Maximum Ride ( my version)

by Katie Holmes 4

Max, Fang, Iggy, Angel, Nuge, Gazzy, and Total they all are trying to hide from the erasers and all of them end up in Atlanta, Georgia hoping that they will not find them for a long time.

1. Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Max, Iggy, Gazzy, Fang, Nudge, Angle, and Total all of them flying trying to get away from the Erasers, flying as fast as they can trying not to get injured by the Erasers. Total( the talking dog) says " So where are we going to hide from them now Max?" he says rudely. " Well if you would just shut your mouth then you might find out then total, is that a good answer!" she said while she was glaring at Fang.

" Well don't you think that was kind of harsh Max and if you don't have a plan than I can help." Nudge said with tears in her eyes from the harsh winds that they were trying to fly against. " Yeah Sorry I am just getting eratated that the Erasers keep finding us. But we should go find a city or a town and get something to eat. Is that a good plan Fang?" " Um, yeah I am getting hungry.

So 45 minutes later they see a big city below and they dive down 1/2 a mile out of the city and walk around and Max asks some one were they are and what state they are in and the woman says, " Well you are in Atlanta, Georgia my dear and would you like the date too young woman?" the woman says with and western accent. " Umm yes please." with a confused expression. " Ok then just let me check my watch... ok it is 7:38pm" with a smile on her face.

Max and Fang were just waiting for the woman to turn in to an Eraser but 5 minutes later she did not and Fang looked at Max with a smile on his face relived and said " Well that went well didn't it Max?" with his eyes wide as golf balls. "Yeah that was, OK well let's go find some food, so what are you guys in the mood for?" " Spaghetti!" Angle, Nudge, Iggy, Gassy, and Total all say at the same time. Max and Fang laugh and Max says OK well let's go find a place that has spaghetti. So as they are walking they come up to this restaurant that is giving away free samples of stake and so all of them go running up and ask for a little sample and the young man about fangs age says " Go ahead we are just trying to get rid of what we have left because we are about to go out of business soon." He said looking at Max with a smile like he likes her " OK Kids would you like to eat here in stead?" max said also looking and the boy with a smile.