Hello! This is dedicated to anyone who wanted to see a fic like this. Anyway, it's spring break and I felt like making a fic that interested me. I lack detail but bare with me and tell me how to improve. I could be wrong about the detail part but I dunno! Anyway, here goes.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto.
Chapter one: Prologue.
Naruto walked along a path towards a bridge in his home village. The blonde had decided to look around his village after his breakfast. He walked to the middle of the bridge, expecting to be alone. He looked to one side of the bridge and saw a pink haired girl. She was sitting with her legs hanging off the bridge, hugging one of the wooden posts. She seemed to be... crying. He sat beside her and looked over at her face. Her eyes were closed and tears were pouring from them. Her hair covered her abnormal sized forehead.
Naruto blinked, she must not have heard him sit next to her. "Hey, girl, what's wrong?" he asked. The girl opened her eyes and looked at him. She stared at his whisker markings, and blinked the tears out of her eyes. She wiped her tears away and looked away from him, "Go away..." she said miserably. Naruto opened his mouth to speak but then he closed it.
Naruto looked down at the river flowing under the bridge in the direction behind him. "It's a nice day..." he said, hoping she'd talk to him. She didn't respond. He thought for a few minutes. "Your hair is pretty." he said looking over at her. Her head was still turned. He closed his eyes thinking. He opened his eyes ad looked at her again, "Why were you crying?"
She looked over at him, "Because everyone makes fun of my huge forehead!" she screamed, burying her face in her hands, sobbing. Naruto wasn't sure how to react to this. He had never been in a situation like this. Not many people wanted to be around him. He didn't know the reason why, but he just thought he might have smelled funny or something. He patted her on her shoulder, "It's not that big. Heh... I kind of think it's cute..." this didn't seem to help the poor girl.
She pulled herself away from him and stood up. She looked down at Naruto and realised who he was. She was told not to ever be near him or be nice to him if possible. She didn't know why, but she had thought it was for good reason. She thought he was nice but he must be very bad for her own parents to tell her that. She gave him a quick small smile then turned away from him and walked away.
Naruto just sat there in a daze. It was rare for anyone to smile at him. This bit of kindness made him think even higher of the girl. He smiled and looked down at the water. He couldn't stop thinking about her. He stood up deciding to go home. 'I hope I see her again soon...' Naruto thought. He walked away from the bridge thinking of the short time he spent with the pink haired girl.
He was nearing the Uchiha compound, when he saw a dark haired girl outside of the gates with another Uchiha. She was talking fast to the other, who was a boy. Uchiha Sasuke and his sister. Naruto only recognised Sasuke because he had once played a prank on the boy, which resulted in a bloody nose. Naruto stopped about ten feet away from the two, staring at them wishing he had a family.
He looked at his feet, sadness seeming to creep over him. He had always longed for a mother or father, brother or sister, or all four. He just wanted someone in his life. He looked back up at hearing someone coming towards him. It was Sasuke's sister. She had noticed him looking at the ground, seeming like he was alone in the world, which was quite true. When he looked up se stared at the whisker marks on the boy's face. They were the cutest thing on a boy she's ever seen!
Her brother was calling out to her and Naruto just stood there looking at the girl. Her onyx eyes stared into his electric blue. She smiled at him, "Hi! I'm Uchiha Kanami, what's your name?" she asked in awe, staring at his whisker markings. "N-Naruto." he replied, feeling self concsious now that she was staring at him. All of a sudden, Naruto found himself in something that he was not used to, a hug. She was hugging him, unknowingly making him feel whole, if only for a few seconds.
She let go of him and was smiling at him. "I think you're cute" she said with a slight blush. Naruto turned a little red. She heard her brother yelling, trying to tell her that it was time to go inside. She smiled at him and said simply, "Bye, I'll see you some other time." Turning away from him, waving back at him as she ran towards her brother. Naruto had suddenly felt like he meant something to someone. He was only five years old but it made him feel cocky and confident.
He made his way towards his home, thinking of the strangest but best day he ever had. He smiled to himself as he entered his home, ready for bed. He may have no parents or family, and the people that gave him supplies and had helped him since he was a baby didn't think of themselves as a family to Naruto. In just one day he had managed to meet two people that smiled at him. Tommorrow was his first day to enter the academy to learn to become a shinobi. He hoped they would both be there.
Yo! Great, horrible, pretty good? I dunno, review and tell me. Kanami is not there for the soul purpose to be with Naruto but to be a twist to my unkown plot. It'll all come together. Anyway review me and tell me what you want to see happen in the fic or tell me how to make it better. First reviewer gets a prize! Er... well, not a prize, but will be important to me because they were my first reviewer. Tell me of mistakes I made and how to make the fic better or more fluent. Tell me what I lack in the detail area too. Thanks for reading!
