I changed the story a bit and made so my OC, Shinji Hoshigaki was basically Sai in the story,
just not a spy, I was from the leaf village. Jiraya was teacher to both me and Naruto,
Except he taught me Water based combat at the same time as Naruto was learning wind.
Last name being Hoshigaki because Kisame is my father.
He dropped me at the doorstep of the academy when he became outlawed.
I have inherited his massive chakra too! (of course actually Samehada is my dad)
and kisame is just the swords body but it was Kisames body that helped to make me. So yeah...
Btw Kaya, mentioned later is an OC of a friend of mine. Check out her channel,
XxCharlottexX1
There are some that are yaoi so BEWARE, but otherwise they are really good!
ALRIGHT! Lets get it started!
When it rains, it pours!
Chapter 1
Im walking up the stairs to my apartment fumbling for the keys in my
pocket.
Not finding them, i set down my backpack, zipped it open and dug
through it for a while...
Then remembering.. "Shit! I
forgot them on Kaya and Sasukes kitchen table. DAMN IT!
uuugh... Ill just stop by Naruto house and ask if i can crash on their couch."
"i hope i don't *disturb* Naruto and Hinata. Ew...!"
Walking through the streets, i pass Ichiraku.
Ayame waved. i saw the small shrine on the right corner of the booth with a picture of
Teuchi... T-T. Previous memories of loss drift to Jiraya sensei,
Naruto took it so hard.
Choji turns the corner with his father, (gettin kinda old there!)
"oh hey shinji! Trouble sleeping again?"
"no, just forgot the keys to my apartment, i was thinking of staying
at narutos for the night "
"hmm, didn't Naruto and Hinata take a vacation to the village hidden in
the mist? "
*... ... ... MOTHER ******!* twitch, twitch... "Uuuugh! MAN!"
"So you need help getting In eh...hey shinji, isn't your window open?"
yeah, Wh... OH HELL NO! NO WAY
CHOJI! YOU ALMOST TOOK MY ARMS OFF LAST TIME!" *Choji grins*
WATCH OUT!
"EXPANSION JUTSU!"
*throw*
"HOOOOLLLLYYY SHHHIIIIIIIIITTT!"
CRASH!
...
...
Suddenly im laying on the floor face down on the ground and Temari is
standing over me with a glare...
"you forgot again didn't you?"
"huh" i reply...
"god dammit shinji! How could you forget again?
I waited in front of the Bathing house for over an hour!"
"hrk" (all i could say. Feels like my ribs are shattered in about a
gazillion different places from Choji mega chuck!)
Crawling to the fridge ( empty, shit...)
I look back at my sliding glass door/ balcony... "HE DESTROYED MY
RAILING!" (oh he is soo gonna pay for that!) ugh, at least im home.
I walk back into the other room and Temari is sitting at the table
feeding the last bagel to the freaky mongoose thing! ( i swear, it
wants to kill me)
"Dead fridge" "wanna catch some brekkeh in town?
"sure, but your paying for standing me up last night!"
"fine, and im really sorry about that by the way!"
Temari leads the way to a restaurant that Kurenai had previously
suggested, her mongoose waddling behind her glaring at me, HOLDING A
FREAKING SCYTHE! WTF!
I point to some random thing on the menu, (egg soup with origniri on
the side) , Temari ordering sushi, and small seaweed rolls with fish
paste inside.
~ yum ~
After I pay for the food, we leave for the bath house, (i don't really
want to go but hey, Doesn't Naruto have some peeky holes in the bath
house?
*dirty thought arise...*
Around this time mostly everyone is at work so we get the whole
place to our selves. MOAR DIRTEH THOUGHTS! omg just stop!
I get in the water and is just about to relax when Temari walks out in
nothing but a towel around her waist.
(THANK GOD THE MONGOOSE HATES WATER!)
"the womens pool is closed for today, they're cleaning it and i
really didn't want to miss the soak!
She gets closer to the water and then drops the towel. OH MY GAWD! I
IMMIDIATELY FLIP OVER ON MY STOMACH SO AS TO NOT, you know! Show mah
glory...
She dips into the pool and gets closer to me, (you know the rocks
they put in the bottom of the water to heat it up? They had just
replaced them before Temari came and me being upside down... Yeah, i
accidentally "snagged" one... HOLY F***! i jump up screaming for a
second, then notice Temari blushing wide eyed... My face turns deep
red plunging into the water as fast as i can. Too late... I await
Temari to either get up and leave awkwardly or laugh, but she actually
gets closer and blushes even more deeply, now close enough to each
other, and I don't know what possessed me, but I lean forward closing
my lips on hers, for a moment she looks startled but after a second
she starts kissing me back... (making me even more excited) , She
gasps and I seize the moment and slip my tongue in her mouth still
passionately kissing, she pushes me against the edge of the pool and
gets right over me gently moaning, still lipplocked, she starts to
move over my chest and back down again stroking what cant possibly get
any harder, she finally goes up and over and moans loudly while I gain
entrance into her, slowly at first, then faster and deeper she goes
until i can feel myself almost hitting the peak, she squeals as she
hits the final moment shouting my name moaning, eyes closed soaking up
the feeling, she leans forward onto me and her breasts lean onto my
chest, she whispers "i love you" in my ear.
My turn, this time with a small moan of pleasure she stands up and I
sit on the side of the water as her eyes drift downwards, she turns
around and gestures for me that I should take over, keeping her head
above the steaming water, I gently wade down behind her, she looks
back in approval and I start very slowly at her tight piece, getting
slowly deeper and deeper she shouts,
"SHINJI!"
"FASTEER! FASTEER!" I give her what she asks for and her screaming
my name, hits the peak again this time much longer, shortly after, I
do too, she squeals with pleasure as her eyes roll back a little and
she blushes deeper, we take one last deep look into each others eyes
sits there latched into each other, Temari moaning with pleasure while
we once again kiss.
After a very long soak we then get up and get ready to leave just as a
woman is coming in, Temari warns "lady, i don't think you want to be in
that water" smirks at me then runs off to change. The woman looking
cautiously at the water, i head off to change then, i meet Temari at
the entrance and we leave hand in hand, her head slightly leaning on
my shoulder as we walk to my place.
:3
So, what do you think? I need at least three comments to continue the
story. (All comments welcomed) No flames though! Thanks!
Shinji Hoshigaki