The Entrance of the Blood Princess
Doors open reveal a decrepit throne room. The walls seem to be slowing dieing and in such agony it almost flows to those in the room.
A man walks forward to the woman sitting on the throne with a somewhat displeased look about her. He stopped about 5 paces away then took a knee. "My mistress," he begun. "You requested my presents?"
"We are alone here there is no reason to be so formal," she responded in a depressed tone. "Zeif, you are my most trusted chevalier. And because..."
"I know, and because of that we can never truly be together. But I promise you that not matter what happens I will stay by your side," he finished. "Lets not talk about sad thing. I never want to see unhappy ever. So what was it you wished to speak to me in private about?"
She gets up and walks to the gaping hole behind the throne and looks over the desolate wasteland that was once a thriving forests and meadows with abundate wildlife. "This no longer suits me. It is about time for a change. We need a world lush with life and magical energies." she states.
"So you merely wish for me to go and let the doyen know that they need to search for the next world for us to take the life energies from. Why not have a courier deliever the message?" he inquired.
She said, "Because their company isn't as ple..." Zeif interrupted signaling for her to be quite as he reached for his sword on his waist.
He shouted out to the unknown intruder, "Come out where I can see you or be cut down where you stand."
This is still a work in progess. I am publishing this so I can get some feedback on it.
Now for some info about the race and the 2 charaters introduced so far.
I have yet to come up with a name for the race suggestion welcomed. They are a vampiric race in every since of the word. When they drink blood of an enemy it is to gain the strenght of the person, relative to the amount of blood drunk. But when it is done between two friends it is viewed as an intimate act. They are mostly nomadic going from one world to another draining the various energies from each turning them into a lifeless rock. They do not bother building their own houses or forts but instead live in the houses of the enemies that they defeat sometimes not even bothering to repair them if they was damaged during the invasion.
Zeif: He is the third stongest of the Elite Royal Guard Invasion Force. Though not being the strongest he is the most skilled with a blade. He carries one blade on his waist and he sees it fit he will generate another sword from his own blood. He and share feelings for eachother but due to his low soical status they are not allowed to express their love. Though he hates seeing the princess unhappy he will not let her give up her royal status for them to be able to be together.
Chidaruma(The Princess): She is the second child out of three. Her younger brother died was killed by an assassin during a recent invasion which cause her older sister to train hard and eventually become the Supreme Field Comander. So far she is the only one of her race to be able to drain a world's energy en mass and distrube it amongst her people.
That basicly it for now. I have 2 ideas for how this pans out. And although I like their names I am thinking about changing them to something else. Any ideas or thoughts you have I will gladly read and reply. Once again please post a review.