I went through this whole story a decided to re-write it. The words between the stars example *Fun* is Gus singing. Enjoy!
Shawn POV
"Shawn Spencer. You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to have an attorney present during questioning. If you cannot afford an attorney, one will be appointed for you. Do you understand these rights?" Carlton Lassiter asked me, I nodded.
"Than good," he hand cuffed me and led me outside of my house and into the back of his car. He shut the door and drove to the police department. We arrived 20 minutes later. He came to me and opened the door he led me inside past my friends, past my father, past my girlfriend or ex-girlfriend, past the chief and into the long hallway that led to the holding cells. He threw me into cell B2 and removed the cuffs locking the cell door behind him.
"I always imagined doing this Spencer," he smiled and walked away. That led to Gus being my cell mate and me banging my head against the metal bars. Gus was playing the classic song to play on a harmonica while I sang.
"Nobody knows the trouble I've seen nobody knows my sorrow."
"Shut up!" A man yelled from the cell next to us.
"If you insist on playing that something with a bounce!" A woman yelled.
"Yeah!" Other people agreed I looked at Gus and we both knew what song to play.
"I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts there they are standing in a row big ones small ones some as big as your head give 'em a twist a flick of the wrist that's wut the show man said now that I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts everybody knows they'll make me rich there stands me wife the idle of me life singing a rolly bowly ball a penny a pitch," Everyone tapped along to the song.
"Singing a rolly bowly ball a penny a pitch rolly bowly ball a rolly bowly ball singing rolly bowly ball a penny a pinch I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts…"
*How lovely*
"There they are standing in a row…"
*1-2-3-4*
"Big ones small ones some as big as your head."
*And bigger*
"Give 'em a twist a flick of the wrist that's wut the show man said now that I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts everybody knows they'll make me rich!"
*Have a banana*
"There stands me wife the idle of me life singing a rolly bowly ball a penny a pitch," Gus and I sang. Until Lassiter banged on the wall and yelled at us all to shut up. He and Juliet walked over to our cell.
"Really Spencer you had to get them roweled up?" Lassiter scolded us.
"Sorry mummy," I said sarcastically.
"It's better than the first song they sang!" A man called out everyone murmured in agreement.
"Hey that song was just as good!" Gus shouted. Gus was sitting on the bed while I was on the floor banging my head against the wall.
"No it wasn't," the same man said.
"Ralph you god dam know that song was good." Gus barked.
"No It wasn't Coco," Ralph called with a heavy Spanish accent.
"Ha Ha Coco, I can't believe I never thought of that one," I laughed. Lassiter opened the door grabbed my arm pulled me up and put the cuffs back on. Did I mention he shoved me up against a wall? No! Well he did and it hurt like hell.
"Hey watch the juke box." A man commented.
"Thank you kind sir," I said in a ring master type of voice.
"Hey hasta luego niño blanco." Ralph called.
"Did you he just say Hey see you later white boy?" Gus asked.
"Yea Gus you know Spanglish?" I looked at Gus.
"Enough of this nonsense O'Hara grab Guster," Lassie barked dragging me into an interrogation room. He plopped me in the chair to the left and Gus was in the chair to the right.
"Let's start shall we?" Lassiter asked after the Chief, Juliet and a guy from the DA where in the room.
"If we must Lassie-Fras," I said. Gus was close to laughing.
"Okay tell me why did you tell everyone you were psychic?" He asked coming right out and asking the million dollar question. Lassie did that he goes right to the point.
"Oh sweet naïve Lassie I am Psychic," I simply said.
"And you continue to lie? Wise choice Spencer." He growled.
"Oh Lassie aren't we past the last name basis and on to the first one? I've known you for almost 7 years and you still call me Spencer how rude." I scoffed and turned away from him. I could tell I was pushing his buttons.
"Spencer!" He snarled.
"Ne!" I yelled at the top of my brain
"What the hell was that?" Vick asked I looked at her and said.
"That was Turkey," I informed her
"You mean Turkish?" Gus asked.
"I've heard it both ways." I turned to Gus.
"No you haven't," Gus said.
"Yes I have. My neighbor was Filipino," I looked at Gus. It was true Felipe was Filipino.
"What? That doesn't even make sense!"
"Yeah it does Gus you've met Felipe. He always liked you it hurts me that you don't remember him." I added a sense of pain to my words.
"Shawn he died 4 months ago, a woman named Crystal lives there now." Gus told me.
"Oh man poor Felipe," I wiped a tear the best I could. I always liked the old man.
"Shawn!" Vick yelled rubbing her head.
"Alright! I'll tell you Lassie here was going to arrest me for no reason," I said.
"You knew too much information." He corrected.
"I told you I was watching the news and he had a nervous tick and the partner was his brother right? You never did tell me who it was," I looked at Lassie. He backed up and rubbed the back of his head and took a deep breath.
"Are you mad Lassie?" I mocked. His face turned red.
"I think he is mad," Gus snickered.
"Bring her in," Vick instructed.
"Bring who in?" I asked. Lassie had that look on his face that I got every time I drank or ate pineapple.
"Your mother," he said with a devilish smile. I turned towards Gus and he gave me a look of sympathy.
"Goose!" My mother barked. I reluctantly looked in her direction; to say she looked pissed would be an understatement.
"Goose just please talk to these people," she pleaded taking a seat across from me.
"Mom these people hand cuffed me and the robot keeps mocking me!" I said pointing at Lassie.
"Shawn," she barley used my first name so I knew she was serious. "Just cooperate with the police. Your father was one of them and you not listening to them is humiliating for him."
"So it's all about dad?"
"Shawn you lied, you lied for 7 years and you brought Gus and your father into it. Shawn you cause trouble but you have never gone this far before and you have never ever brought Gus into It." she yelled.
"I'm sorry I'm not the perfect son you or dad wanted," I spat before looking away from her. Gus gave me another sympathetic look.
"Shawn this isn't about that..." she started but I cut her off
"You have never been here before why start now?" I snapped I knew it was hurtful but I wasn't in a good mood. I could feel her shock at the words that I knew had cut at her heart as soon as I said them. I heard footsteps walk away and Lassie walked over to me picked me up and walked me out of the room. My eyes locked with Juliet's in till I was out of the room.
"Maybe a few hours in a single cell well make your brain think and control your behavior." He took me into a room I've never been in before. He pushed me inside and looked the door behind him it was dark I couldn't see a thing. I kicked the nearest thing to me. I stumbled and found the bed I jumped on it and literally cried myself to sleep.
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