A/N sorry about that I am new to this website, I think I understand now, so I fixing chapter 1 now.
Disclaimer I don't own PJO or HoO Rick Riordan does.
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Before there were life, planets, stars, even galaxies there was only chaos. A being that is in constant slumber, but wields tremendous power that he/she can do what he/she desires. It slept for millions years, but one day she/he awaken. At their waking, shockwaves echo as the being began to stir. The being took a while to fully awaken and once they had they saw were they were. They felt nothing, saw nothing, and know nothing what they woken up to.
For a unknown time they spent searching something, anything that isn't the constant nothingness in black. As they spent searching something new developed in them. It began as something small and insignificant they ignored it, but grew as time went by. This feeling that being felt was sadness, but he/she has no prior knowledge or experience of it. They held this feeling so long that it soon will explode one day. She/he has starting to feel worse as time went by they finally couldn't hold it any more they cried.
Amiss in their crying the power within them was released chaotically all around them. In time their outburst subsided they looked around themselves. What they saw brought them tears, instead of tears of sadness these tears are now full of joy. The things they saw were balls of light in many strange colors. Once they have finish admiring the bright lights. They have finally notice what they appear, for so long they were in complete darkness they have never seen their own body. They see pair limbs protruding outwards and attached to the ends of the limbs were hands and attached those were fingers. They looked downward and saw another pair of limbs seemingly holding them in place.
They moved one of their limb beside them towards moved that hand around their body, feeling what they couldn't see. They started upwards and felt something on top it was soft. They moved downward slow and gently to explore everything. They explored all around their body and felt everything they could. They found nothing else around, but only felt a constant feeling of smoothness. She/he returned their gaze to the spheres of light, they grew curious and they step forward to the spheres. They reached out towards them, they hold the sphere in their hands. The sphere emitted warmth in their hands. Their hands slowly tighten around it and it suddenly burst by their hands tightening, so much.
The destroyed sphere left residue in a powdering dust. The being was surprise by the sudden destruction of the sphere. She/he were curious of the new substance left by destroyed gathered around the substance in one of their palm of hand. They notice different materials in variety of forms. Some were in liquid, solid, gas, and a heated gas form which make up most of the new materials. The materials were rock, water, and variety of plumes of smoke. They mixed the materials, in no order, hoping something new occurs. As they finish combing the materials, another sphere has made. This new sphere was different it was not glowing or released warm. They looked around them and saw many orbs of light. For the first time since their awaking.
They smiled.
A/N So I finished chapter 1 hoped you liked it