The Revenge Of The Betrayed
Chapter 1
Flashback from the past
Here is my new story and 'a year in kalos high' isn't stopping I just having trouble with chapter it doesn't seem right so I'm redoing it I know it and also be aware I do have school so slower updates. I know it seems a lot like 'The betrayed rises' but it will change completely after this. It's just that, that story first chapter really motivated me and I want to write my own spin off of the story so please no flame and if you read the 'The betrayed rises' my story will continue on further so the credit goes to LegionZ the creator of 'The betrayed rises' so I do want you guys to check it out. Also it is a M rated for language and sexual scenes.
It was cold and windy at the top of Mount Silver, located between the Johto and Kanto Region. But something else was even colder, the mind of Ash Ketchum on February 12th, which happened to be the exact date when this story starts. He was 6 foot 1 inches tall,and had became built like a god but didn't notice the only person who did was May his best friend and secretly had a crush no it was more she was in love with Ash and had been for a while. She had blue sapphire eye and a light brown wavy hair that now went to her shoulders and still had her bandanna on but she had different colours of it like blue, red and green, this happened because during the years her had became more and more stylish. She had blossomed into a beautiful young women with D cup sized breasts (not double D's just D) and her ass had became much bigger.
Ash was standing at the summit of the mountain, staring out into the clouds.
He was calmly thinking about the event that had occurred 5 years prior, when a particular beautiful brunette with a yellow mouse Pokémon on her shoulder ran over to him. The Pokémon and May knew exactly what ash was thinking of.
Are you thinking about that day Ash?" Pikachu asked the small yellow mouse Pokémon.
Ash let out a sigh and said to his trusted partner " Yeah, I am buddy. I just can't believe it's been 5 years since we left."
(this is happening though they minds because Ash is the chosen one so May can't actually tell what they're saying.)
Don't worry about it Ash, it was the right thing to do, I didn't see it coming either because neither of us thought they would betray us." Pikachu reassured him.
" I know buddy, it's been a training-filled 5 years huh? It just seems like yesterday that we were in the finals of the Horen league…"
*Flashback*
It was the finals of the Horen league. The fans were roaring as the Pokémon on the field below were giving it all they had. Each trainer was down to their final Pokémon, and it looked like it was about to end.
"now Lapras use blizzard !" A girl called across the arena.
"Charizard you gotta get out of there!" A boy called desperately back to his badly injured Pokémon.
But it was too late. The effective ice-type attack smashed into the fire type causing it to faint, ending the battle and the Horen league final.
Charizard is unable to battle, Lapras wins! And the Victor of the Horen League 2016 is Izzy ward!"
As she and her fans let out cries of joy, the boy was just sitting there, dumbstruck that once again, he had gone so far into a league and fell just short. But he still smiled prod of what he had done during the whole league.
Just a few days later, he arrived Back in Kanto form a ferry with his best friend May, who had cheerwd him on during the league. They walked to Pallet Town,once they reached there they saw his home. Ash Ketchum looked down at the place he called home for his whole life. Slowly, a grin spread across his face, and he said to the Pokémon on his shoulder, "Come on Pikachu, let's go home." And with that, he took off for his house but before he could May jumped on his back and simply said "what I'm tired" while blushing.
"Last one they doesnt get any food"about a minute later they all burst the door open, he shouted: "Mum, I'm back and May is with me!" And he was quite surprised when he felt someone grab him from behind and give him a bone-crushing hug. Ash knew exactly who it was and managed to get out: "Mum you're embassing me" and with slight hesitation Delia Ketchum released it."It's so great to see you again sweetie and you too May, I must say you have got even more beautiful and Professor Oak said he wanted to see you two at his lab for something." Delia said while smiling at them.
he replied."Thanks Mom! I'm gonna go right now, so I'll be back soon!" as he sprinted back out the door to go to the Pokemon Lab leaving a dust trail behind as May just sighed.
"so how long have you liked him for?"Delia asks out of the blue. This cause May's sapphire blue eye's to widen.
Back to Ash
As he got nearer and nearer to the laboratory, he felt his excitement increasing to see his Pokémon, as it always did. Like what he did at his home, he burst open the door of the laboratory, and was surprised to see nobody there even to welcome him. After a few seconds of thinking, he decided that they were waiting out back for him. Sure enough, he sprinted to the back where his Pokémon were supposed to be, and they were all back there, strangely all sitting by his friends from his previous regions, which was what he didn't expect. He was cheerful by this, thinking his friends were here to greet him, and said to them: "Hey guys, did you all come here to see me?"
