This is a tiny tester of Everlasting Heartbreak. Just seeing if a few people enjoy it and want me to continue. If you don't, review. I only take Positive and constructive criticism. Otherwise, it will be deleted.
Please Notice that it was very late when the idea came to me, there for making this not all type-o proof read.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything(Though this tester has no SM characters in it yet.)
This is taken in the OC's point of View.
Ronnie is short for Veronica. Just pointing that out...
""...Dad! My Internet is down!" I shouted down the stairs. It seems as if everything is working against Victor and I's relationship. I needed to change my facebook status. If I didn't within the first forty-five minutes he could be off to the next one. And I just couldn't have that happen. Just couldn't. I mean first of all, I was the most popular girl in school. Second, Victor is hot-I don't want to lose that to internet being "Down". And third, I'm pretty. I mean looks do matter. I'm positive. You don't want to look like a hobo walking down the street and claim your a millionaire do you? No, because the people would think you just got off the train from crazy land.
"Try resetting the wireless router." Thasa called. Thasa was our "help", as my dad liked to call her. But we all knew she was more like a maid. She cleaned after us, made our beds, made sure everyone's lunch was packed. All the good stuff. Thasa began running downstairs to reset it herself.
This was all because of little miss plastic surgery, or my dad's wife. She was about twenty-five and annoyed the hell out of me. Sure, she was beautiful. I'll give her that. But no way could you have that perfect of a face without having surgery. Come on, let's be real. But my dad insisted she wasn't a stripper, illegal immigrant or any other person of illegal substance. And worst of all, she's trying to take the place of my mother. Yeah, right.
"It won't work, Thasa! My whole social life is at risk here!"
"Well then, Veronica. I suppose your social life will be ruined. That mutant of yours chewed it up."
"How dare you insult Fluffers Snickerdoodle Jr.!" I gasp, slightly exaggerated.
"I'm off duty, now. You are alone until twelve tonight-alright, Ronnie? Are you going to be okay?" Thasa said, slightly worried about it. Last time I threw a party without parental consent. And lets say my father and his witch crashed it. Just when it got started.
And my father wasn't too thrilled, seeing as his brother-Charlie, is the Cheif of the Police down in Forks. And my father is a doctor. Brilliant actually.
So long story short, I was peer-pressured. I know not to do it, knowing all the 'above the influence' commercials. But I really don't give a damn. I mean if it scores me points to be invited to the senior party...everyone goes, then I'm in."
That is my letter to my father now. Basically telling him what a whore he married, and how he was a horrible father. I didn't mean for it to sound so harsh...but they were true feelings. I won't send it though. Not Now. Not after I'd been sent to Forks. Not after I met him.
Continue? Review if you like it, or if you don't... Give me Constructive Criticism about how to make it better.
~Heartstwirl
