Sailor DarkestNight: So yes I am rewriting the story. 1. It was confusing in some parts and 2. I got brand new ideas that I want to try out. So it will be longer and take time since I am in high school (I know, but I wanted to write stories to get me something to do). Anyways, all planets will not be named their real names but most after the first Queens and they will have their own language. So just stick with me a little and I won't describe what they look like maybe their hair color and eye color otherwise then that they will be on Deviantart when I have time. I know you want to read the story so here it is.
In the cosmos of the universe and in the galaxy of the Milky Way many things were taking place. The birth of our Solar System and the birth of Celestial beings that lived on them. The Queen of the Sun saw the creation first hand. Queen Solaria watched as each planet formed and hoped that there were others just like her. The star's heat didn't bother her at all what bother her was being alone in this place of quietness and unknown. There weren't many people around her at all, no not on this blazing fire ball. Time passed as she moved in around in her bubble into a different position and everything wasn't looking as chaotic as it was earlier. She was quite as there wasn't anything to say or was there words for them to speak. She was still until she felt the Star's heat hit her skin and then lightly glowed. Her bubble lowered until it was caught in the gravity of the Star. She didn't know what was happening but it didn't matter. What matter was that the heat was burning her skin like she was being burned alive. She then spoke her first words, in a soft toned voice.
"What is going on?" She said as the bubble glowed. The bubble burst sending energy everywhere, as a body was stretching from it. Her red and yellow hair was spilled everywhere as she floated gradually. A sign appeared on her forehead while she was opening her gold eyes. When she moved her head, she saw a crystal floating above her.
"What is that?" She said reaching for it slowly. Once she touched it, light spilled everywhere as the whole area glowed, making her cover her eyes. When it faded, she felt something solid touching her feet. She looked around and saw a place that didn't look like the place she was a while ago.
"Where am I?" She said walking around until she came upon a chair.
The nearest planet to the sun was circling it pretty fast. There floating towards it was the Queen of it. Her name was Merclian of the planet which wasn't named at all. She was wrapped in the energy of the planet and her sign showed on her forehead. She was still; the only thing moving was her blue hair as she came closer to the planet. By the time she was in the planet's atmosphere, she had opened her white eyes. Her white wings spread while the planet's surface came in view. She didn't know what to say but thinking she made up something that would soon become the language of all planets.
"Where am I?" She said while she flapped her wings downward towards the surface. The surface was filled with rushing waters and a lake with a blue crystal palace in the middle of it. Once her feet touched the ground, she felt as if the place was talking to her. She tried to find the voice but she couldn't and walked towards the place that was shining. The place looked so beautiful that she stay in that area for a while. She heard the voice again and this time she could make it out.
"Welcome my offspring, you are to rule me and other generations forever" it said. Did this place talk to her again? She saw a round crystal ball floating in front of her.
"Use this to create life on this planet and become it royal ruler" it said again while she grab it in her hand.
"Head to the palace, the place you saw and then use it to create life here so you won't be alone" it whispered and the voice faded away.
"But how?" She said. First she needed a name but what.
"Maybe…Merclian, Queen Merclian" Merclian said as she nodded and headed towards that place the voice had mention.
In a bubble was the ruler of the next planet. The only thing you could see was gold hair in the bubble as it floated down to the planet. The third ruler to be born (If you count Queen Solaria as first) busted from her bubble as she was starting to enter the next planet's atmosphere. White wings spread from her back and her blue eyes opened to face a peaceful surface. She lifted her head and looked around as she flapped her wings towards the peaceful surface.
"Such a beautiful place" She said speaking in a cheerful voice. She saw a golden and orange palace with water running in front of it. Walking around she heard a voice.
"Oh my beautiful offspring, Venus. Please rule me and make life on this planet" it said.
"Who are you?" She said looking around.
"I'm your mother, the place you are walking around on" it said as an orange crystal appeared in front of her face. She blinked and then touched it.
"Use this to create life and rule over your people. Get the Venus bloodline going, my dear. Go to the place you are heading, the palace of this planet and live your life to the fullest" it said as the voice was fading away. She wondered what that meant and was her name Venus.
"Venus…that will be my name" Queen Venus said as she walked towards her palace. She needed to name this place as well.
"Maybe I can name this place after me… Venus" She said touching her lips which had orange lipstick on it.
The fourth planet was beautiful from space. It's female ruler was already standing on its surface and was now walking into the palace. Queen Gaia of Earth held the golden crystal in her hand before it glowed in her hand sending rays of light everywhere. She wondered if it had worked and sure it did. When she turned around three men were standing behind her not saying a word.
