A/N: Hello everyone! This is basically the same as my first story, but I'm re-doing it to change details and make it sound better! I'd love it if you guys would review and give me feedback on what I do well, what I can do better, and how you feel about my story! If you ever have any ideas for the story put them in the reviews, and if I use it I'll give you credit! (:

TRIS' SET SCHEDULE FOR TRIMESTER 1:
1- Honors Trigonometry Ms. T
2- Gym Mr. Max
3- Band Ms. Reyes
4- Honors English Mr. Leab
5- Chemistry Ms. Matthews

I pull into the parking lot of my new school for the next three years in my brother Caleb's red pick up truck. The school is called Divergent High and I can't believe my eyes. When we reached the parking lot I was amazed at the size of the school; it was 3 stories high, about the length of a football field, and looked to be made of tan bricks. There were large oak trees on the left side of the school near a nice clear lake. The campus was breathtakingly beautiful; I couldn't believe my eyes. Caleb had talked about how amazing the campus of the school was, but I had never thought it was to this extent.

Today is my first day of my sophomore year; it wouldn't have been fine, but it sucks when you're starting at a completely new school. My family recently moved to Minnesota from Chicago, because my dad's job transferred him out here. It's not a problem for my mom since she's an author and does a lot of charity work. So she can do her job pretty much anywhere.

About a week ago, Caleb and I had to go to the school to take a test that they called the Aptitude test. It sorted us into what the school calls 'Factions'. Caleb was sorted into Erudite, which are for those who really like to be challenged in school. It wasn't much of a surprise to me since Caleb always is reading. He'll read anything he can find! One time I saw him reading the Encyclopedia! He read all of them, word for word!

The results of my test gave me choices between Abnegation, Erudite, and Dauntless. I personally could never picture myself in Erudite. Even though I get good grades, I'm not really the type who loves learning. I then thought about Abnegation, but I didn't think I was selfless enough. I mean I do help my mom out at some of her charity events, but that's only because my mom needs the extra help. So naturally, that left me with Dauntless: the brave. The Dauntless were usually either those who played sports, or were extremely outgoing.

I ended up choosing Dauntless because I play tennis and basketball. At my last school, I was first doubles for tennis and I had a very successful season. My partner and I ended up going to state, but lost in the second round. I also was the starting shooting guard for my last school and was voted MVP. I was ranked first in my state for the most points and assists, not that I really cared though because I just focused on playing the game. I'm hoping to play tennis and basketball this year. I don't know how that will turn out, but I figured I'd give it a shot. Tennis try outs are today after school, while basketball try outs aren't until tennis season is over.

When we get inside the school, we go straight to our lockers because we have 15 minutes left until our first class starts. The lockers at this school are in alphabetical order by grade, so since Caleb and I are sophomores, our lockers are right next to each other. The warning bell for 1st hour rings just when we finish putting our things into our lockers. We have 5 minutes to get to our first class, so we grab our binders for our first class. Luckily, Caleb and I both have Honors Trigonometry 1st hour so we walk there together.

I ask Caleb, "How are you feeling? Are you nervous?"

"A little bit, but this class shouldn't be too bad since we have it together. Promise me that you'll at least try to make friends today, okay?"

"Okay, I'll try." I give him a small smile. We both know that making friends isn't the easiest thing in the world for me, but I have to at least try.

When we reach our first hour we notice that there is a seating chart. Caleb sits in the front and center, while I'm in the back of the room. I take my seat and notice that there is a tall, mocha skinned girl, with short black hair, in the seat next to me.

"Hi there! You must be new, my name is Christina! What's your name?", the girl asks me rather happily.

"Uh, yeah I just moved here from Minnesota; my name is Tris."

"Nice to meet you, Tris. Can I see your schedule? I can also show you around today if you'd like."

As I hand her my schedule I say, "Nice to meet you too. Yeah, that'd be great, actually."

"No problem! Ahh we have 1st, 2nd, and 4th hours together!", she shouts as she hands me back my schedule. Class goes by rather quickly, considering it was just review from Honors Algebra II. We were assigned a review assignment, but Christina and I finished it together in class. So far no homework, hopefully the rest of the day follows suit.

