this is kind of my first story don't say why okay, just don't say it I would like some constructive criticism, NO FLAME so let get started
p.s. tell me if I made mistake in my grammar.
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okay we start on a lovely evening at the crystal gem place everyone is bored out of their mind
"garnet do we have a mission yet. I'm bored out of my mind"," I'm with shorty here" said Steven with amethyst putting her two cent in as well.
''we are just going to have to wait guy".
then all of a sudden they here a great big roar making them get excited
all of a sudden pearl came in.
"guy there a boy getting attacked by a crystal sea monster".
"YES! a mission", Steven said as they left out the door.
suddenly they became shock to see that the kid was dodging all of the monster attacks.
"how is that possible no mere mortal should be able to dodge that kind of stuff" garnet said.
the boy turn to look at them not realizing a tail of slime was coming straight for but, when they told him to watch out he already got burned.
what shocked them more is that he got right back up shaking it off like it was nothing with his shirt off making the three girl crystal blush.
then his shoulders started glowing blinding them but when the light died down they could two diamond on his shoulders and two gun in each of his hand making them go wide eye at the sight