Another LotF journal thing from me.
This one was for Chapter Six, and my teacher told us to write something similar to the lagoon passage in the chapter. I struggled for a while, then finally threw this together in a few minutes. I didn't think it was all that good, but the teacher gave me 100 on it. I was pretty happy.
For years, the ocean had kept its secrets, allowing only a select few in on its treasures, and punishing those who betrayed its trust or angered it in any way.
Now, though, its secrets and treasures were being exposed faster than ever before, and the ocean fought back, releasing its fury with wave after wave of complaint, flipping ships with the greatest force it could muster, swirling around and around to deter the sailors and set them off course.
Then, as quickly as its anger was unleashed, it was reeled back in, and the ships turned around, heading back to shore to avoid another onslaught and to repair damage done to boats and ships.
And once again the secrets of the deep were safe, to be seen only by those the ocean trusted.
So, what do you think? Did I deserve the score my Comm teacher gave me? If you don't think so, feel free to tell me why. Comments are welcome, and complaints will probably be tossed aside like the ships in my journal entry. P
Okay, forget that. I'll just delete 'em. D
I know, I know. It was short. That's just how the entries were supposed to be--at least half a page. Sorry they're not a little longer. ;