Hey! Its Savior and Redemption here! This is our first story, so comments are appreciated.
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"Talking"
"Thinking"
"Author note"
Prologue
Meet Sakura Haruno. She has pink hair and green eyes. She stands at about 5'7" tall, and has a nice figure. She is 17 years old, lives by herself in an apartment in a not so good neighborhood. She plays softball, but got kicked off the team for 'misbehaving.' That was at her last school. Now she was moving to a town called Konoha.
Sakura does have a dog, or rather wolf. She found it when she was 16, so the wolf is a little over a year old, it being a puppy when she found it. It was pure black, except for two white rings that surrounded each eye. His name is Yoru, which translates into 'Night'. He is very protective of Sakura, especially with males. (A.N-heh heh sucks to be them.-Sav)
Chapter 1.
The pinkette staring out the window let out a loud sigh. There was an announcement about 4 minutes ago that said they would arrive in Konoha in about 45 minutes.
She was on the bus and she was moving, again. This was the third time in the last 6 months she moved. This time, she hoped it was for good. The girl laid her head against the window, letting herself drift off into a light sleep. It wasn't but 20 minutes later that she jerked awake, breathing in hard and fast from her dream.
"Shit. Why do I keep having that dream?" she mumbled to herself. She sighed to herself. Six months ago was when her life was ruined. Sakura sat there wondering how Yoru was doing. He was in a cage and put with a bunch of other animals since they were not allowed in the 'cabin' part of the bus. While she was thinking, she didn't notice that the bus had stopped and everyone was getting off until it was almost too late.
"Shit! Hey! Stop the bus!" She yelled quickly, grabbing her wallet and shoving it in her back pocket. The bus came to a stop once more, and Sakura hurried off, ignoring the glare that the driver sent her.
She went into the bus station and asked where the animals were put that had been taken off of the bus. Once they told her, Sakura headed over to the back room and looked for a familiar cage. Finding it almost immediately, she ran over and opened the latch.
"Umph. Yah yah I get it. Get off already." Sakura said teasingly while she pushed her faithful companion off of her. She quickly attached the Yoru's leash, then walked back out to the front of the station and grabbed her 2 bags.
As Sakura walked out the front door and onto the street she began walking to the left where the not-so-good part of town was. It only took about 10 minutes to reach her rundown apartment building where she would be staying on the weekends. As she was walking up the stairs, Yoru in tow, she noticed a guy walking down toward her. Because of the poor lighting she couldn't tell how he looked or what his age was. Sakura was slightly shocked when he passed her and she noticed that he was indeed very good looking and seemed to be around her age. Sighing and shaking her head she continued up the stairs until she reached the third level, room 333.
She stuck the key into the lock and twisted until she heard a 'click' noise. She pushed the door open and noticed that it squeaked the whole time. Sighing loudly she kicked the door closed and looked around the small apartment.
From the doorway it lead to the living room, and off to the side was the kitchen. She noticed a door to her left and walked through it to find the only bedroom in the apartment. It had a bathroom set up to where you can access it either through the bedroom or through the hall.
Sakura had her furniture set up prior to when she moved, that way she wouldn't have to set up by herself. Sakura walked over to the chair she had in the living room and curled her legs up and thought to herself. "This is so not good. I really should have just moved the stuff by myself or got some cheap-ass guys to do it for me. Now I'm on a seriously tight budget till I can figure out how to get some money."
Sakura looked down as she felt something wet against her leg. She saw Yoru with his big blue eyes staring up at her. "Fine. Come on." Yoru jumped up on the chair and made himself comfortable with half of him on her lap and the rest squished in between her and the chair. (Heh Heh, my dog does this all the time lol.-Redemption) It was now 8:02 pm, and Sakura was feeling tired from the long ride that it took to get to Konoha. Forgetting about having dinner tonight since she didn't have enough money to buy a decent meal anyway, Sakura fell asleep in her chair, with Yoru on top of her. Too bad she completely forgot that it was Sunday and it was her first day of Konoha Leaf High tomorrow.
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Well there it is. The first chapter. Hope you guys like it! Please review and tell us what you thought and if you think that we (Savior and I-Redemption-) should continue or not.
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