Brock was the first to say anything, and it wasn't good:"Actually Ash, we have something else we want to talk to you about."
He was speaking in a harsh manner; one that Ash had never heard brock ever speak with. Ash looked confused, but that turned to worry when he saw all of his other friends there, but he noticed a few were absent, which included May, Gary, and a few others. But his attention quickly was diverted back to the issue at hand, which he wasn't sure what the issue was just yet. But Misty quickly dismissed that thought:
Ash," She began, "Look, we have traveled with you, and we have decided that you aren't good enough to win any kind of tournament or league or whatever!" Cilan added: "With that said, we think you're kinda pathetic and should give up on that dream like come on it's never gonna happen."
Ash looked stung and surprised, but what really made him surprised was what he asked next: "S-so...you all f-feel this way you CUNTS?" He asked in a painful voice.
After a few seconds, Iris finally said: "Yes Ash, we all do." Paul added to that with a sigh: "You're always screwing things up for us, getting into mischief, and you are quite impolite at meal times on top of all that!"
He then looked around and saw everyone nodding in agreement. He looked at all of them, with tears slowly forming in his eyes, and said in a roaring voice: "I'M NEVER GOING TO JUST GIVE UP ON THAT DREAM JUST BECAUSE YOU ALL THINK IT'S WORTHLESS!" He took a couple breaths then continued " AND TO THINK HOW MANY THIMES I HAVE SAVED YOU!"
After that, there was a moment of silence, until finally, Misty said: "Well Ash, now you have a choice. Give up on your dream of becoming a Pokémon master, or loose you friends for good." Ash didn't need any considering options after what he was going through. With tears streaming down his cheeks in large amounts he said: "I choose my dream over you traitors!" He then turned to his Pokémon, and his heart fell even more.
There in front of him, almost all his Pokémon stood with angry looks on their faces. The only exceptions were Infernape, Charizard, Sceptile, and Lucario. They stood glaring at those who opposed them, Pikachu among them, who was still on Ash's shoulder. The ones that still were with Ash walked over to him with smiles on their faces. Ash then smiled at them, still crying slightly. He said: "Thanks guys." He returned them all, and with one last glare at the group, he said to them: "I'll be back, more powerful than ever, and every one of you will regret betraying me!" And he sprinted away, back towards the lab, and in midstride, called out Charizard and flew away.
But before he could get high May saw him and waved her arms to get his attention after he flew down to his house and said goodbye to Delia without saying anything else he left a crying mother and went on Charizard but, before he could leave he felt a hand on his shoulder. It was May "hey leaving without me I saw what happened and I'm coming with you" she said with her pretty smile.
He replied with "yeah...thers's always room for my best friend. If you don't think I'm a failure"
This saddened her but she just hugged him because they both knew he needed it, after that with out any other word they left on his Charizard.
Ash shook his head at the memory of the betrayal. He had re-traveled the regions with May, getting more Pokémon and becoming stronger by every second aswell as having the time of his life with his best friend. He wasn't sure if he wanted to return, but he knew he had to gain his revenge. And that opportunity had been given to him as he had earlier received a letter that stated:
Dear Red,
Due to your excellence in recent events, you have been formally invited to the Pokemon Tournament of the Century, the Tournament of tournament will be held on March , of the current year. If you wish to attend.To participate, please go to Lake Valor in the Sinnoh Region to enter. Only the best are allowed to participate, so please consider entering. I thank you for reading this letter and hope you consider entering the tournament.
Yours Truly, AdavancedMayAsh (ohhhh om god I'm in in a story...I'm like famous jkjk)
Pikachu decided this would be a good time to ask Ash about just that and said to him:
Ash mused this over for a few minutes, Pikachu all the time still watching his trainer. After a bit, Ash stopped walking, smirked a little and said to May:
"Why don't we ask the gang what they think?" Pikachu smiled at his trainer, and May just nodded she was surprisingly quite today and they both sprinted back to their summit cave, where Ash's Pokémon were either resting, practice battling, or doing something else like playing poker somehow.
"HEY EVERYONE!" Ash yelled at the top of his lungs.
All his Pokémon got out from whatever they were doing and went over to Ash, who was standing there with a look of determination on his face, one that none of them had ever seen before since the day he was betrayed as he swore revenge on those who did betray him.
