Ok this ain't an actual chapter so once I'm back on track it's gonna go. First I want to thank Mecha Scorpion. The first two chapters were probably the worst things I ever wrote so the only reason I put them up is to see if people liked them or not. Because it was obviously not I'm gonna either
A) Re-write them with a plot and no script format.
Or
B) Never re-write them but take some of the ideas from them and put them in new chapters.
As for ToTAL INSANiTy 3 I will rewrite it without script format as fast as I can. And Pokizard, as much as I thank you for standing up for me, flames are completely welcome for they help me become a better writer and get rid of any previous mistakes. Anyways I hope you will enjoy anything I come up with soon and find the re-written version of story 3 to your liking. Thanks for your continuing to read and I hope you guys review more often.