We make our way to second period, which is gym. I'm happy about this since gym is my favorite class, but it sucks because I got stuck with it second hour! We walk into the gyms for attendance and Christina introduces me to her friends. "Guys this is Tris. Tris this is Will, Lynn, Uriah, Marlene, Zeke, Shauna, and Four." As she says their names, she points to each person. I hear a chorus of Hi's and Hello's. My eyes happen to linger on Four. He's very tall and is wearing a tight black t-shirt, that shows off his muscles. He has a spare upper lip and full lower lip. His hair is such a dark brown that it almost looks black. When I reach his eyes, I get lost in them, they are the most beautiful blue I have ever seen. Surprisingly, Four stares back! This shocks me, how could someone as handsome as him, ever notice someone like me? I'm definitely not as pretty as the other girls, but I'm not ugly either.

When the bell rings, the teacher walks in and I reluctantly look away from his beautiful blue eyes. The teacher introduces himself as Coach Max. Apparently he's the guy's football, basketball, and tennis coach. Once attendance is done he announces that today we are going to be playing basketball. I smile to myself because I love to play basketball. Coach dismisses us to go to the locker rooms to change.

When we get to the locker room Christina says, "So I saw you and Four looking at each other." I blush a deep shade of red as Marlene, Shauna, and Lynn stare at me, awaiting my reaction. Shauna finally speaks up and says, "Yeah, what was that about?" I blush, what I'm sure, is an even darker shade of red. Ignoring the question, I begin changing. Christina says, "Tris, you can ignore us now, but we will eventually find out."

Once we are all done changing the girls and I walk back into the gym. Coach Max announces that Four and some guy named Eric are team captains. Four chooses first and surprisingly, he picks me. Why would Four pick me first, out of all these people? Eric looks at Four shocked and laughs, "Four why'd you pick the Stiff? Trying to pick the weak ones so that when you lose, you have someone to blame?" I glare at Eric, whatever, I will show him up on the court. Four ignores Eric's comment, and they finish picking teams. The teams end up as:

Four's team:

Four
Tris
Zeke
Will
Uriah
Christina
Shauna
Lynn
Marlene

Eric's team:
Eric
Molly
Drew
Edward
Peter
Al
Lauren
Zac
Aria

We start the game off with a jump ball. Four and Eric are jumping. Lynn is our guard, Uriah is our small forward, Zeke is our power forward, Four is our center, and I'm the shooting guard. Four wins the tip, and the ball goes to me. I pass the ball to Lynn and the game starts.

By the end of the game my team ends up winning 50-35. I scored 30 of our points and had 10 assists. Coach tells everyone to shower up and we head to the locker room.

I'm the first of the girls done, so I walk out of the locker room to be greeted by Four. "Hey Tris! Wow I didn't know you could shoot like that. You're really good at basketball; do you play?"

"Hey! Thank you, and yes I've played since I was 5 years old. My dad got me into it since my brother would rather read a book than play sports. You're not too bad yourself, do you play too?"

"Oh okay! Yeah, I've played since I was 5 also. I played with Zeke and Uriah all the time when we were younger. So, what's your next class?"

"I have band, what about you?"

"I do too. Would you maybe want to walk with me?"

"Sure, that'd be great actually."

With that we walk off to band. It turns out that we both play the trombone, and are the only two in our class. We are in the Symphony band, which is the middle band at our school. The class goes by quickly, and we just play some songs for fun so the teacher, Ms. Reyes, can figure out where we are at as a band. The bell rings and Four helps me put away my stuff. He asks me for my cell phone and adds himself as a contact. Four offers to show me to my 4th period and I agree. After we reach my class, he says goodbye and shuffles off to his next class.

4th period also goes by quickly. It's English with Christina, Marlene, and Uriah. I couldn't stop laughing the whole time because Uri and Mar wouldn't stop joking around. Christina and I just sat there and laughed at them as I was also texting Four the whole class.

A/N: Tell me all what you think and thank you so much for reading my story! Hope this is better than the first time I wrote it! Please comment, review, and follow!

Be Brave Initiates,
Rach