"We got a letter from not too long ago, and he has invited us to a very important competition! It's apparently called the Tournament of Legends, and I think we should enter it! I need your opinion right now, DO YOU THINK WE SHOULD ENTER THIS CONTEST!?" He roared the last part, trying to rile up his team. His team gave their designated cries back in return, giving him the proof he needed that he should come out of hiding to enter this tournament.
"Alright, guys, the tournament isn't for another 3 months, so I say we train until maybe 2 weeks prior to the tournament. Are you all with me?!" Ash yelled the last part like before. The Pokémon cried out one last time and all cheered.
'Yes it's finally time to get the revenge that we deserve'. Ash thought mentally.
Day of Betrayal…Gary's POV…1 person
(POV)
I was walking into the lab when I saw Ash flying away on his Charizard, and I was even more surprised when he didn't stop at his house, just kept flying until he was out of sight. I was a little worried because I knew Ash had just gotten back, why was he leaving already? I then proceeded to go to the backyard where Ash's Pokémon were supposed to be kept. I was just about to walk through the already open door when I heard somebody, a male definitely, say in a harsh tone, "I can't believe he didn't listen to us. He's pretty worthless and he sure can't battle." I instantly recognized the voice as Max, Ash's good friend.
I couldn't help but wonder what was going on, but then I heard Misty say: "Ash can't even win a tournament to save his life. He probably cheated to get through the Orange Islands." Now, after hearing what Misty said, other people were agreeing with them, I could easily guess who they were, I could guess what happened.
It was Ash's 'friends' and they had done something wrong to him. So, I made myself known. I walked through the door and yelled at them, "HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM? ASH HAS DONE SO MUCH FOR YOU AND THIS IS HOW YOU REPAY HIM?" I continued to yell at them in anger. After about 30 seconds of yelling, I realized that I was the only one who probably was going to know about the betrayal. So, I left them there with my words, hopefully stuck in their minds. Sighing, I knew I had to tell my dad and Ash's mom. Sure enough, my dad seemed dumbstruck, and Ash's mom started crying, and not shortly after demanded to speak with each of the betrayers parents. I gave each name calmly and slowly, the ones that had been new faces to me I had asked my dad for their names and thier parents phone numbers.
Brock's 363-856-5634
Misty's 256-325-1234
Max's 876-457-9327
Paul's 134-343-4325
Iris's 834-014-9300
Cilan's 234-654-5632
I left the Ketchum house pretty pissed off. As I wondered where Ash currently was, and what he currently was doing…
3 days after betrayal…May's house… (back in to third POV)
Max opened the door walked though it thinking 'great now I need to explain May has ran a way to Mum and Dad'
Max, still sitting there on the chair, looked at his parents and saw mainly two things, disappointment, and anger. Mrs. Maple was the first to regain her voice, after about 2 minutes of sitting quietly. She said quietly: "Max, you are grounded from leaving this house for 1 month, and are grounded from training your Pokémon for the rest of this year. CLEARLY, you cannot be trusted to be off on your own." She said somewhat angry, and disappointed. Max a sweat droplet appeared on his forehead ( like the TV show) at the first punishment, and the second punishment had only doubled the length his jaw had fell.
Norman just sat there, still too stunned to move. Mrs. Maple left the room shaking her head. Max still sat there, waiting to see what his dad had to say. But instead of exploding, he did something much worse in his opinion. He talked slowly, and very quietly.
He started with: "Do you know how much that boy meant to May? She's loved him quite some time now.You've just shattered her chances Max, I think further punishment should be included. Go up to your room and think about what you have done to Ash and May. They have both ran away because of you and his other fake friends " Norman concluded.
Back to present day Ash and May
"well anyways, who needs them they betrayed the very best Pokémon, you was just learning trainer and...heck if you did win any of those leagues you would be the youngest ever Pokémon league!"May took a couple of breaths then continued " when you return you'll will have no trouble beating them at all epically when you have how many legendaries now?" as May finish she gave him a warm friendly hug.
End of chapter one
A little sneak peak into chapter two there if you can think buti would like PM's or review on idea for pokémon for him to have catched in the last five year I would like 3 more legendaries because I've got a couple of ideas for a few and as many normals as you guys like. This is end of chapter one what do you think guys. Rate, review and no flame but until next time *dab it out*