The Other Klootonian
I would like to give a notice to Kikiwantshercookie that my friend gave me the idea to write this story before she read yours. I hope you will understand that the characters are very different, the character and Marvin do not meet the same way. This chapter is written in this new character's point of view. If you still see this as taking an idea, I give you credit for writing yours.
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I looked outside. This couldn't be happening. There is no way it could. How could I have been so blind to the signs? Now I couldn't stop it. I had to fight. It was a Klootonian takeover.
I saw someone fighting harder than I had ever seen anyone fight. He seemed to be talking and fighting at the same time, like he really had something to say.
I stepped outside. All those PE classes had prepared me for this, even though I had been agile and strong from the start. I silently ran outside, hopping over all the rocks and sprinting over the grass. The boy must have seen me, because he started fighting and walking backwards toward me at the same time.
"You need some help. You look like you have been avoiding everything. Are you OK?" He asked. "I just noticed this, I haven't even started fighting yet." I replied. Just then a Klootonian almost got to the boy. I quickly punched it and kicked it at the same time and it went right down. "How did you do that so quickly and easily?" the boy asked. "I have been doing athletic things since I was little." He showed me scratches all up his arm. "You have it easy. I have been fighting for hours."
Just then he noticed someone in danger "Ben!" he called. He ran towards the person, but not before saying "I'll talk to you when all of this is over."
We fought for hours. Two Klootonians left. The boy and I ran towards them and each took one person. I heard him saying things. I heard barely anything but I did hear one thing. The boy said "You didn't have to start this. You could have left without making plans." The Kootonian said, "We had to protect you. This is for your own good." Just then the person went down, the person I was fighting said, "No!" And ran towards her. They both got beamed into the spaceship.
I turned to the boy. "This whole thing is over. You can talk to me." I said. He said "I never got your name." "My name is Tambria." I said. "I'm Marvin." He said. Then we looked at what was around us, debris was everywhere. The whole neighborhood was ruined.
Marvin ignored the scene. He started talking. He was stuttering a lot. Then he finally got the words out. He was asking me out! I didn't know what to say. I didn't know what to do. I let out a small quiet "yes". He heard it. We were going to Ihop. Not much, but I didn't care. I finally had someone who cared about me.
Ok, this is twilightfanfishkeeper now. Who else hates that they canceled Marvin Marvin? Write more Marvin Marvin stories. We need to show nickelodeon that we care about this show so we can watch more episodes!