Kyuubi: HEY!!! I'm not that bad now am I?
Ed: Oh, I don't know, does not updating in over what? 2,3,4 months not mean bad?
Kyuubi:...IT'S NOT MY FAULT!!! My half-brother lost my notebook that had my stories all in it
and it's still at my dad's in ARKANSAS and I'm in INDIANA!!! PLUS I haven't told them about it
yet...
Ed:...What if it's at your house? Have you checked yet?
Kyuubi:...(shifty eyes)Of course I have!!!
Ed:And by that you mean no?
Kyuubi:ANYWAYS on with the story.
Ed:Kyuubi does NOT own Fullmetal Alchemist or any of the Characters. (EXCEPT FOR THE REPORTERS!!!)So don't sue.
Kyuubi: I might own it in some crappy alternate universe or something like that but not in this one!
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"talking"
'thinking'
(author notes)
JEALOUSY
Chapter one: I did it for you Al!
(Okay you know that episode where Al and Ed come running up to the house with the horse-like dogs or crap like that? WELL I thought WHY DID ED'S HAVE THAT CRAPPY TAIL???He's better than that!So I thought that it was like this! This is also AU...Trisha still died but they didn't do the human transmutation crap so Al isn't in the armor and Ed has all his limbs.They also didn't become State Alchemists.)
A short man was walking through the city streets, it was dreadful out there too! One of those storms that you wouldn't leave a puppy out in no matter what.(I do know someone cruel enough to actually leave one out too!) He was lost in thought and didn't even seem to notice the storm.
'Alu...I did it for you...how come it came to this? You probably hate me now...but at least you were happy.'
(I don't have to describe him do I? You probably already know by know! Ed: Just do it!) The young man had golden hair in a braid that looked like it should have been on an angel. He had amber eyes with a knowledgeble look to them. (How do you get that kind of look anyway?) He wore leather pants with a black t-shirt. He had a black leather coat over him too, then he had ANOTHER coat, this one red with a snake-cross on it's back, and last two white gloves on his hands. His shoeswere black as well.
(Do I really have to say this? I mean if you can't guess who it is already then your just plain retarded!
Alright) The young man was known as Edward Elric. He had run away after his outburst at the press conference for his little brother(Do I need to?) Alphonse Elric. He didn't plan on ever going back either.
'I shouldn't have done it...but I couldn't take it anymore...I was so envious of you Al...you had everything I wanted. Why can't things go back to before?'
He remembered a time when he and Al would laugh and talk together while studying alchemy.
'Alchemy...I used to love it...now I hate it. It tore us apart... I thought you could take fame, I really did. Guess you couldn't.'
He remembered when it all first started...they had been studying alchemy again, this time doing experiments.
He noticed how he had always made something perfect while Alphonse had made something bad. He would always look sad when presenting them to their mother, as if he was ashamed of it.
Then he came up with a plan for his brother. That's where the trouble first began... He remembered running up to his mother with Al right behind them metal dog in hand...that's when it all began.
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Kyuubi:So did anyone like it? Please click the little button at the bottom of the page to review! AND IF YOU CRITICIZE WRITE WHY!!!!
Ed:(reading) Wow I didn't even wonder why that happened...has anyone even wrote about this?
Kyuubi:Yeah one person! It was a good one too, it was where Al felt down and Trisha told him a story and it cheered him up. If anyone knows the story name or author tell me! I liked it very much and I would recommend other people reading it too!!!
Ed:Kyuubi noticed how some people started their stories out at the end and then went to the beggining. So she's trying it. Tell her if she's good or not too! READ AND REVIEW PLEASE!!!