Regular talking: What an odd color.
Dialog human: "What the hell are you doing idiot?!"
Thoughts: what an idiot?
demon speech: You have no chance human!
demon thoughts: This human is stupid.
Chapter One: The second son
The Yondaime stood breathing hard as he prepared to seal the dark half of Kyuubi within his son Menma. He had spent most of his chakra sealing the light half into Naruto before he began the process of forcing dark Kyuubi into his younger son . 10 minutes later, Minato fell to his knees and said: Its done, i hope that they can see you as the heroes you two are before Shinigami took his soul. The Sandaime rushed into the sealing area soon after and spotted the two newborns, one with Minato's blond hair and the other with hair as black as night.
The two were placed in separate homes, as the Sandaime wished to avoid causing the two halves of Kyuubi to act up. He planned to get both of them started on training when they turned 4 but a message from Jiraiya stopped him. The toads had summoned him to Mount Myoboku hours before the birth of Menma and Naruto. Menma's birth had changed the prophecy from it's original state.
Two Uzumaki shall be born, one of light and one of dark, one will change this world for better but fail where it matters most, and the other will bring chaos and change to the world alone or with the others help. One with the power of a light demon and the other with a dark demon, shall fight to determine the worlds fate , will it forever drown in hate or will they make peace rain?
The Sandaime ordered the two boys never be told of the others existence until the two were ready to fulfill their purpose. Naruto was announced as the Yondaime's son and was treated as a hero while Menma slowly became the target of the villagers. They saw him as the Kyuubi and made his life hell for six long years, until one day they went too far. This is the story of two brothers destined to change their world and destined to fight each other.
End of Chapter one.
Next time on Menma child of chaos , Menma's tormentors go way too far and he finally snaps.
The next chapter will be much longer than this , i would say about 3k words.