Author's note: First of, I wanted to say that I in no way one any of these brilliant people, but they all came from the mind o

Author's note: First of, I wanted to say that I in no way one any of these brilliant people, but they all came from the mind of C.S. Lewis.

This is my first story, so please go a little easy, and unless I get review, I don't know if anyone one is reading it, so I might not write anymore. So read AND review!

Chapter 1

Susan was crying. It wasn't visible on the outside, but on the inside she was weeping. Aslan told her and Peter they would never come back to Narnia. Ever. Susan never heard what Caspian was saying to all the people of Narnia, she was to busy thinking of how sad she'd be to leave him and the people she had come to love so much.

Just then, she heard Peter say, "We'll go." "We will?" Edmund responded in disbelief. "Our time here is up," he said, "We're not needed here anymore anyway," he finished handing Caspian his sword. Caspian stared at him in disbelief and then grasped it firmly saying, "I will look after it until you come back," he said. Right then and there, Susan mustered up enough courage to speak, saying, "That's just it, we're not coming back," she said teary-eyed. Caspian caught her glance and stared at her with sadness in his eyes.

Peter, Lucy and Edmund all went to say goodbye to Glenstorm, Trumpkin, and Doctor Cornelius. Susan walked over to Caspian to say goodbye. Finally, Susan said, "I'm glad I came back." Caspian, almost crying, said, "I only wish we had more time together." "It would have never worked out anyway," Susan lied. "Why not?" said Caspian, confused.

"I'm 1300 hundred years older than you," she said, trying to make herself feel better by joking. Sadly, she started to walk away, when on an impulse, she ran back to Caspian and kissed him. She finally withdrew from his embrace and went to stand with her siblings.

One by one, Edmund, Lucy, Susan and Peter all turned to leave. After Edmund and Lucy had gone through, and Susan was about to, the door twisted back into its original shape. All eyes turned to Aslan. "It is not yet your time." He said meekly. "But I thought you said we were never to go back," Susan questioned. "You will not, for you are not leave it," Aslan said , smiling. "But what about Ed and Lu?" Peter spoke up. "They have one more lesson to learn in your world before they may join you." "Oh," Peter said quickly.

Susan and Peter looked into each others eyes and smiled, then Susan looked in Caspian and smiled once more. They were never to leave, Susan thought, and Edmund and Lucy will join us soon. She smiled greatly, thankful towards the great lion.

Alright, I wanted to tell you all that if I don't get review, I don't know if anyone is reading it, so I might not post again. And once again, read AND review!