DISCLAIMER: I no own Outlaw Star, but, dude, I wish I did.
Alright peeps, dis be mai first fic, so pleez, no flamin.
It was getting late and no one knew where Jean was. He had gone out erlier to go "grocery shopping".
Aisha: Where the hell is Jean?
Jim: Will you stop saying that and just watch TV?
There was a "Who's line is it anyway" marathon on television.
Suzuka: Will you shut up? It's almost time for hodown!
A loud crash could be herd as Jean came in.
Jean: Hi everybody!! Whats for breakfast?
Jim: Oh crap! JEAN!! Where the heck have you been?
Jean: I dunno.
Aisha: I think he's drunk again.
Suzuka: Shut up! Colin's singing!
Jean: Cool. What?
Jean sat down lazily in front of the TV. He turned to Suzuka.
Jean: HI!!!
Suzuka: Shut up!
Jean: U shut up! What?
Melfina: Jim, I think you should ecort Jean to bed.
Suzuka: For our sakes.
Jim: But... but... oh fine.
Jim went to put Jean to bed, shoving a reluctant Starwind.
Jean: NO NAP!!
Aisha (staring at her video game, fingers moving rapidly): What's goin on?
Suzuka: well, Wayne's singing a song about a chiropracter.
Melfina: I'm confused.
Jim: Who's Wayne?
Suzuka: He's the- wait, weren't you puting Jean to bed?
Jim: Yeah, with the help of mister baseball bat.
Aisha rolled around on the floor, laughing.
Aisha: So ya knocked em, huh?
Jim: Yep.
This time, even Suzuka laughed.
(gunshot)
In the morning, Jim was in the kitchen making pancakes, Aisha watching him flip them. When the time was right, she snapped one right out of the air.
Jim: Hey!
Aisha: Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
Jean woke up and came staggering into the kitchen.
Jean: What happened?
Jim: You came in drunk again last night.
Jean: I don't remember doing any drinking... yum, I smell pancakes!
Jim: Yeah, I'm cookin because no one knew if you were going to still be drunk in the morning.
Melfina was toying with a new coffee maker they had bought from Targetto.
Melfina: Work goddammit!!!
Aisha: Let me see...
She delt it a hard blow, and it began to work. She walked back to the table and continued her game.
Melfina: Thanks.
Aisha: Shhhhhhh! I'm on the last level!
Give me some feed back on my story, its my first one.
Alright peeps, dis be mai first fic, so pleez, no flamin.
It was getting late and no one knew where Jean was. He had gone out erlier to go "grocery shopping".
Aisha: Where the hell is Jean?
Jim: Will you stop saying that and just watch TV?
There was a "Who's line is it anyway" marathon on television.
Suzuka: Will you shut up? It's almost time for hodown!
A loud crash could be herd as Jean came in.
Jean: Hi everybody!! Whats for breakfast?
Jim: Oh crap! JEAN!! Where the heck have you been?
Jean: I dunno.
Aisha: I think he's drunk again.
Suzuka: Shut up! Colin's singing!
Jean: Cool. What?
Jean sat down lazily in front of the TV. He turned to Suzuka.
Jean: HI!!!
Suzuka: Shut up!
Jean: U shut up! What?
Melfina: Jim, I think you should ecort Jean to bed.
Suzuka: For our sakes.
Jim: But... but... oh fine.
Jim went to put Jean to bed, shoving a reluctant Starwind.
Jean: NO NAP!!
Aisha (staring at her video game, fingers moving rapidly): What's goin on?
Suzuka: well, Wayne's singing a song about a chiropracter.
Melfina: I'm confused.
Jim: Who's Wayne?
Suzuka: He's the- wait, weren't you puting Jean to bed?
Jim: Yeah, with the help of mister baseball bat.
Aisha rolled around on the floor, laughing.
Aisha: So ya knocked em, huh?
Jim: Yep.
This time, even Suzuka laughed.
(gunshot)
In the morning, Jim was in the kitchen making pancakes, Aisha watching him flip them. When the time was right, she snapped one right out of the air.
Jim: Hey!
Aisha: Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
Jean woke up and came staggering into the kitchen.
Jean: What happened?
Jim: You came in drunk again last night.
Jean: I don't remember doing any drinking... yum, I smell pancakes!
Jim: Yeah, I'm cookin because no one knew if you were going to still be drunk in the morning.
Melfina was toying with a new coffee maker they had bought from Targetto.
Melfina: Work goddammit!!!
Aisha: Let me see...
She delt it a hard blow, and it began to work. She walked back to the table and continued her game.
Melfina: Thanks.
Aisha: Shhhhhhh! I'm on the last level!
Give me some feed back on my story, its my first one.