Choking
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Awakening from the piercing shriek of the fire alarm, I slid my long legs off the checkered comforter.
Flickering crimson lights came from beneath the door. As I eased the door open, gigantic walls of flames spiraled up the banister.
The ferocious flames seemed to be laughing at me, laughing at my feeble attempt to escape. Escape to what, I didn't exactly know. I scampered to the stairs but they seemed to be collapsing. Skidding to a stop, my eyes landed on the only room unscathed, Momma's.
I sprinted for the safety I assumed would be waiting for me behind the broad ashen door. The safety of being in momma's arms because certainly she would locate a way out.
The fire taunted me, creeping upon me with licks of flame caressing my neck. Only to withdraw, back into the scorching depths.
Momma lies on the bed her blond locks splayed out like a halo framing her face. "Momma."
Whimpering, I made my way into the smoldering room. "Momma, momma you gotta get up. Please wake up."
Tears streamed down my flushed face. Each crystal drop fell from my lilac colored eyes. The tears fell gently onto momma's child-like face. The woman slept soundly not stirring from her deathly slumber, as I mourned the silence that has captivated my mother.
Gradually the house was falling to pieces around us, our own little world crumbling to dust.
A fireman jogged in avoiding the obstacles that use to be our furniture. His eyes scanned the room only briefly looking at momma. He grasped at my hand tugging me away from momma.
"Wait," I stammered. "Momma wake up. There's a man here to help you. You just have to wake up," I moaned.
The man wouldn't wait any longer, he scooped my frail frame up. Hoisting me over his shoulder he departed from the blazing room.
"No, momma no no no," frantically I clawed at the man. Momma didn't even flinch as I bawled. Not one flicker of emotion showed.
"Momma please wake up," I whispered knowing she couldn't hear me.
I would never see my momma again because this vile, ghastly man ran away from my house.
He ran away from momma. Running away from the laughing flames that consumed the only home I have ever had. He carried me with him as I watched the flames smother and choke everything in its path.
Well I decided to redo it (it's only small things I doubt you'd notice)
As you can probably tell I'm really dramatic- which to my English teacher is a bad thing when I'm suppose to be writing an essay on a current event. But oh well!?!
So I'd really want to know what you thought of it- but you don't have to review I don't mind.
Haha my phone just went off in my pocket and my friend waz all like Emma ur leg's vibrating and I waz all like So you have a problem with that!?!
I guess it waz wanna those things where you gotta be there!?!
Bye-a ugh... people!?! XD
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c(")(") haha it's a bunny and it love ME!?! Hear that people it love Me and only Me!?! Mwahahahaha-ha...ha
Someone cut my bunny into thirds... i will get my revenge!?! Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *sniffle sniffle* poor bunny