coming

Lorelai -goes to the diner she grabs Luke and starts kissing him

Luke kisses her back

Luke- this is the happiest night in my life I've waited for you

Lorelai- smiles and looks him in the eye

They start to kiss more

Lorelai-I'm sorry come here

They kiss more

Luke holds her waist

Luke- I love you

Lorelai- I love you more

Luke- I finally got my girl

Lorelai- I have to remember to thank my daughter when I get home she was right about everything

Luke- I know come here he kisses her

Lorelai- so I should be getting home I'll meet you at my house later?

Luke- yep I'll be there after I close up

Lorelai- gets home

Lorelai- Rory wakeup

Rory- what, what is it?

Lorelai- I kissed Luke

Rory-oh my god no way when!

Lorelai- just a little while ago at the diner!

Rory- aww mom I'm so happy for you, finally you and Luke are together, I'm, assuming you broke it off with Max?

Lorelai- I did in front of the entire town you know you were right thank you kid she gives Rory a hug

Rory- your welcome

Lorelai- ok get some sleep Luke is coming over after I love you

Rory- I love you too