disclaimer: i don't own buffy, you don't own buffy, some day we'll all get
over ourselves.
Ok, this is my first fic, so could you all be extra nice and review it for me? Even if it's just a flame, I'd really like to know what you people thought. Now, on to the story!!
Before the Demon's Awakening
both:
The passion and intensity rose, but the innocence of the kiss remained as the gentle explorations of their mouths continued.
her:
His lips were soft and cool against her skin, and she loved the feel of his mouth on her neck. She adored his teeth, no his fangs. She loved that she had a boyfriend with fangs, it sounded so... she didn't know, but she liked it! He always teased her with his fangs because they both knew what a struggle it was for him not to bite, but she urged him on anyways. They always loved a challenge. she loved how he knew exactly what to do(although that comes from being around for almost 200 years), and when he moved his tongue over her skin, over her neck, she just....melted.
him:
For someone who acted so tough she could be so soft, so delicious, so...
and he meant delicious. He loved the taste of her skin, and her neck was so soft, and smooth, not to mention warm; he almost bit down, but caught himself at the last moment, it wouldn't do for his girlfriend to be in pain, ever. He lost himself in her, she was always so warm, that no matter how cold he was, he was like her, alive. He could almost hear the blood in his ears, could feel the warmth from his chest, almost, but it was pretty damn close.And all thanks to her.
both:
She ran her fingers through his hair, and moved her hands down his arms. The caress was gentle but urging and he understood. They stood slowly and she broke the kiss. She took his hand and led him over to the bed. She sat down and gazed alluringly at him, a coy smile playing on her lips. He growled low in his throat as he lay beside her. They kissed once more, and the world was bliss, as their passion rose again.
***
In the dark, the only sounds that could be heard were her soft breathing, and the gentle beating of her heart.
review, please!!!!! I really need some feedback, it took me months of decision to post this
and now that i have, i'd really appreciate your opinions, or you could e- mail me, you know. *hint, hint*
ok, let me know if I should post more stories,bye til later ^_^
Ok, this is my first fic, so could you all be extra nice and review it for me? Even if it's just a flame, I'd really like to know what you people thought. Now, on to the story!!
Before the Demon's Awakening
both:
The passion and intensity rose, but the innocence of the kiss remained as the gentle explorations of their mouths continued.
her:
His lips were soft and cool against her skin, and she loved the feel of his mouth on her neck. She adored his teeth, no his fangs. She loved that she had a boyfriend with fangs, it sounded so... she didn't know, but she liked it! He always teased her with his fangs because they both knew what a struggle it was for him not to bite, but she urged him on anyways. They always loved a challenge. she loved how he knew exactly what to do(although that comes from being around for almost 200 years), and when he moved his tongue over her skin, over her neck, she just....melted.
him:
For someone who acted so tough she could be so soft, so delicious, so...
and he meant delicious. He loved the taste of her skin, and her neck was so soft, and smooth, not to mention warm; he almost bit down, but caught himself at the last moment, it wouldn't do for his girlfriend to be in pain, ever. He lost himself in her, she was always so warm, that no matter how cold he was, he was like her, alive. He could almost hear the blood in his ears, could feel the warmth from his chest, almost, but it was pretty damn close.And all thanks to her.
both:
She ran her fingers through his hair, and moved her hands down his arms. The caress was gentle but urging and he understood. They stood slowly and she broke the kiss. She took his hand and led him over to the bed. She sat down and gazed alluringly at him, a coy smile playing on her lips. He growled low in his throat as he lay beside her. They kissed once more, and the world was bliss, as their passion rose again.
***
In the dark, the only sounds that could be heard were her soft breathing, and the gentle beating of her heart.
review, please!!!!! I really need some feedback, it took me months of decision to post this
and now that i have, i'd really appreciate your opinions, or you could e- mail me, you know. *hint, hint*
ok, let me know if I should post more stories,bye til later ^_^