"It worked, just like the voice said" She whispered before turning around and going to her throne. Once she was seated, she was trying to think of names for them. The three men waited silently not wanting to disturb her. Then the names finally hit her and she began to speak.
"Hello my name is Queen Gaia, the one who rules this planet. You three will be the royal knights of this palace. Knight Fujita, Knight Hoshi and Knight Kin, please serve me well and future rulers of this kingdom" She said closing her yes to think more. A 'yes my queen' was heard in the throne room. She could get use to this life or maybe not.
Another celestial body was circling the fourth planet. Watching over it from above as it shined in the night sky at night. Luna, the home of lunarians, who have prospered farther than any other planet. Their queen, Queen Selene was watching the planet from her balcony.
"It's such a beautiful planet, I wondered if there is life there to" Queen Selene said in a soft voice. Her silver hair (meatball style, the traditional hairstyle of the moon) was swaying back and forth along with her white dress. Her golden eyes shone brightly, a bright shine that no one would forget.
"Surely, there is life here but I wondered there. Such beauty makes me want to go there and explore" She said smiling. She opened her hand and looked at the Sliver Crystal. This place had spoken to her and had given her this, the key to life. She didn't know what to do with it, until it started to glow once again. A wand had appeared crescent wand with a place for the sliver crystal.
"I guess it goes on this?" She said putting the sliver crystal on the wand. It fit perfectly on the wand. She felt someone brush against her arm. She looked down and saw a cat with a crescent moon symbol on its forehead. It was dark blue with red eyes. She didn't know where it came from.
"Hello Queen Selene I'm your royal advisor, Akina. I'm so glad that I found you!" The cat said. Queen Selene's eyes widen, did the animal just talk to her.
"You can talk!" She said in a high pitch voice.
"Yes your majesty. I can see your surprise. As long as I have my crescent symbol on my forehead, I can talk!" Akina said standing on all paws. Selene was still frightened, but stood up straight and spoke in a formal manner.
"I'm glad to meet you, Akina. I hope we can become friends" She said curtseying.
"Oh sure we can, but please show me around this place" Akina said bowing her head.
On the red planet of Mars, another queen was born. She sat on her throne, thinking silently to herself. Her name was Queen Phoenix, the queen of the Phoenix Kingdom. There was nothing to do besides sitting and being queen like. She felt the need to walk outside the palace and look around in the palace grounds. She got up and walked down the steps covered with a red rug with golden strips at its edges. Her red dress followed her as her raven hair swayed side to side. She seemed peaceful until you mad her angry. An emotion that would be passed down for centuries to come.
"My queen, where are you going" One of her knights asked.
"I'm going outside the palace is that a problem?" She said glaring her red eyes back at the guard. She really did need to control her anger, even if she was the queen of fire.
"No-no not at all my majesty. Please continue on your way!" The guard said shaking violently. Their queen could be scary when she has a temper that needed to be control.
"Thank you" She said as the door opened to the kingdom of Phoenix. The planet was to be named after their queen, Phoenix for many years to come. When she looked to her right, she saw a temple and walked over to it. She took her time and looked around. She could smell the fresh air and the wind blowing against her face.
"It is so nice out here" She said stopping and picking up a flower. It was red, her favorite color. She spun it around in her hand as she kept walking. The temple was coming closer each step she took. Nothing could compare to what she was seeing at all.
The next planet that was circling its star was Joviania (and the last planet we will see in this chapter). The huge planet had very strong winds, nothing could live here. Until you go under the clouds and see a kingdom, a kingdom war. A storm was beginning in the kingdom and the queen could feel it. She could smell the sweet scent of rain almost ready to fall. Her brown hair was in a long ponytail that went down to her hips and some if it laying on her shoulders. Her blue eyes were staring at the clouds.
"Jovian brings rain, my father who created me when this planet was born" Aural said as rain poured and thunder was heard. She could see the rain, she could feel the rain. It wasn't raining hard but it still soaked some of her clothes. She went back inside and went to get another dress. Queen Aural was her name and fighting was her game. Even though she hadn't been here long, she loved to go against anybody even her own special guard.
"I will change and then go to the throne room" Queen Aural said in a soft voice under the crackle of thunder. The storm made her feel at home on this planet and she would never want to leave it. Everything was going well for the first day of life.
Sailor DarkestNight: So this chapter is done, I hope it is more interesting. Please review and tell me what you think about this chapter of my new and improve story of Queens of the Past.