This is my very first Harry Potter Fan fic so any critisism is welcomed please read and Review.
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Chapter one:
Silence pierced the hall as the spectators watched on as their chosen one fought the most powerful wizard alive. "So it all comes down to this doesn't it?" said Harry. "Does the wand in your hand know that it's last owner was disarmed? Because if it does... I am the true master of the elder wand." The enchanted sky lit up above as the sun began to rise casting the two in a red gold glow. Harry re-caught the dark lords eye in time to hear him screech "Avarda Kadavra", simutaniously saying "Expelliarmus" himself in the hope to save himself one last time from the man stood before him. Sparks flew in all directions as the two created a perfect circle in the dirt and rubble at their feet. Eyes widened in fear for their saviors life, already so many lives had been lost at the hands of the Dark lord. The hall was filled with the sound of their struggles and the crackling of the two spells after they connected together with an almighty boom. Minutes that felt like hours passed by when finally the Dark lord fell. Roars of applause and praise filled the great hall momentarily drowning out all the depression from moments before. The Dark Lord to hurt no more. People ran forward to congradulate and thank their saviour when a bright green light formed at Voldemorts chest. "What in the name of merlins saggy y fronts is that" pointed Ron at the hovering light. All eyes trained on to the mysterious light not knowing what to do or why it's there. When all of a sudden the great hall darkened as all the candles were extinguished. "He's still alive." Cried Ron causing all eyes to turn to him.
"What?" Cried back Harry "Thats impossible Ron you know it is, we got all the Horcruxes there's no way for him to get back." Wipping the sweat off his brow with his sleeve he began to walk towards Ron to make him see sence when a tiny voice said "Look," All eyes turned to follow Hermiones finger "It's moving" Slowly Harry moved back to his place in the circle with his head cocked slightly to the right. He made his way closer to the source of the light. "Harry, no dont get closer to that thing." Cried Ginny with a tint of panic in her voice. She watched as the boy she loved made his way closer to the light until suddenly the circle he and voldemort had created lit up casting a bright red cage around him keeping him in and everyone else out and threw anyone in its vacinity out causing alot of people to fall on their neighbours. "HARRY" Cried many of the crowd until they heard "I'm ok is everyone else" The light cage began to dim so that the only evidence that it existed was the dim red glow in the engraved circles circumference. "Harry come on lets get out of here it doesn't feel right" said Ron as he made his way to grab Harrys arm but as he reached the circle a powerful blast hit him right in the chest causing him to fly straight into Seamus who was standing a few feet behind him. "RON" cried his family and friends "Harry, HARRY the light" everyone follwed his finger to see the light crash straight into Harrys chest. Silence pierced the early morning air as everyone stood in shock as Harry swayed on the spot. Ginny broke the silence with a piecing scream as she ran straight for the circle. "GINNY NOOOOOO" Cried Ron. "THE BARRIER!" but it just so happened that the barrier didnt effect her, she ran straight into Harry and held him in her arms. "Harry are you ok?" Whispered Ginny checking Harry's face for any sign of pain.
"I, I, I feel funny" Stuttered Harry and then he passed out.
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