A New Chapter in the Capital Wasteland
Well, this is my first story. Can't really say more then that. Ok, that is a lie. This is my first story. I have no prier experience with publicized writing. There is a good chance I am going to screw this up. I read throught the storys of fallout but have only found a handfull of really good ones. I wanted to contribue to the cause and also try out making some storys, so, I am writing this.
Disclaimer: I do not own Fallout.
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Prologe
The subway tunnel is pitch black. The lights over head are the only things that cut through the dark. Two things can be seen under the light overhead. The first can be recognized as a man, if the man had survived being set on fire, cracked over the head with something blunt and hadn't eaten in the last two months. This 'man' is commenly known as a 'Feral Ghoul'. Ghouls are people who have been introduced to a godly amount of radiation and had the unfortune to survive. After time, there brain begin to decompse do to the radiation, causeing them to go feral.
The second shape is a almost unrecognizable, horribly beaten man. Part of his skull had be caved in revealing brain tissue and the bones in his arms and torso had been broken and some jet out of his body. His flesh had been feed on by the ghouls that had attaked him. The ghoul that stands over him had stayed to feed of the scraps.
Unnoticed by the ghoul, another light was one in the area. A soft red glow shined a good distince away from the main light. A small scuffle sound rang throught the tunnle. The ghoul put its attention to the source of the sound. But before it could even take a few steps, a spear shout out of the darkness, squring the ghoul through the chest, destroying its lungs. The ghoul cued only hiss with its damaged lungs before hitting the ground with a thud.
The faint red light began to move closer to the two bodys until it was visable under the overhead light and was over the body. The sorce of the red light was a man. He was in a trench cout and whore a mask/helmet which the lenses built in the mask emitid a red light. Underneath the trench cout, the man whore riot gear armor, which coverd him toe to neck which then stopped to the headware the covered the reast of his head. He had a heavy military pack on his back and also large duffle bag in hand. The man walked over to the ghoul, planted his foot on the fresh corpes, griped the spear, and yanked it out of it's rib cage. The man replaced the spear on to his pack and continued on through the darkness to exit of the maze he finds himself in.
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Well hows that. Its over 200 words long and my first try in this. I think this is a good first atempt. I still say it sucks. I will look through reviews and do please try to be helpfull. This is only the prologe. The main chapters will be longer. The Courier gets to the Capital wasteland in the next chapter and does other things. This story starts out a few days before the events of Valut 101 being open again happenes. I will change some things about the story that does not happen in the game. That should be fun. Also, I plan to have the DLC in here which will take some time to get too. Thats all I got to say so start reading the next chapter already! Which probibly hasn't come out yet.