Hello everyone
i am back with a new story (fully duo based)
but first of all thx to all who give rvw on 'jindgi jina sikha diya mujhe'...i m realy happy with rvws
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frnds plz tell me to continue or not
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hope u like it
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if i got a good response then i continue it
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plz read & rvw if u like
here is ur story
happy reading
NOT A CHAP ONLY AN INTRO OF THE STORY
a party is going in a big pala
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one person : umid karte h apko hamari ye choti si dawat pasand aai hogi...
2nd person : are samrat(king) ye aap kya kh rhe h...samrat prithviraj ki dawat or choti...
samrat : aap hame sharimnda kar rhe h raja veer sain...
raja veer sain : par samrat humare ...sehjade (prince) dikhai nhi de rhe...unhi ke janam din ki khushi m ye dawat rakhi gai h...
samrat : veer sain jii wo dekhiye...(while indicating toward a direction where a 3 year old cute boy with sparcel eyes...entertaining his heart ...his small brother by playing with him) aapke sehjade aapne chote bhai ke sath vayast(bussy) h...
raja veer sain : chote sehjade kitne khush h...apne bhai ke sath khelkar...
samrat : un dono ki dawat to whi h ...ek dusre ko khush dekhna...
and they start their chit-chat
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after some time they listen a voice : samrat...
samrat turn and saw a beautyful lady : are maharani aap yha!...
veer sain : maharani chitarkala ko raja veer sain ka pardam...
chitarkala : parnaam raja veer sain
samrat : khiye maharani achanak se darbaar (court) mein aane ka koi khas karan...
chitarkala : maharaj wo daya or abhijeet khelte-khelte najane kha chle gae...hum unhi do badmasho ko dhund rhe h...
samrat : oo to un dono ki wajh se aap itni chintit(tensed) h...vo dekhiye ...(but he stop with) ye dono kha gae ...abhi to yhi the...(in tension)
raja veer sain : samrat aap chintit na ho...bache h khelte-khelte khi chalegae hoge...m dekhta hu (and he left)
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after some time
samrat mumered: ye veer sain jii kha reh gae...kafi wakt ho gaya h
samrat to a courtyard : aap jakar dekhiye ki veer sain jii kha reh gaye...
courtyard : jo agya(order) maharaj (and he left)
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after sometime
courtyard come with veer sain whose shoulder is bleeding...
samrat in shock : ye aap ke kanthe ko kya hua
veer sain : samrat..wo..wo...
samrat in tension : wo kya veer sain jii...bataiye hume
veer sain with downhead : samrat jab hum rajkumaro ko dhund rhe the...to hume kuch awazie aai...jab hum us aur dekhne gae to...humne dekha ki...ki..wo..ki
samart : aapne kya dekha...
veer sain take a deep breath and said with downhead : humne dekha ki kuch nakab(mask) posh log rajkumar abhijeet ko leke jaa rhe the (the earth slipped down from pirthviraj's foot...he stuned ) humne unhe rokne ki koshish ki to unhone humpar hamla kar diea...or rajkumar ko lekar bhag gae...
samrat in anger : ye aap kya keh rhe h veer sain...
veer sain : maharaj meine saina ki ek tukdi bheji h...un logo ke piche...
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other side
A person in anger : iska chota bhai kha h
3 people are standing in his front...one of them : ise phle ki humiske bhai ko dhundte vha koi aagya
1st person in fear : usne tumhe dekha to nhi
2nd person : nhi...humne nakab se apna chera dhak rakha tha
The 1st person take a sign of relief
1st person saw abhijeet (who is uncouncious)
1st person : khatam kar do ise..
Trio : jo hukum
And 1st person left
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Three people are there
One of them : jaldi gadha khodo...samik ate hi hoge
2nd : kam ho gaya h samjho
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the end
hope u like it
dosto mujhe nhi pata ki apko ye chap kaisa lga h
bt if u want to read more chaps then rvw
minimum 20-25 rvws
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ek aur baat : aap logo ko chap m laguage problem to nhi ho rhi ?
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to socho ki aab age kya hoga
kya abhijeet bach paega
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Rvw if u r intrested to read more
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(and a requst : is story ke first three chap read karne ke baad hi decide kre ki story kaisi h)
ok
bye
tc
be happy
Ur arzoo